A Punch in the Sky

After reading Chapter 7, there are a few flaws, but they are not very bad. Overall a bit smoother. But after about three months, I accepted a disciple, practiced Taoism for one month, and practiced the true art for half a month. 3 O'clock a day. A total increase of 320? ? ? Maybe I didn't understand. If you write too much data, you need to be more rigorous. And it's still written as an upgrade flow. I've seen a pretty good one about One Punch Man before, One Punch Justice. But that's a fan.

I really can't think of any good comments and ask the author to give me more details. What should I do? I'm waiting online urgently.

It's not an invincible stream at the beginning. Friends who are interested can check it out.

The contract is being signed, please invest!

I don't know why Uncle Jiu is the first player in the world. Is he really the skill instructor of Novice Village? There are also two characters, Qiu Sheng, a literary talent, who are full of flaws. These two people were completely villains in the Republic of China era. In that era, how could an apprentice contradict his master and talk nonsense all day long? That is to say, during the filming of the movie, these two people were positioned as funny characters. Otherwise, they would have behaved like this and they would have been beaten to death by the master. After reading ten chapters, I couldn't stand it any longer. All kinds of extra scenes were forced on me. Author, you may be a newbie and follow the routine, but the old routine will become poisonous.

According to incomplete statistics from the Time Travel Administration, the busiest life mentors are as follows. Taoism Department Novice Village Chief Jiu Shu Martial Arts Department Novice Village Chief Yongchun Ye Wen, Deputy Village Chief Foshan Huang Fei Hong Western World Novice Village Hell's Kitchen, Novice Village Mayor Shit Deputy Village Chief Reptile Spider Martial Arts Department Santa Claus Shaolin Traitor Fire Foreman Tuo, the leader of the Xiaoyao Sect Men Wuyazi, the master of the Lingbi Palace, Tianshan Tonglao, etc. This does not include the peerless beauties whose husbands are all over the endless planes The mysterious little pill in Never Ending and the mysterious meteorite in Super Out of Control made countless protagonists smile confidently.

I couldn't stand it after reading ten chapters. It was so addictive and the plot was so forced that it made my scalp numb.

To be fair, there is only one attribute in the real world. Physical fitness is the key point... Strength is the attack. Give you more than 10,000 strength and you will die if you hit yourself. What's the use...

Infinite Streaming Your entire "finding true love" mission... Is really unique. True love, what's the point? Is it good to see the protagonist hitting a wall? Is it good to see the main character boxing? Is it fun to watch the protagonist's journey from world to world? None! Anyway, I don't like the protagonist having sex or anything like that.

I put my words here! This book must be a eunuch, but the book is not a eunuch!

Just because of the name Long Yiquan, I can't stand it.

Personally, I suggest that there should be no novel worlds like Dou Po and Dou Luo! It's annoying to see those authors who write fan fiction! (Personal opinion)