
Trial Period in Progress
试用期进行中
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 660k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Time Travel
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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301Chapters
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I originally thought it was okay after reading the introduction, but I didn't read it. Today I came in with a blinded face and went out with a blinded face. Author, can you write a preface? Otherwise, write two more sentences of introduction. The background is unclear, the goal is unclear, and there is almost no guidance for newbies. Can you give me a few words of explanation? The protagonist doesn't have Feng Bujue's IQ and ability to overwhelm him, so why not at least give him a narration? Personally, I feel like the protagonist doesn't know anything, and he knows a little bit but doesn't say anything. The reader is confused. This is not a detective novel, and you don't need to compete with readers. Even a detective novel must have the most basic clues, giving readers the same clues as the protagonist, and the same traces to follow. Every line you draw out later should find foreshadowing in the front. For example, in a certain episode of Conan, all the characters and the audience were guessing who the murderer was. In the end, it was revealed that the murderer was Luffy next door. This was very stupid. I read Chapter 16, and I only know that this is a world of female broadcasters, and the protagonist should be a subordinate employee of an organization similar to the Lord God Space Xiling Empire. Then what? From the beginning to the end, I can't even find the simplest plot chain. The constant new scenes and characters give people the impression that it is something you write as soon as you scratch your head. You write whatever comes to mind, and you forget about the first day when you write it the next day. It looks very tiring, and there are too many meaningless things.
Little slut, I'll look at you hard when I get off work
If you dub your own novel, I will read it
Be the first
Come on, author ↖(^ω^)↗, am I the first? Please improve! ! !
I didn't understand it after reading three chapters, and I felt like my intelligence was insulted 😭
There are too few people, so let me comment for you. Comment on what? How about wishing you a happy May Day in advance?
... My classmate's name is Cheng Cheng, or cc for short...
Come on, boss↖(^ω^)↗
Does the boss still write books? Or have you given up?
What's the point of this endless beginning? I went to Baidu based on Xu Kai's name to find out what it was. I was a little confused when I saw it.
I haven't read the novel₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑But I voted for the monthly vote. Am I a licker?
The name of each chapter has seven characters😂😂😂
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