Starting with the Super Soldiers

The emotional line of the protagonist is written. How can I put it? I felt that it was okay when I was ill at first, and I was very passionate with Qi Lin. But after I recovered from the illness, it took several worlds, a few years or more, and I became a little indifferent to Qi Lin, and seemed not to care much. You must know that it has only been a month for Qi Lin, and the two of them are still in the sweet stage.

I'm here to bubble up again, and write more about Super Seminary,

Uh..., I felt quite uncomfortable reading it. If you don't feel good about the cool stories, you will be confused about the emotional stories. Emotionally, the protagonist wants to die. Later, the protagonist said he quit, but why did he go there? Qilin is the core of this heart-wrenching story. Without Qilin, my mood would be half better when reading the book. I gave up immediately after seeing the protagonist being beaten by a rail cannon.

Shouldn't the breakup be Qilin's own fault? In a certain chapter, she said that there shouldn't be any small tantrums! Haha, and then blaming others for various reasons, did the male protagonist tell Qilin everything he needed to tell? Even though they broke up, they were still so kind to Qilin. Why, they still wanted to break up the relationship. Moreover, this is a world on the technological side, not a world on the cultivation side. Why do you like to write like this?

The protagonist travels through various worlds, and his strength becomes stronger and expanded! I began to feel sick and afraid of death, and I was not sure about the relationship. The illness was solved later and the relationship was confirmed immediately (the main world only lasted one night) Later, the strength increased greatly, and there was no need to worry about being discovered, and he was attracted by angels. He was arrogant, arrogant, etc., And he obviously wanted to help the Xiongbing Company save the earth (this book would be 404 if he didn't help), but he refused and said to Qilin, "What is our relationship? It doesn't matter." Anyway, the emotional scene with Qilin was inexplicable. . . Especially in the latest chapter 486, Qilin was rejected when filming a video and said "What's our relationship?" And then the protagonist sneered like "We have nothing to do with each other." . . It's really poisoned here, it's so swollen that it has no edge.

It feels like the author has changed people. The further back, the more the protagonist's mentality becomes detached, and the calm and indifferent feeling at the beginning is completely gone. In the chapter around 180, when someone buys his house, he actually thinks of picking up someone else's daughter for how much money? It's completely different from the previous characters. The author's writing techniques are also very different. It feels like the kind of mindless writing, such as crying and fainting in the toilet. This is typical urban novel trash talk. The previous feeling is almost gone. Starting from the Gun God, the time-travel plot is not interesting, and the changes in the characters make the shortcomings of the novel more and more obvious.

The beginning is very poisonous. Ah Xing is indeed not a good person in kung fu, but it is not like the first time he was blackmailed. People took pity on you and gave you money (even though the protagonist had his own plans). The second time he met inexplicably and committed suicide and defrauded money. Does a little person dare to go crazy and provoke people who still have money to fight? This plot is really awesome. You can also write that Fire Cloud Evil God has changed his evil ways and returned to normal.

I endured reading about 400 chapters, but I still can't stand it anymore. The emotional line is inexplicable, and a lot of people have already complained about it. I can't remember the middle batch of complaints at the moment. As for the plot in chapter 400, the country was invaded and he took his angel wife to go shopping. The angel wife fought with Morgana and was teleported away. While worrying about his wife's danger, he teased the angels he met on the way while walking back. What makes me unable to stand it is that he (the fourth generation god), Zhi Xin (seemingly the second generation), and Sun Wukong (the third generation god) went to block Morgana and asked her to let Qilin go. Morgana knew she couldn't beat her, so she let Qilin go, and he took Qilin away. Zhi Xin wanted to beat him but was forcibly taken away, leaving Sun Wukong alone to be tortured one-sidedly. Forgive me, I really can't stand it anymore. Farewell 🙂

When did the Ming Dynasty win and pay compensation? There is no such thing at all, Xiuchundao World.

There's a war, the country is about to be destroyed, and aliens are coming to your doorstep. Are you still in love? Oh, I forgot, the protagonist is also an alien to a certain extent