Harry Potter: the Supreme Alchemy

I just posted a paragraph that seems to have been swallowed... But I still want to remind the author that if you really want to write this book, it is best to let the protagonist grow up. His idea of ​​wanting everything is true, but it is really not advisable. It is best to just draw a line honestly. Moreover, the protagonist is really hard to describe. You don't understand your own affairs and you still think about picking up girls every day. The whole person gives me a feeling of confusion. First he became a rare professional alchemist, but what he never expected was that he could be so poor, so poor that everyone around him recognized that he was poor. I wondered how you could be poor if you could bring things out of the Room of Requirement. You could use magic power to bring things out for sale, but you didn't bring them; you could make alchemical items to sell, but you didn't do it either; as an alchemist, how could you still be poor? You don't even have the idea of ​​owning your own alchemy workshop. It can be said that how many masters the protagonist can smooth out is all in the author's mind. Another one, the protagonist can realize the transformation in the second grade, just think that he has a talent, then what? I feel that 80% of the protagonist has not learned any high-damage magic, at least it is not described in the book. Fighting is like jingle cat. From time to time, the author suddenly asks the protagonist to take out some new magic from his crotch to give everyone a good time. After the protagonist provoked Voldemort, he did not practice hard. It gave me the impression that he was just an innocent young boy who did not consider the threat of Voldemort to his future at all. As an alchemist who has been studying for more than 2 and a half years, it seems that throughout the second grade, I can only make bells. You can even make an hourglass or other props, but there are none. He has no trump card, no brains, no future plans, no money or a girlfriend, and he is in love from time to time. This is the impression of the protagonist. If the author is serious, he should really think about how to write it.

If more than 20 people reply, I will continue writing. But this won't be like the two updates a day like before. There may be interrupted updates, or there may be fewer updates. The author didn't write the book purely because of his hobby, but he really couldn't bear to end his first book like this. I hope everyone will understand.

The cover is still made by myself. . . It looks much better than the previous one. . . . . . . . . . . This book may have been banned due to posting too much content in one day. . . According to the previous settings, it should be updated regularly until the day after tomorrow. I don't know when it will be released. Writer consultation is in progress.

Well, this is not the first time I've talked to you in the discussion forum. I still want to thank you for your guidance last time. It was actually helpful to me. I don't know how important signing the contract is to you, but I think your book can be considered a masterpiece. I don't know what to say. I think that the people who come to see Harry Potter and write about Harry Potter are more or less passionate about Harry Potter. There are many Harry Potter fans, but not many high-quality works and even fewer completed ones. This is a regret of mine, so I became an author and wanted to write my own Harry Potter. I don't know what will happen to you in the future, I don't know how difficult the journey will be in the future, and how violent the wind and waves will be in the future. I just hope that the author will not forget it and this book. This book will always be on my bookshelf, author, I wish you well. Waiting for your return.

If you have any name suggestions, you can say them here. You can also mention characters from other works that you would like to join. The author will take some appropriate measures.

The new book is nearly 100,000 words long. Everyone can take a look. The new book has been signed and the completion is guaranteed.

To be honest, this book has almost 100,000 words, and only Hermione and Lily appear in large numbers. But I want to state something here, that is, the author himself has not determined who the heroine is yet. But I have a strong desire to start a harem. Then we fell into a dead circle. The author wanted to open a harem, but Lily, Hermione and the characters that may appear in the future are all modern-educated. I wanted to persuade them to accept a harem, and my scalp went numb... To be honest, it is impossible for me to forcefully perform such operations as reducing intelligence, amnesia, etc. Zuo, I really want to start a harem, but I can't do it! I haven't thought of any way to persuade them to accept a harem! If you have suggestions, you can tell me, and if you don't have suggestions, you can complain. The author just lets it go here, I want to start a harem! But I can't! Even emotional scenes are very difficult!

Regarding the protagonist's alchemy props, if you have any ideas/suggestions, you can put them forward here. The author's imagination alone is limited, but everyone's imagination together is unlimited. Warmly welcome!

The four chapters updated today and yesterday include the existence of species in Miss Pei's Fantasy Castle. Here is the reason: time magic. As a very important prop in Harry Potter: the time turner. I can't think of any other way to explain this thing. To be honest, this time turner is too buggy! It happened that the species "Time Bird" existed in the movie I watched recently. A more careful audience can also find that Miss Pei does have a pocket watch. So I added the content about Time Birds to this book. There may be creatures from other worlds infiltrating in the future. If you have any ideas, you can comment below.

I'll come and take a look

Well. . . . Well. . . . Well. . . .

As mentioned, the second application for contract signing also failed.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I gave up after reading Chapter 14, and the protagonist forcibly surrendered his wits.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Investing in new books... To finish the book?

Do you still write? This children's book?