All Heavens Gu Raising Simulator

After reading the second scene, what can I say about the writing of the second scene? The description is too desperate. I can say that I have never skipped a chapter after reading novels for so many years, but I skipped it later in your scene... The scene where the protagonist comes into contact is too mysterious, and the opponent he faces is too strong, which makes the protagonist appear very weak. This is a big mistake for online novels. You have to be sure of what stage and what powerful enemies the protagonist will face. The enemy's strength cannot be too high, otherwise the protagonist will be very weak. But it can't be too low, otherwise it will be very white and monotonous. For example, the enemy you wrote this time faced a protagonist who was far more powerful than the protagonist, and the opponent got the upper hand at the beginning, so the protagonist was very passive... In fact, I felt the same way when you wrote the first world, but the first world was relatively short and passed in a flash, while the second scene was too long, and it was hard to get through at once, and it was not fun at all. The plot arrangement still needs polishing, you need to arrange more to make it more enjoyable. There's nothing wrong with the writing. It is enough to write a book at the starting point.

After reading the second chapter, I decided not to read it. I was really speechless with many questions. This system is probably the kind of Lord God. Then you say that in a world where you work hard for only 100 or 200 people, a small ninjutsu in your trading hall dares to quote 70, and you have no idea about the economy? The protagonist has such an epic battle and there are only so few rewards. Do you think it is reasonable? How many people can we meet at the very beginning? Unfortunately, a lot of people have been discouraged here. Also, explore the world and explore the world. The system is for people to explore the world. As a result, there is no reward for the exploration degree above 10%. It's a world, but it's useless to explore. I understand that you have to enjoy yourself while sitting, but it's a thankless job. Just look at the display of the degree. What's the use? Real dedication and Who is the reader who buys the disproportionate gains? Moreover, your golden finger and Gu box are just Black Feng reminding you to have multiple eyes. What's the use? It's been two chapters and you haven't even opened the second one. There is no sense of existence. Sixty boxes have to wait for you to open them. Even if you open them with the same difficulty, how long will it take? Uh-huh? Or will it be relatively easy for the protagonist to become stronger in the future? But as you are so abusive to the protagonist and suppress the protagonist, you can find things for the protagonist and not let him grow. I really think you are just writing it for fun. No wonder there are so few collections, alas

Raising Gu, where is the Gu raised? The content and title don't match!

That first-person live broadcast is really poisonous. I was persuaded to quit by the first-person perspective live broadcast. Very good subject matter. Added outdated games and streams. I'm really bored and don't want to watch it.

The writing is incomprehensible and incomprehensible

The author's writing is okay, but I feel that the title of the book is not very good and looks like a novel.

This is my first fully ordered novel. It's very interesting. All that's missing is an opportunity. The writing is very strong and the writing style is also very good. I hope the author can update it more.

New book for newcomers, I hope everyone will collect it and give more recommendation votes

It's so mind-numbing, it's so weird.

I think it's just an opinion. You can either focus on Cthulhu's terrifying struggle, or focus on character upgrading. Don't try to do both, as that would seem to have insufficient plot conflict and insufficient horror.

Come on (´-ω-`)

The Douluo Dalu fanfic written by the author is very good, keep up the good work

I just want to ask where my Gu went.

I'm wondering if the author is short of containment objects (abnormalities) If so, can he open a building dedicated to containing (bai) and (piao)?

Are there any issues with the recent chapters?

The writing and plot are both very good, and it also has a little humor. The hardest thing for a newbie is to persevere at the beginning. This writing style will always have its day, come on💪

The writing should be pretty good, but it's a bit tiring to read⊙⊙

The writing is really good, and the characters are very fleshed out. The only drawback is that the ending is hasty. I personally feel that the atmosphere of the book is very depressing. The author probably didn't want to continue to create this feeling for the readers, so he ended it hastily.

I like reading novels like this, but the ending feels too sudden 😰. At the penultimate chapter, I was wondering if there was more to the book, but I found the ending after looking for the next one.

Is it a combination of Lobotomy Corporation and the Foundation?