An Ideal Land, Cut Off from the World

It feels like a bit of a stream of consciousness... And the plot is a bit scattered, but I have to say that the beginning really catches the eye, and the unknown existence makes people fearful.

I accidentally discovered that it is quite to my liking. It's just that the plot twists are a bit unpredictable. After all, this is a novel, not a drama, so the reader's perception is still lacking.

It gets more and more philosophical later on, maybe because Li Ming's humanity in my heart is constantly draining away, like sand being washed away by waves, revealing the gems buried underneath. Well, how should I put it, in conclusion, in our hearts Zhang Shuai and Li Ming are already married. Especially when Zhang Shuai overwhelmed Li Ming in the end, Li Ming said, "Eat me." Sorry, I'm just a mortal, I'm just so vulgar. Hahahaha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

I feel the writing is great, please come on author ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶ з

It feels like the first and second parts of Utopia are not the same novel, it's almost like it was written by two people.

After reading the first volume, which started like a supernatural book, I had no idea about the rest. It would be good if the author writes about supernatural beings.

Although it felt like it was foggy in some places, it just felt great! Come on big

Prophecy of the Gods It is deep and tactile It scares me. It cannot be done by ordinary brushstrokes The character of the protagonist is like the ocean The unfathomable depth hidden under the calm

I still like it very much when I read the third to last chapter, but there are too many stream-of-consciousness chapters. After reading it, my mind feels confused. I don't know if there is a threshold for reading or if this is the author's purpose. It's just that my mind is very messed up, and then suddenly writing a realistic plot, it feels like a disconnect. In addition, as a superficial person, I don't like to see intellectual protagonists being lectured. Learning how to fight is also unnecessary. Isn't Boss Muyi also a supporting character? There is really no need to forcefully develop something you are not good at. I hope it can be clarified whether it is an invincible style. If it is, I don't want to see the protagonist suffer setbacks (including talking back to the second male lead). If not, the protagonist seems to be praised too highly now. The speed is too fast. I should write more missions to slowly reveal the world.

I have read more than 20 chapters, what can I say? The author's characters are well written, and the psychological activities of each character can resonate with me. I can also understand their actions. I can empathize with the characters in the text based on my real-life experience, and I will feel a sense of sadness when they go offline. It's been a long time since such a detailed description touched my heart. Of course, there are also bad points. According to my superficial experience, the story does not feel so coherent, or the story line is not very good. A common problem that many authors have in writing is that if the characters are not written well, the story will be ignored; otherwise the story will be written well, the characters will be ignored. The author belongs to the former category, which is relatively rare among the novels I have read. Most of the articles I read are those that focus on the story but underestimate the characters. Of course, the traffic of articles that emphasize the story will not be too bad. After all, today's society is quite impetuous, and everyone wants to have a good time. Stories with thrilling twists and turns are more likely to be read. Of course, for me, I prefer novels written by authors with more complete characters, because it makes me feel more involved and can connect the characters in the novel with real people. In some places, the author may be excited by the writing, but the readers may not have the same experience as the author, so in some places they cannot understand what the author wants to express, and it seems like a stream of consciousness. When it comes to online articles, you still have to take care of the reader's perspective. Of course, the author's own perspective is also important. After all, this is what guarantees the ability to write wonderful novels. Of course, I have only read more than 20 chapters. I am writing so many because I really like this book, so I will comment more. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create better stories.