My Disciples Are All Immortal Emperors

Maomao is too short, and there is not enough time to invest 😭

What the hell is that plot about stealing the footbath? It seems to have no continuity with the previous one. And is this woman's behavior really good? Even if she keeps the money, she can't buy or sell by force. This plot is really fragmented and does not match the amazing performance at the beginning. The three golden chapters give people high expectations, but suddenly they start to feed the poison, which makes people feel deeply uncomfortable. It should be considered that the grass jelly has gone bad. . . .

It's a good picture but I can't stand it. The author has a misunderstanding about immortality. The most powerful immortality cultivator can see through the essence of matter at a glance. Cultivation of immortality through technology is good but unscientific. It can be said that powerful immortality cultivators are the creators. It's a joke if you talk to them about technology. The words and the introduction are also very poisonous. There is a road to cultivating immortals and the methods left by ancestors, the understanding of the latitude of the plane and the universe, the description of each realm, what is the end of the universe, the ancestors of cultivators have left behind classics, and what did the protagonist teach them? This is the problem of education, and it is also the biggest poisonous point of this book,

Forcibly suppressing intelligence, the preface does not match the subtitles, the writing is poor, the logic is confusing, and it will be extremely poisonous.

It is a pity that a book with great potential ended up like this.

The preface does not match the postscript. At the beginning, I said that I thought it was the ancient normal world, but at the end, I said that I had tested my spiritual roots before, and it was produced by the studio.

I have to say that I really admire the author. Congratulations to the author for graduating with his PhD. But can the author reveal how old he is this year?

I finally found a book that I could read, but you failed me so completely 😰 You can see the author's intentions from the outline, but it's a pity.

I really like this book so much that I will update it quickly, otherwise I won't be able to read it enough! Authoryyds!

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I haven't read it yet, I just checked out the author. I'm very curious about how the author did it. This is already his fifth work, and the author's level is still first level.

Maomao has made progress, but the routine is really too cliche.

No, brother, you wrote the protagonist and taught ten people, and then the 800 chapters had nothing to do with the ten apprentices. At most, you just wrote a rant in the background. How can people read it? I don't know what the data is, but judging from the content, I wouldn't be optimistic about your book. What kind of suspense novel do you think it is? A year of preparation before the finale? If you don't have an attractive plot, just shorten the story. There are so many online literatures that are really not very successful. What draws us in is the protagonist and the ten apprentices. We want to see their interaction and how the ten apprentices change the world. What are you doing with all these? Rewrite a few passers-by? Then why don't you read another book called "I'm Teaching Little Lolita in the World of Immortal Cultivation"?

The introduction is very beautiful and makes people want to read it. But you. What kind of daily guide is this after finishing the book? It's really a daily detoxification.

Not bad, very good. The most important thing is that after the surgery, the outline was sent out. Good review.

So what's the use of recruiting students at the beginning? Why don't you write so much later?

? Can you recommend tj's unfinished books to me in the daily guide? Is there something wrong with qd😅

Well written, keep up the good work＾0＾~