Rotten Plant Yun Chun

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The writing skills are good and I have learned a lot. I hope we will pay attention to each other.

I added some things to the first chapter. If you have time, you might as well go back and read it.

Looking at your profile, I'm curious to ask, why isn't the empty moon called Fengchun? 😁😁😁The introduction is quite satisfactory. It's okay to write it this way. A more vivid one would be better. The first few sentences of the first chapter feel stiff and too deliberate. Maybe it's because it was really hard to open at the beginning. The backward writing at the end is not bad, the story is okay, the writing and plot are also good, and they are all quite vivid. But I still feel like something is missing. Maybe it just doesn't have enough novelty and the author's own unique style. Come on! 🙂