From Yearning for the Life to Master of Entertainment

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This book is quite interesting, but why do you want to write about the afterlife? Although I also like the show, there are too many men in the starting point, which is different from the emphasis on women in the afterlife. Maybe not many people have read it, and there is a little bit of history. I suggest you directly change scenes in unimportant places or use two parallel lines or write group portraits. Overall, the subject matter is very interesting. I'll give it a try.

I originally wrote a long review in the afternoon, but I might have received a 404 due to too many sensitive words. I originally thought about letting it go, but then I made a small complaint and the author responded, so I thought about it and wrote it again. (Well, I don't know if the author is a newbie, but I have written books before and like to reply to readers.) Oh shit (*｀へ´*), I forgot when the protagonist was reborn (it was too long and I can't remember). For now, this subject matter is actually quite good. Although there are many in Feilu, and the various types are quite complete, most of the readers here should not be used to the articles there (everyone knows it), so this subject matter is here In fact, there should be a market for Bian. So far, I have found three novels with fan fiction themes. I have followed two of them. The other one is really outrageous, about wild boar hunting and boxing matches. The title of the book is Leisurely Life. I am speechless, and the writing is too poisonous. Let me talk about some minor flaws I have discovered so far: First, the character change of the protagonist in this book is too abrupt. A person who wants to hit his head and get bloodied needs to be strong and impulsive. However, when the protagonist reaches the stage of yearning, he becomes gentle and easy-going, which is a bit too harsh. For example, when a person with this kind of personality meets someone who has no acting skills and no works, he actually doesn't like it in his heart. Although he won't show it, he will try to stay away from this person. Secondly, the protagonist's fight at the door of the martial arts school (it was a fight, even though he was helping) was very poisonous. It is estimated that readers who are not strong enough to resist poison will abandon the book here. I don't think this kind of novel needs to show how high the protagonist's martial arts skills are. Thirdly, I feel that treating Zifeng as my sister when I first came on the show is a bit forced. Although I also like Zifeng, it is a bit too deliberate. At least Peng Peng and her are brother and sister when filming. It is normal for people to have a good relationship. It is impossible for you to surpass Peng Peng in just two or three days after attending one episode. The relationship heats up too quickly. (Well, everyone has their own opinions on this point, so you can ignore it) Fourthly, the author may not be very old. He knows a lot about today's little fresh meat, and he must also like Reba, otherwise he wouldn't write such a flying deer style. (I'm almost 30 years old, and I know many of today's little fresh meats by their names. I can't tell them apart, and most of them have never heard of their names. I don't know if there are the same ones.) This is a bit of a disadvantage for an old bookworm like me, but of course many people still like it. Fifth, (I have forgotten all the celebrities who came before) in the latest chapters, Wu Jing will never call the goddess Reba. With his character, he will never be so friendly to a water queen or even make such a joke, not even in the show. He is definitely friendly to people who have works and acting skills. For example, the protagonist thinks that Wu Jing will be angry with Zhang Zifeng. At least Zhang Zifeng has works and acting skills. The author probably wanted to portray a doting sister who protects her shortcomings, which is good, but a little too much is not enough. Sixth, the fact that the protagonist beats the director is too poorly inserted, and it is too casual to arrange for Wu Jing to come to the protagonist to make a movie. This event that promotes the plot is really meaningless. In particular, it is even more unreliable to say that many people helped in this matter. Isn't it enough to arrange three big names, Huang, He, and Sun, to make golden fingers for the protagonist? Do you need to arrange so many people? To be honest, with these three people around, the protagonist can get up anyway, and there is no need to advance the plot so bluntly. (Huang Lei alone is awesome. His connections are not to be boasted. He has great influence both officially and socially). Also, Wu Jing said that you can see his acting skills by watching the clips of him playing a minor role? I really don't understand. Most people have to do a performance to see acting. Will the supporting actor have a performance? Don't tell me how many plots a small player will have, and don't tell me how good a look is. How many times do you think a small player can really perform for you like in Stephen Chow's movies? Usually it's just a background board. I've never seen anyone tell someone's acting skills through the background board. Seventh, the writing is getting closer and closer to Feilu. Is the author from there? What brothers and sisters? Staying in a variety show for one episode and singing one song can lead to celebrity fans? I'm afraid I'm not dreaming (´-ω-`). To be honest, as of now, if you write Reba in this show, you can still attract some readers. Is the purpose of writing Zhao Jinmai just to make the protagonist show off? Here are the fans. There is absolutely no need for this role. Having said so much, I found that I am very verbose, haha. There must be many people who will say: You said so much, write it yourself. This is just my own opinion. If you agree, don't say more. If you disagree, don't attack it at will. Everyone is here to read a book well, okay, that's it. If the author thinks it is best to use it a little, it doesn't matter if it is useless. We are all adults and we just need to look at the problem rationally.

On August 27, my sister became an adult. Happy birthday to Zhang Zifeng.

I'm a newbie, so I hope you'll bear with me. If you have any suggestions, or if there's anything that needs to be modified, let me know here. Finally, what do you think about the heroine? There is only one female protagonist, and I don't want to be ambiguous, so everyone recommends a female protagonist.

The author must have no concept of weight. 187 And still have obvious muscles, and the weight must be more than 80 kilograms. You are actually 65! Author, go to the vegetable market and ask the pork seller to show you what thirty pounds of meat is!

Looking at the recent chapters, there is no trace of leisure and entertainment at all. Either Lao is arguing with Xiao Xianrou or Xiao Xianrou's company, and then slaps him in the face. Are all traffic stars **? None of them are normal? At least you can develop me, entertainment master. It's such a blunt chapter that I'm always slapped in the face...

Time Traveler, a graduate from Nortel, who has been working as a group actor for a year, and insists on saying that he has the ability. This protagonist setting made me laugh.