Hope Xuefei

Short review: The unlucky male protagonist simply enters the world, encounters a conspiracy, rises from adversity, and leads an enterprising life by playing to death with his opponents. Keywords: practice, suspense, struggle for hegemony, power strategy Alternate history, fairy tales, power strategy writing. The plot is loose and tight, and the plot progresses layer by layer. [Highlights] 1. A treasure hunt notice arouses the heart of the male protagonist. If you want to make a fortune and improve your life, you will embark on a treasure hunt under the guidance of Grandpa Huobao. On the way, I happened to meet the goddess in my heart and walked together. It was originally very beautiful, but along the way, it deviated from its original intention. After searching for treasure, a shocking conspiracy was discovered, and it was deeply hated by the country and the family. 2. A rebellious and talented woman, in order to find true love and freedom, she disguised herself as a man and escaped from marriage. She only loves heroes and not losers, the goddess that the male protagonist has a crush on. Before the rise of the male protagonist, he ignored the male protagonist, not knowing whether the two could achieve success in the end. 3. If there is an old man in the family, if there is a treasure, the live treasure grandpa who often gets into trouble and brags will cheat you and lose his temper. 4. See the world from the perspective of various animals, and the unique inner monologue is full of fun. 5. The whereabouts of the male protagonist's parents are unknown, and his life experience is confusing. 6. The princess in distress is cursed. He suffers from periodic amnesia and has red spots on his face. He covers his face all day long and dare not show his face to others. Did he deserve it, or did he suffer on behalf of others? 7. The character design is very bold. In online articles where good looks are the mainstream, the author sets the male protagonist to be evil-faced and kind-hearted, and his animal transformation skills are even more terrifying. No matter how successful he is in the future, his appearance will be unique. 8. Mix and match writing styles, with a feeling of combining Chinese and Western styles. For example, 'pineal gland' is a Western medical term. [Problem] 1. The title of the book The title of the book is a bit awkward. Without reading the annotations, I really don't know that it is the abbreviation of the three country names. I just feel that it is expressing a feeling of sadness and separation, and it is difficult to understand the intention of the work. 2. Introduction Open Chaimen and see Qionglou. Although the aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley, it is wine. As an online article with a solid foundation and excellent literary talent and plot, the introduction can be revised or revised. Now this is more like a creative statement. Writing Choose words and sentences, and the words flow smoothly. The depiction is meticulous and lifelike. Well-organized and rigorously structured. The narrative and lyricism are quite appropriate. The feeling of indignation flows through the pen and ink. The text has a broad meaning and is very poetic. (Share this elegant sentence excerpted from the text.) Farewell, my heart is hard to leave, and when will the longing for me return? Mo Siqing, you are at peace, a ray of love and sorrow continue. Sacrifice one's life to go to the national disaster, seeing death as a sudden return home. [Summary] It is rare that the writing and plot are both good. The book has been written and the author is updating it steadily. Without signing a contract, 45w+ are all free.

To be honest, I only read a few chapters and I was amazed. I have to say that the author's writing style is quite sophisticated. I can make up the picture by myself after reading a few sentences. The literary style is not obscure and difficult to read, but makes people more immersed in it. The characters can be fully formed in just a few chapters and there are no bugs. The quality of the writing is comparable to that of a published book after repeated polishing. It is difficult to imagine that this is an online article. I don't think the author It is the first time for me to write an article. I may have been writing for more than 7 years or even longer. Every sentence reveals the author's skills and I deeply admire it. So, my evaluation of this book is Absolutely positive Not suitable for beginners I can't finish reading this book at a food level This book will be a hit Recommendation value (0-1000) 996 (magic number)

After reading the introduction, I was interested in reading this book. The writing is indeed good and the story is eloquent. But given that the introduction says that the supporting cast and villains all have high IQs, and that all the characters have soared their IQs throughout the whole movie, I might be overly expecting or being too harsh on the story. I have read Chapter 43 now, and I have some questions that I would like to discuss: 1. Why did the smart Lu Yijun dare to take the main road unhurriedly when she ran away from her relatives... After walking with the black egg grandson for two days, her father found out that night? Didn't you send someone on horseback to chase along several continents first? 2. In the second chapter of Lu Yijun, although he said that he wanted to find someone who values ​​love and justice, he also said that he should not just focus on her beauty, but also need to understand her talents. However, let's not talk about Shang and Zhong. When I saw Qiu, I didn't know whether the other party valued my talents, so I felt excited. This was inconsistent with the previous character design. 3. Miss Lu and the others left for 2 days. At dusk, Li Si discovered the donkey. Someone came to arrest them in the evening, and there was even a woman who was responsible for arresting Miss Lu. I think it is unrealistic that such a group of people, including women, can be hired locally. We will send people after the return, so from a time perspective, everyone left the next day after the failure, so it was a little slow for the old man of the Lu family to arrive. If Li Si just brings a group of people, then I think the Lu family is really good. They are looking for people everywhere, and even if they haven't formed a group, they will all be paired with women. They are so thoughtful that Miss Lu can't escape. 4. After the people who raped Miss Lu were beaten away, no one was left to follow her... IQ completely dropped. 5. Even if Miss Lu is stupid, doesn't Shang still know how to leave the inn quickly? Let's chat for one night before leaving... Aren't you afraid of people coming again? 6. For a prince who is being hunted, he doesn't disguise himself, reveals his name easily, opens an inn on the border between the two countries and shows up every day, and even makes such strange behavior as personally giving steamed buns and flower baskets to beggars. Is it because the intelligence agency of the Snow Wolf Kingdom is too weak or that he is not afraid at all... 7. To assassinate the prince, just send one People come... My martial arts skills are not very strong, but I was held back by a black egg... 8. Shang deceived Miss Lu from the Lu family to go to Feilong City. Later, when Miss Lu actually went, didn't you give me a warning... 9. The forest was burned down, Wanghai Kingdom was attacked, and the military camp on the border wanted to arrest the salt dealer... It's too unreasonable. 10. When the officers and soldiers went to Zhong's house, they didn't light torches all the way. Why did they light so many torches when they took the stolen goods? Aren't they afraid of being discovered? And shouldn't it be normal to take away the stolen goods first, lie in wait, and wait for someone to catch you? Otherwise, if people say that the boat is not theirs, how can they convict the person with only one witness? 11. The IQs of both parties were completely off during the princess part... Elder Gou knew that the nun was awesome, so how could he agree to kill someone with so little martial arts skills? He didn't bring two of his subordinates to help him, and chased after them after they ran away... Ji Zhongliang also wanted to hack the nun and the princess to death. Did he forget to promise the princess to the Immortality Cult? The old nun knew that the princess would lose her memory the next day, shouldn't she be careful at night? The most important thing is, if you just want to steal someone else, you already said that the princess is surrounded by your own people, so why kill the nun? Just kill the princess secretly, replace her with another one, and issue endless edicts to kill the nun. There are many others, but this section feels completely unreasonable... 12. In the section about Xia Hegou's tomb robbery, people cannot use a fixed pulley to pull up something heavier than themselves. No matter how hard they are, it is useless. Similarly, people who are lighter than themselves cannot pull themselves up. Chapter 13 and 41, the majestic general is actually a person who has only heard of spiritual power. He only saw it today... Are there no spiritual warriors in the army and the empire? 14. The general was summoned to solemnize the wedding with only 6 guards? And they don't even have scouts scattered around. This level of leading troops is a bit low. 15. Whether it is the general or the assassin, are they all unguarded against the grandfather and his party? If the assassin had already laid an ambush, why not clear out those in the way first? The general is not afraid of assassination, so he just blocks the road and watches the show without being driven away? Having said this is not to say that the writing is not good, but the introduction is too awesome, so I am a little disappointed... In fact, the villains and supporting characters are not all fools... In reality, they are not all smart people. But if you have a high IQ, at least I hope you won't do anything with a low IQ... Many of the author's views and ideas are very good, so I hope that I can be more detailed and strict with myself, and write better works, come on! 😁

It is well written, and it can be seen that the author is a fresh stream of the current Internet writing trend, and his thoughts are profound. When the majority of writers are using templates, he has his own thinking, which is different. I have read more than a hundred chapters, and I was shocked by the majestic scenes, and I also had some small laughs in my memory. Good!

A very wonderful novel! The plot of the story is fascinating, the content is compact, and every word is vivid and vivid! Come on, author💪↖(^ω^)↗! Update quickly!

This book is good and rare to see online. I hope this book will become popular.

Happiness is simple, but not simple. The reasons are different. It does not depend on where you are, but only on your state of mind and who you are with. I really like this passage from the author! I like the author's eloquent way of expression and understand the true meaning of life!

As the storyline of the novel continues to deepen, I must invest more! 🤝

To be honest, this book was delayed by the introduction to the previous world! When I saw the introduction to the world, I didn't have the patience to read it. As a result, I skipped the main text and felt that it was not written by one person! It is recommended that you be careful, delete the introduction to the world, and send it to the book circle. Interested book friends can read it for themselves. This does not affect the reading experience, but allows others to see the wonderful aspects of your story more directly. I hope you don't get discouraged. I admire you so much!

This is the first time I have seen an online article finish the book first and then start serializing it. The author is really able to keep his composure! For this reason, I recommend this book and will definitely read it to the end. 👍

Thanks to all readers and friends for their support, "Wang Xuefei" will be on the shelves on January 1st, and there will be further recommendations in the future. Being able to persist until now is inseparable from your continuous encouragement, criticism and correction. The author would like to thank you. No matter whether the results are good or bad, I will give you a complete copy. I am worthy of you and myself. 🙏🙏🙏

Reading novels is just a fragment of time except before going to bed. In the coming 5G high traffic era, How long can text and other low-traffic leisure methods survive? Mobile games, cloud push, and self-media have three holes, which have penetrated literature until it bleeds all over. So much so that the author of the starting point is the absurd phenomenon of the reader. Even short stories that don't need to be read with the brain are dead because streaming media provides continuous exciting and explosive points. Fragmented time has been completely incorporated into relaxation time. People who smoke, squat, or take the bus to read are all lost. Ten seconds to make you laugh, no need to use your brain. 5G, a bigger impact is coming. The following situational street view interactive games, passers-by live broadcast split-screen display in seconds, perfect directional direct push of news, etc. Which of these does not kill text instantly? In the future, most excellent writers will switch to short video copywriting. Therefore, it can be concluded that literature will die and will be forgotten. Died by technological progress. Moreover, people are not afraid of piracy. Any novel with or without connotation will die, as you and I can see. Like and give a recommendation, let Qidian see it, and don't charge any more. After you give me the money, they won't even look at it and they'll still charge you!

{"NickName":"54 October Frost","UserId":320159351}Don't pretend! Readers who can achieve inner balance by reading refreshing articles, coupled with authors who write refreshing articles until they vomit, their IQs may not add up to a positive number. Then I thought this was a web article. Actually, except that I can add two meat skewers to the irresponsible editor, it's nothing. Don't think that the author who writes cool articles has the character of a scholar. That's just for the sake of living. They who were once unruly have long since lost their pride. Only the desolation after ambition cools down. Life is like a mountain, it suppresses everyone's individuality, and what hurts the most is the culture with individuality. Which platinum writer is not a lonely writer? Which reader is willing to chew tasteless bubble gum? It is all helpless pain nowadays. The pain makes people paralyze themselves. We can only learn to live numbly. Speaking freely is the atmosphere that a cultural environment should have! It's just that after holding it in for a long time, everyone has forgotten the refreshing feeling, only worrying about whether it will hurt their thin dignity. Wen should shine brightly and show the good and evil of people's hearts. Don't be a humble writer. I am an unruly writer! Don't take it to the level of reading fast food articles, Scan my works. Then you can only be beaten hard. Who can guess the ending and understand the characters? Joke. You are just humiliating yourself!

The Diandian platform is really humorous. It recently said that it has more than 10 million original works. But I couldn't find a few good books on the ranking list except for Platinum Master. I only saw a tall mountain of garbage. What do you recommend? Japanese and American comic fans and I are the same as XX, ugh... The platform also requires food, I understand. Today, when literature is also bought by money, it is produced like boxes of instant noodles without the seasoning. I can't help but think of Li Taibai, the smug and ambitious Hanlin minister. I don't have his talent, but I also suffer from his disease. After the bleak smile, there is deep sadness and decadence. The carrier of literature has been changing, and now it has become a series of fast electromagnetic waves, getting faster and faster. What supports this carrier is money, the smell of copper that the literati despised most in the old days! Integrity! What a character! My heart cares about the world! I persisted stubbornly. I can be poor, but I am not willing to be ignored. I hope to hear the echo from the mountain wall before Alzheimer's disease occurs. "On Renwu New Year's Eve, before the book was completed, Qin passed away because of her tears. I cried for Qin, but her tears were still waiting to be exhausted!" Cao Xueqin was lonely and poor. He was the ancestor of Duan Geng. Mr. Cao, I despise you. You are old, withered, Duan Geng. What about me? Finished! To the hundreds and dozens of people who could see it, they also persisted. "Nowadays, non-human beings spread the wrong principles, and their survival is worse than that of dogs."

Is it over? I really can't let go of those characters. Finish it, like a blue swallowtail butterfly in a sea of ​​summer flowers. The tears fell a little bit, it was an unbearable concern, the character at the end, where will he settle down? The endless night, Don't be afraid, little girl, The second male lead who has not found love, Please leave it to the female readers. Even if you are reluctant to give up, you must be worthy of the readers. No water, no collapse, no nonsense, retreat from the intense climax, not a writer who is a eunuch. Taste the authentic taste, for your favorite characters. Peace her in your heart.

People must have integrity, Writers must have character, and even more, they must be crazy. Don't look at writers with universal values. They are the most fearless of life and death. So I dare to scold the platform, you don't dare! The feelings of writing articles, playing on the platform, monthly ticket pk big stage! I don't know who is stupid. I don't like to go with the crowd, so I go against the current, What does it mean to have good reviews or bad reviews? The original intention is like a wave, the tide never recedes, like a wild horse.

Because I didn't know the rules of the romance industry, I was banned for seven days. Later, I released it to tease the administrator, and I was permanently banned. Wrote two short poems to amuse myself. The author of "A Different Kind of Warring States" is Jian Lao Yang. He is a man of literary talent and erudition. He is a person I admire. He said, OK. I posted it to ask for comfort. "Appreciating Pear Blossoms" I carry my dream and fly to the tree full of pear blossoms. But you gave me a chain. Imprison me in a silent prison Seven days are like ten thousand years You watch the snow flying from the treetops. Smile brightly I'm swinging under the tree. Drunk in the romance circle Baishouwang still has tens of millions of years! "Goodbye" Say no more Not cowardly, not unwilling There are seven points of reluctance and three points of pity. Not giving up one article after another, Pity her resentment It's better to leave it in suspense so that we can meet again in the future. We are not the strangers, why should you and I blame each other? There is a jar of turbid wine among the flowers. If you want to get drunk, I will accompany you forever.

What can I say? For example, I like code words, but my hobby has not been systematically studied and trained. It is definitely not up to the level of traditional literary works. And then I can't write pure and simple novels without brains, so I can't get up and down, I can't become a god, and I can't get rich on the ground. Then I try to be a loose immortal, write as I like, and be more willful...

Failure caused by arrogance can often make people sober. Look at other people's eyes higher, Look at yourself lower, Look at the world more objectively. Thirty votes a day, made me realize a problem, Wang Xuefei's first 30 chapters, are really not good to watch. But that is the relationship between characters! Without feelings, Without friendship, how can you risk your life for others? Then, the system document I boycotted appeared in my mind, that would be really easy. Being enslaved may be pleasurable. Relationships, servitude Plot, the heavens Logic, what is logic? You can't blame others for wanting to read mindless and cool articles. Life is so stressful, it's not easy for anyone.

Why did you originally say that it was lively at first, but then it became quiet? Everyone has disappeared? Let me make a self-deprecation first: the first 40 chapters contain too much psychological description of the characters, are too wordy, and are very preachy.

The first day of the lunar month is motionless; The second lunar month is motionless; The third lunar month is motionless; The fourth lunar month is motionless;

This book is worth reading, the standard is quite high

Be kind and save living beings, but do good deeds without asking about the future!

Although the book is finished, it can continue to be improved and revised. I believe it will be better until it becomes another legend. Anyway, let's celebrate the Demon King in stages!

Maybe the popularity of the work will continue to rise, and it will not become popular overnight (unless there is a recommendation) High probability of killing the list, the author will become famous in one battle It is very likely to be adapted into a comic, animation and TV series, and there is a chance of being ruined It will attract a bunch of pirated readers to find fault and make trouble (Due to the uncertainty of time and space, the conclusion cannot be determined directly) (Can the author please be more careful, maybe one day it will be really available?)

This book made me feel a lot. Compared with it, the book I wrote can only be regarded as a piece of shit, which smells terrible. It's a bit unbelievable to think about it. I would actually write about a fan that I once scorned. But now that I have seen the author's carefully crafted and thoughtful work, I feel guilty and have a clear idea.

I have read about ten chapters. It is a good book, but I feel it is ruined by the classification... How could it be fantasy... This is obviously the feeling of martial arts!

The literary youth is too heavy, I can't stand it

It doesn't matter, author, because you are middle-aged, so you are more realistic. To put it bluntly, not everyone can understand this charm. Internet writers need to persevere and keep writing. There will be hope for the next book.

Why does such a beautiful book have so few fans?