Escape from the Wasteland

Miss, I came here to read the dubbing. How come I saw your dubbing in Mr. Pei's place recently (maybe because I haven't caught up to the latest chapter yet) I read this book a little earlier. The writing is very comfortable, but the plot is too poisonous! The logic of the story is very far-fetched. The small poisonous spots are densely packed, and the big poisonous spots are also numerous. For example, the base has a very high-end intelligent system, which proves that the level of human science and technology is still very high. But what is the role of this technology? If the base is destroyed, use it to call people to collect the corpses. I see that you are particularly concerned about collecting corpses, but in such a cruel wilderness background, collecting corpses is just an extravagant hope, an extravagant hope that does not conform to the rules of nature. The investigation process by people from another base was very God's perspective, and the reasoning was completely untenable. For example, seeing uneaten claws reminds me that there are still people alive, and seeing the poisoned protagonist reminds me of various things about male and female snakes. It is difficult to say that there is any logic in it. Besides, a snake doesn't have much meat. The protagonist goes out to hunt a snake at the beginning so that the base can sustain two meals? And it is completely impossible for an entire base to only send one young man out for hunting. If the base had not been invaded, they would definitely not be able to survive according to their hunting methods. If you want to provide food for the people in a base, you must at least have a complete hunting group to hunt medium and large animals, right? For example, burning a person into ashes requires ultra-high temperature for a long time. Cutting off a person with a dagger and cremating it is no different from dismembering or dismembering the body. The spaceship can cure most diseases but cannot cure the venom of the spotted snake at the bottom of the food chain. There are too many poisonous spots! At present, most of the works that are doing well in Qidian are novices, which are routine and template-based works. There are many classic poisonous points in them, but only those classic poisonous points. Because it is used more, the degree of completion will be higher and the poison points will be less. Innovative themes like yours are prone to poisonous points. If your book is positioned as an online text, then it is difficult for me to read a book whose logic is confusing and unclear. If you want to write it online first and then transfer it to a physical book, then the writing style is indeed okay, but the logic is not good at all. I wish you the best as you write.

How did you write these 160,000 words? It's so awesome! 666👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

What kind of bull demon are you writing about? Write it better.

This introduction reminds me of the wasteland

Full of desire for freedom Full of longing for the future This book is the most beautiful book I have ever seen in my life

I've invested, come on, even though I'm just practicing my hand speed, I still hope to sign the contract😏

Do you have a book group? I want to add one

The writing style seems quite comfortable and the writing strength is okay 🙂