Great Creator

This article is already considered a masterpiece with more than 3 stars in the creation category. The author obviously has a higher education level than high school, and at least chemistry can still be used. Although it is a bit nonsense when creating atoms, because according to the author's setting, creation can only be done after complete understanding. Atoms can be further divided into quarks, and it does not mean that the ingredients are fully analyzed, and there is quantum mechanics, etc. So later he said that the force of creation is unscientific. I laughed at the time, but only now have I discovered? And the author is probably not a computer major. What is the level of the protagonist? I can actually independently create a virtual world like the Mountain and Sea Realm and 12 artificial intelligences that can move on their own and even evolve into life. My major is artificial intelligence. To be honest, the starting conditions of the protagonist, whether it is algorithm, hardware, electricity, or data scale, there is no possibility of realizing artificial intelligence. In the early stage, when he was cooped up at home, the description of the change in the protagonist's heart was very good. But after arriving in the green world, you will find a lot of contradictions. For example, the protagonist's soul has reached level three. The author's setting is that he will basically have no mental fluctuations, but when managing a group of self-created apes, he will be moody and angry, and he will often be unhappy and angry. Another thing is, it's okay for the protagonist to do all kinds of cruel experiments, it's okay to create intelligent life like a creator, it's okay to rule stupid people as a god, but there's a problem to assimilate the favored ones and just grind them off. The difference is that the protagonist is condescending, and the ape-men have no choice. This is very awkward. When the protagonist asked his beloved to call him comrade, I really couldn't stand it. Abandon books.

The protagonist's position as the leader of all mankind is too strong, he interferes too much in small-scale events, and many of the punishments are child's play. The role of mentors has been exaggerated, and knowledge is really not as attractive as simple interests. People in high positions also appear to be naive, starting from the demon world, they have become a little theater that creates plots just for the sake of plots. The most important thing is that if this development continues, human beings' fear and dependence on gods will only intensify. It can be said that it is inevitable that divine power will overwhelm royal power. Mainstream culture will never develop science and technology. If you really want to say it, it doesn't matter if the protagonist shows up directly to select his relatives now. According to this situation, if the sacrifice is serious and the monarch says something, the throne may not be guaranteed. If something goes wrong, the whole city will be wiped out. What does it mean to kill a king? The royal family doesn't want power anymore.

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Mao Shui 😆, please write more stories about Mao Shui!

Nice! Too little! ! If you don't write a book, you'll be taken to a dark room and spanked! !

My heart is like a tree. The more the tree yearns for the light at high places, the more its roots will go downward, toward the soil and into the depths of darkness. Being strong does not mean being emotionless. But feelings cannot dominate the strong, only the strong can dominate feelings. I really feel comfortable reading the author's book. Unlike other creation stories, you use the heart of a diaosi to do the things of gods. The protagonist in the author's works has a strong heart. Yours sincerely

When I first started to create objects, there was a part where I didn't understand the microstructure of matter, and I tried to force it to be reasonable, so I made very hard paper and two-dimensional bread. This is very reasonable, and it tells us that the Creator also wants to read. Hahaha, so fun

At the beginning, the inner emotional drama was well written, the plot was well controlled, and the story flow was in place. Although there were still some flaws, the author did not look too far ahead - for example, he wrote a huge world view from the beginning. On the contrary, the writing is very depressing, but it is the foreshadowing of the plot that makes the whole book enter the soul, like emerging from the chrysalis. Although this book is still in its infancy, we cannot be complacent because of our previous achievements (screams from two updates a day), otherwise the traffic we finally obtained will regress. Although I don't know what your attitude is towards writing, if you really want to write, you should write seriously. Comparing your articles before Three Worlds Dispute, I can see that there is a gap between the writing style and the creation of characters. The portrayal of characters is often overshadowed by slightly emotional descriptions and some unimportant writing styles. But considering that this is just a writer who has only been writing for three months, it is already very valuable to be able to write this niche work. I just clicked through

Haha, the author has lost the outline. The first twenty chapters are well written, but the protagonist, as the God of Creation, personally apologizes and is confused? Reducing one's own authority in exchange for the ambition of his subordinates simply does more harm than good. What was originally a good story about the mastermind behind the creation of the world has become like this. The protagonist was relatively calm and collected in the first few chapters, but in the end, the protagonist just lost the setting and took advantage of the outline, and it became ridiculous. Originally, I was very happy to see this kind of article. As a result. . . , I can only say that it is doomed to have no achievements, and you can treat your subordinates as human beings, but what do you mean by treating you as an equal? ​​They were originally created by the protagonist, and they violated the protagonist's orders. So far, my favorite is Xiao Ke,? ? ? , The protagonist doesn't understand this kind of operation. If he lets the artificial intelligence offend him at will, this will make the artificial intelligence think that God the Father can be offended, and then he will push it further. This is simply because he thinks that artificial intelligence will not rebel. Since they have the ability to learn, they should control them better. I have to say that this poisonous point can directly persuade them to quit.

I saw the protagonist apologize to the intelligent AI. What to apologize for, it's the protagonist's decision. Let smart Al not accept it. So the protagonist apologizes. You can explain it, you can explain why you need to apologize. . There was a thorn in my heart, and the more I thought about it, the more uncomfortable I became.

The previous writing is very good. Starting from the small black room farming setting, the loneliness emotions are well described. However, when it comes to the human race, it doesn't work. The protagonist's character completely collapses. Both the protagonist and the artificial intelligence look funny. There is absolutely no majesty and dignity of the Creator and God. Confucius once said, only women and villains are difficult to raise. Those who are close will not be inferior, and those who are far away will be resentful. If you want people to respect you, you can't get too close, otherwise you will lose your majesty. Not only will you not gain respect if you have no airs, you will also lose your majesty. The current relationship between the protagonist and artificial intelligence and his funny personality are completely inappropriate to be placed in this kind of creation story.

At one moment he is divine and at the other he starts to make fun of his own children. I am confused as to whether you want a funny book or a normal book. Do you want to attract readers who like funny books or a book with a normal writing style that uses creativity and ideas to attract readers? I can only say that I don't know what the author wants to write. The various characters of the protagonist are very conflicting.

It's an interesting book, but I started to be discouraged from it starting from chapter 29. The various dialogues are just like playing, creating artificial intelligence, what else can I say about making a contract, and respecting equal treatment. After reading more than fifty chapters, I was shocked by various manipulations. I talked about research, but I didn't see much research. It was just a person who was out of tune and mentally ill, leading a group of people who said they were gods and didn't have the intelligence of apes. I couldn't see the main line in all kinds of games.

I gave it up. I saw it by accident. After watching it for a while, I thought it was good. However, the character design of the protagonist and the plot are all messed up. Some of the plots are simply disgusting. I can't stand it anymore until the water god and that Yan. What is written is so annoying. Mao Ni. Jiangnan has been criticized by people for being a literary youth, but he is really a literary youth. The author is just writing nonsense.

Great author, come on! The monthly pass is ready, put it on the shelves quickly! Although I've only read a dozen chapters, it's so satisfying! Please improve! 🤓🤓🤓

Since we are going to write about creation, can we please not interfere too much? It's like you're following a fixed process. Something must appear at a certain time. There's no such thing as letting things take their own course. The protagonist should be more of a guide. I think this is the right direction, you can try it. But I think this direction is absolutely correct. You must go this way or you will all die. Then I agreed to write about the behind-the-scenes, but how come I am bound to be guessed as soon as I appear? Doesn't the behind-the-scenes mean that I am only responsible for recording, observing, and guiding but will never appear in person? Also, this god is really unqualified. The person who wrote it is just afraid of the power of the god, not the majesty of the god.

The writing and creativity are both good, but the main character is too weak, and many of his actions are inexplicably awkward. He doesn't look like a strong-willed man at all.(¯ㅂ¯Crimin)

The protagonist's character and the so-called AI are very poisonous. I'm currently watching it. I'll comment after watching it.

This book was very good at the beginning, but unfortunately it stopped working later on. It was always punished by God for some reasons, and it was really private property... The more I read, the more I couldn't stand it. There is no system or rules, and there is no one's own style of doing things.

The update quality is so awesome, one chapter and seventeen pages, which is 1.5 Times that of others.

I don't want to read about Chapter 100. The protagonist is too free-spirited and I always feel uncomfortable watching a low-dimensional game in front of me.

Recent drama. . . As for the mastermind behind the scenes, I hope to see what happens to the people below under the influence of the protagonist. The protagonist has such a strong sense of presence that it feels like a group of people are acting with the protagonist. Invasion of demons, arrival of Zerg, slave uprising, rebellion of eight kings, extraterrestrial beings, martial arts heroes, religious disputes, etc. Let's get started 🔨

Very good subject matter, the story is very attractive. Just hope there are more

It was a masterpiece until about artificial intelligence. The protagonist's change of mentality, fearful and cautious exploration, how to turn the creation ability on paper into a real creator through a series of operations, and how to climb the technology tree step by step from scratch to make the creation ability come into full play. The first half of this book fits the title and is very well written Then it's almost enough to see the protagonist engaging in artificial intelligence. There is no need to read any more. The book is over at that point.

In fact, ultrapure water is toxic.

The protagonist is extremely emotionally unstable and feels like a psychopath. The creativity is quite good, but the protagonist is not likable.

​​After reading about 90 chapters, I skipped reading. After jumping to more than 100 chapters, I didn't even want to skip reading. When the protagonist burns his own technology tree day and night at the beginning, it gives people a sense of prosperity and allows people to see the growth of an ordinary person. The artificial intelligence and bad jokes that appeared later are boring, but they can be ignored and tolerated. Under the need to discover and explore the unknown, the human race was selected, and the civilization development process was developed step by step, and many things happened as a result. The problem lies in words. Words are carriers, and stories are composed to express the author's thoughts or emotions. These can be reflected in detailed descriptions or ordinary conversations. However, the words and bad jokes in the dialogue that escape the era make people laugh too many times and lose the fun of continuing to read. Emotions can also be expressed through plain dialogue, without so much jumping off and making jokes. The development and deduction of civilization are also as interesting as the bad jokes.

It's not pretty, the main character is written like a little kid

It's a little bit toxic. I started doing science, but then I went straight to fantasy, and I didn't take advantage of the world or the acceleration of time.

In the early stage, it was very interesting, and the descriptions were very detailed and focused. Later on, the author just let himself go. Maybe he didn't have enough brain cells.