Northern Territory Curiosities

Come on, keep updating! Become a god with one million as soon as possible!

I saw your comment on this chapter and read two chapters. The difference in writing style between the wedge and the main text is slightly larger, and... The writing style of the wedge feels the same as a few years ago. It is recommended that the content of the wedge be written out bit by bit later in the text, and some foreshadowing be buried.

Come on, the writing style is very novel~(￣▽￣~)~

The title and introduction of the book are both very well written. The writing is concise and smooth, and the writing skills are still very good. The story is not too prominent, the characters are not three-dimensional, and some dialogues are redundant. When the plot advances and the characters come into contact, different personalities must be reflected, so that the story can be full and three-dimensional, and the story can be more compact. Overall it's pretty good, just need to improve it a bit. Why did I forget that the person who was swallowed up by the system yesterday was evaluated? 😁😁

I wanted to give you a reward and support you, but I found that I couldn't reward you, which was embarrassing 😅😅😅

Too little, you should update it. The author is big

I like the title of the novel, check in first and then read it

Coming, coming

It's amazing. Both the plot and the concept are very fresh and eye-opening. The writing is also good. Please keep updating. I'm optimistic about you.

Xixi forgot to vote yesterday, so I voted 2 today

Come on, big brother, let's encourage each other!

Okay, okay, come on, I envy you. . .

First of all, I made the same mistake that all newcomers make. There was too much background introduction at the beginning, but the plot was invisible, and there were no conflicts. Secondly, it was too dramatic for you to appear in English in this kind of article. But it's not too out of the ordinary. The first book is just for practice. You can revise the previous chapters, and the second book will be better. Come on.

I think the name Han Si is more pleasant to the ears.

Keep your claws and keep going! Optimistic about you

Come on, update, there are still too few chapters.

Don't watch it, it's addictive!

There are so few words that it's not enough to read, but overall it's remarkable and some of the details are quite nice. I wish you a great signing soon.

Already invested in voting, ID is always average every year

Collected, well written, please visit me again

Received, received from each other, and encouraged each other.