Fantasy Comes to Another World

Dark flow is just dark flow, just a method or approach. But the character of the protagonist is too unreal and inexplicably lolicon, like a two-dimensional male protagonist and a fantasy plot spliced ​​together. It makes people feel that there is a bit of a drama. For example, some authors are afraid of 404 and will mention it in a voiceover in the book. Some supreme beasts, like high-dimensional inspectors, will seriously mess up. If they are afraid, continental shelf modification, historical manipulation, and map erasure will not work. , The voiceover is too dramatic. I don't hate otaku, what I hate is chaos, matcha-flavored ice cream with stinky tofu, and soy sauce added to the cream cake. In the romance drama, there is someone named Wan Jian Gui Zong, and Bai Kong will never lose in Wan Jian Gui Zong. If not necessary, do not add entities. It is recommended that the author improve the purity and be purer, because the first few chapters are not suitable for a hodgepodge of painting styles. The Seven Heroes of Rainbow Cat, Blue Rabbit and Tom and Jerry are very good-looking, but if they are mixed together, it will just be electronic garbage ps: The painting styles in the next few chapters are mixed, usually the performance of the male protagonist in the daily anime type, and other times, it mixes the animation style with a certain fantasy realism, which makes me look very entangled. I wish the author to write better and better

To be honest, this book is quite good in terms of script. If it were made into an anime, it might be liked by many people. However, when this book appears in the novel category, it seems very poisonous. After all, we can only rely on imagination to understand it. The picture is not very good, so that in many places, the enthusiasm of the anime cannot be felt, only the awkward feeling. I haven't finished it yet. But with my six years of experience, I will continue reading. After all, there are still many interesting things in it. In terms of rating, I would rate it between six and seven.

The author read my comments, read my comments, read my comments and say important things three times. The protagonist should have distinctive characteristics and charisma. I prefer protagonists with leadership qualities. They can be dark but must be dark. Even if you do bad things, you must have a noble reason. For example, I kill for the world, and I beat you to cultivate you. Just like the protagonists in "The Heroes of the Eastern Han Dynasty" and "One Piece: Dark General". I am not recommending any more books. Note that I am not recommending books. The protagonists in these two novels have distinct leadership qualities, with both darkness and light. This kind of character is the most attractive. Well, that's all I have to say. Brothers who can read it, no matter what your opinion is, thank you for taking my point of view seriously.

Helped the author to send flowers and recommended it in the book list. Please give it a boost.

Please add more, it's too little, not enough!

I finally understand why I don't have a sense of empathy, because I'm not sharp. The protagonist gave the impression that he was forced to become a black man, and he suddenly became a black man. At first, I thought it was a problem with his career, but later I didn't realize that his career had any influence on it. Moreover, the protagonist's experience did not involve a blackening process at all. It was like a sudden onset of a mental illness.

When I first read the author's explanation of the protagonist's three views, I was thinking about dark literature. It's not like I haven't read it before, and then I was taught by the author to be a human being. Sure enough, the three views are abnormal, but there is a better description. I haven't graduated from middle school, and my world view and values ​​have not yet matured. I just have the mentality of a child.

It was good before Chapter 39. After the Reborn appeared, I felt that the protagonist was a schizophrenic middle schooler. And when faced with the killer who was deceived by the Reborn prophecy and wanted to kill the protagonist, he actually let him go, and the real person came to treat him afterwards. It was really poisonous.

The first dozen chapters are extremely poisonous. How did you keep reading and still bragging? . .

It's too poisonous. Such a good advantage is killing me. There are so many failures and you can't win. It's too leaky!

This pig's trotters started killing people randomly for no reason This is not the case with decisive killings.

The front is okay. After the time traveler and reincarnation came out, there is nothing to watch anymore. It's a mess. Congratulations on entering my S B group.

Another thing is that the impression of the protagonist I wrote before is that at first glance, he has the aura of a high-ranking leader and is unsmiling. What next? What happened to the sudden advancement? For a moment, I thought: How many centimeters shorter are the characters in the two-dimensional Japanese comics? What are you writing about?