I Saw You Come

1. The title and introduction of the book are both good, especially the introduction is very interesting, but it is a little too long and looks a bit tiring 2. The writing style is very good and has an ancient feel. 3. The image of the heroine is well portrayed, and I call the author 4. The writing is quite comfortable. Big boost code words

Collected, read slowly, keep at it, welcome to visit again!

After briefly reading the first few chapters, as an old bookworm, I would like to say a few words. ٩('ω')و The author's writing style is very good, and this style of writing is very suitable for writing ancient Chinese. The description is also very visual, and the characters are described in a few words. Of course, there are many advantages besides this. Since there are too many advantages, I will not go into details here 😜 The fly in the ointment is that I personally feel that the author pays too much attention to description and is relatively slow to develop the plot. It's not that writing like this is not good, but it may not be suitable for the fast-paced reading of today's online articles. In fact, some complicated descriptions can be deleted appropriately. Finally, I strongly recommend that the author use less commas. If there are only commas in a paragraph, it may be a bit tiring for the reader to read.        emmm， (ง •̀_•́)ง

In three chapters, too many characters appear. The main plot is not obvious and the plot is a bit bland. Your writing style is good. Well... I, a man like me, don't usually read romance. I can't explain it in detail. Keep up the good work!

It's good to read, don't stop, collect it, please give me a lot of support from the author, let's make progress together!

The writing is good, I look forward to the plot development. It should be on the shelves soon, right?

Hehe, the introduction looks really interesting. The plot, background, etc. Are well described. Keep up the good work~

The writing is very good, received!

From the group~ Come on!