The Self-Growth of Konoha's Bastard

The writing is vulgar, not white. People who have low requirements for writing and the protagonist's IQ can save it.

You're looking down on Ulquiorra, and the second-level sword is as strong as Senju Hashirama. I'm going to vomit. He's not from the same dimension at all. He's so vicious.

It's already been 30 chapters, and you still haven't finished your illusion virtual reality simulator?

What is written? , I had a fight with Kyuubi at the beginning, but the writing and plot behind it were incomprehensible. Danzo wanted to mess with you, so you hid in Mito's house, and I didn't see you working hard to improve your strength. What were you doing jumping around there?

When I saw the protagonist in the future and the plot of traveling back through time and space, I didn't want to read this book! I am a person who firmly believes in the theory of parallel universes. If there is a second protagonist in a fan work, I won't want to read it.

The writing is so watery! Your writing style is so watery... I can even write a novel! Everyone's IQ is off-line

Brainless white article, identification completed

The plot is a bit confusing, it makes my head hurt watching it.

🙂🙂As a Naruto fan, we are relatively miserable 😁😁

Tell me, what is your relationship?

After reading the first chapter, I felt it was a mess