Bringing Food to a Better World

Nice novel, great author!

The harem opened too fast, and the turns were unexpected 😵. The plot had a lot of poisonous points.

Small bug: What I went to the mason to draw was not a knife sharpener. Instead, if the author draws a water-powered windmill, it would be fine. If you ask a weapons maker to see the use of a water-powered windmill, can it speed up the production of weapons? No matter how you think about it, it should be drawn as a knife sharpener! Right!

Another article about fighting for hegemony under the guise of farming

When I read Chapter 6, the plot was so awkward.

Chapters 23 and 3 are really too embarrassing. I seriously recommend removing this plot.

You are strong, author, come on!

It's really sad to read Chapter 10. Was the protagonist a noble before time travel? Or received a noble education? ? He speaks as if he has been educated by Western aristocrats for decades. What rabbit in a flower garden talks like this? ?

The idea is good, but the writing is crooked at the end. I don't understand. It started so well in the beginning, and everyone thought it was about farming and development, but in the end, various mysterious forces competed for hegemony. For what reason?

I always feel that the protagonist is not like a Chinese. Why doesn't he have the consciousness to open up new territories? He seems to be helping the West grow, rather than transforming them into people like himself. He doesn't think about cultural erosion, but just engages in productivity. It's a bit like the ancient emperor who married a princess and gave people technical knowledge. He really didn't want to invade. It's weird!

I gave up before finishing the first chapter. The protagonist is just a village chief and not a noble. What qualifications does he have to raise taxes and lower taxes. Well, even if he pretends to be powerful, he is a useless idiot and no villagers resist. Then I saw a dirty little girl pitifully. Authors please look at the others. Stop staring at little girls. It just feels disgusting.

Thank you Shennong bosses, farewell

Pretending to be slapped in the face, a nouveau riche loser

I don't know what I think of this plot. The protagonist's behavior and logic are beyond the comprehension of normal people. It feels like I'm having fun with myself. Take the wheat seeds at the beginning as an example. It's okay to eat a little, but you have to grind them for more than ten days. What's going on? In this lean time, if we have food in hand, shouldn't we organize manpower to establish prestige and open up wasteland and farm fields? It's natural for the hunting team to make things difficult for you when they return. After all, they don't know you've crossed over, so even if you don't want to be made things difficult, there's no need to be tit-for-tat. There is no way to deal with people at all, this is a time traveler. You made a bet to hunt mammoths. Shouldn't you let them see that you have the ability to produce food? What are the elf friends you have made used for? There is so much foreshadowing in front of you~ I don't know how to complain, such a good subject is written like this~

Chapter 3 persuaded him to quit. Do you like to show off that much?

The author has a good idea, but the writing is not very mature and needs to be strengthened The plot advances too fast, but there are no details, and it looks like a running account. A compact plot needs to be supported by enough information Then it is necessary to assume the identity of the character. The protagonist has a lot of actions and language that are not consistent with his identity and status. Appropriate dignity and distance can ensure the implementation of decisions. Discuss with everyone in a good voice and say that nothing can be done well.

It feels a bit like that, there are too many typos, and there is a little bit of Chinese culture.

It makes my brain freeze a bit😰

It's enough to be able to write until now. I wish the author can improve his skills.

Awesome

You are really awesome. You said at the beginning that the conditions were very poor. How did you grow wheat in a day and how did you make bread without anything?

Awesome, how did you write it down?