I Arranged the System

This book is probably a continuation of the problems in the last part of the previous book. The writing was very scattered in the last part of the previous book, which made people feel that there was no sense of expectation. When writing a novel, one must pay attention to the sense of expectation. Without a sense of expectation, readers will get tired easily. This book is too scattered and the rhythm is too chaotic. In the background of the apocalypse, Goldfinger is a manufacturing system, which is actually a good idea. The problem is that readers don't know what the protagonist is doing. He upgrades the system and defeats the enemy in one go. Then, the settings of the different world, including the stone in the forest, the sword, and the good guy system, don't know what development will happen, so the readers don't have much hope. Compared with "Hostship", the main line of Trusteeship is clear, and the stage tasks are okay in response to the coming of the upper world, because the setting is for the spiritual energy to gradually recover. Coupled with the special system and the salty fish protagonist, a character born with dramatic conflicts. It will create a sense of anticipation in the readers. In the later period of "Hostship", the rhythm was messed up and the structure was scattered. The protagonist didn't know what to do, and the readers didn't know what to do. Readers lose their sense of expectation as soon as they don't know what to do. This is probably what I feel.

Uh-huh, I saw your book when I was looking through the rankings. I came over to take a look and sure enough, someone complained about you. I'm relieved about you, Laj. It's the first time you asked me to read a book and I didn't like you as a person 😤

I'm so happy. What did you write in your last book, the cycle of cause and effect, retribution, hahahahahaha, I want to laugh for three minutes.

It feels like the author has changed. I was managed by the system. It is very interesting. But this time it feels like a white text, with no logical logic. It is not as enjoyable as ours.

Why do some people always want the protagonist to show off when watching a behind-the-scenes series? Isn't the fun of this kind of book lies in the portrayal of the supporting characters? The supporting character is given the system, and then not mentioned at all. The mention is also to show the awesomeness of the ability given to the system by the protagonist. Does the creation of this supporting character still make sense? Are you happy if you are a complete tool person?

It looked good at the front. I originally wanted to fatten it up and then slaughter it, but when I came back, I saw it was completely cold. Hey~

That Lin Zhongqing can't be the heroine, I don't think it's good, I don't like it very much.

🙂The sudden ending made me flinch.

The reason why this novel is not popular is that the protagonist is too frustrated. Even if the protagonist in this type of novel is not invincible, he still has to be able to pretend to be sexy. You can't have a protagonist who is a wimp and doesn't even pretend to be sexy. Of course, this book is not worth reading!

You can consider the theme of "My Lord God Game" for the new book. Really, I just re-read it a few days ago.

The main character in the last book was disgusting to death

The first order was over 500, hahahahahaha, I deserve to be thrown out, I was disgusted

I thought, the author is awesome, writing a book for his own hobby, it really has a direct ending.

This book is so popular, it has 500 fans, ranking 18th, pitiful ╭(°A°`)╮

Let me tell you something. This book is well written. The only problem is that the setting is too naughty. There are basically no boundaries or bloody restrictions. In fact, if you continue to write and learn, writing in the direction of a grand civilization is a brilliant one. The author can try a broad perspective and not be limited to individual descriptions.

Let's not talk about the investment group's follow-up investment. I voted for recommendations every day last month. I was a little busy at the beginning of this month. I didn't look at it for a few days, and I felt that I couldn't accept it.

Md is a eunuch again, is he back from Thailand?

Analyzing my works, it is not the problem of the book, but the lack of readers on the platform, or buying tickets, you should not cut it ╮(╯＿╰)╭. Readers will be even more sad after cutting it

I also want to see the theme of my main god game

I have always liked the author's books. The world view is complete, and the views on some things are relatively rational and thorough. It is very comfortable to read. Unfortunately, these things are more or less covered up by the light and funny style. Does the author have any ideas to write a harder book to test the waters?

I really like this book, but it's too late

I feel like this book can be written well, but I just don't know why it's gone⊙∀⊙!

It's poisonous. I couldn't bear it after reading Chapter 27 and left.

It seemed okay at the beginning, but I developed a good style in the apocalypse, and then suddenly the style of painting suddenly changed and I couldn't stand it anymore.

I feel that the system classification is not detailed. There is not much difference between the martial arts stream and the wizard stream. The early stage is really good and you can become a god. Unfortunately, it is a bit slow in the middle stage.

It's good to read, but not too bad. After all, reading a book only depends on the background setting and character design. Several characters in this book are quite interesting, and are better than 80% of the books I have read. The writing is excellent, the background is apocalyptic but the writing is rare and funny and clever. The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are likeable, and the system has its own personality. It is a very good novel. In my opinion, it's not a bad ending. After all, the ending is imaginable, and both villains and good guys have appeared, so book friends who see this post can rest assured that it's not expensive after all, hehehe😁😁

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

Everyone who writes books is a genius, and those who save manuscripts are even more talented.

The author is too low-key. Everyone who has a book list will arrange it.

Drag the author into custody🤭🤭🤭