Shadow Dragon Law

Overall, this book is quite good to read, but there are two main problems. One is that some personal descriptions are a bit samey and do not highlight his personal characteristics. The second point is that there are a lot of typos. Overall, it is quite good to read.

After reading the first 5 chapters, I wanted to remind the author. System flow is currently being criticized for the fact that the protagonist is taken away by the system, and not everyone likes systems that can talk. For example, Deep Blue simply and crudely avoids the "intelligent" system by adding some points. The poisonous point of novels of the alien beast genre is that the protagonist is usually a derelict house covered in animal skins, and often becomes in love with humans, especially when he is a beast. There are also some terms that are too humane or polite. For a dragon beast, and it is not a five-color or metal dragon, it is impossible to be so smart. The white dragon of the shame of the five-color dragon has always been a representative of low IQ. For example, the pronouns "brother, sister, mother" are too ridiculous. You want to describe the savagery between DND dragons, but you subconsciously add modern terms.

Can't satisfy everyone's appetite, sorry. But don't say it in words, and you'll never get started.

Personally, I don't like this kind of beginning. There are some who do poorly at the beginning, and may even end up in trouble. I can accept it, after all, it's a young dragon. But I personally find it unacceptable to be bullied by a group of brothers, and I don't know why.

In fact, I really don't like having those two younger brothers, because they always feel like the protagonist's adventures are diluted. But this is also the highlight of this book.

This book has been internally invested and the status has not changed yet. You are welcome to invest.

Hornrotamio

Is the protagonist about to confront a group of real dragons? It's okay to collect life maps and make five-color dragons under adolescence, but if you make metal dragons, it's really a battle between the young and the old. It's endless, and the main character is a dragon. In the eyes of the real dragon, he is a prostitute and a second-class citizen, a domestic slave. Any intelligent species hates thieves more than enemies. Moreover, the Yalong has not yet been protected by the true god. If the relationship with the true dragon is stalemate, it will offend the dragon god. If he dies, he will probably either hold his chin in hell or build a wall. I guess the protagonist doesn't consider this? Maybe the protagonist's extraordinary talents rely on the endless lifespan of Golden Finger, but what about the dependents and brothers?

Qidian's fantasy dnd five-color dragon always likes to have the whole family go into battle. Is this some quirk? The five-colored dragons obviously like to fight in their nests. They rely on themselves for everything. They rely on robbing their spouses and intimidating their resources. Ninety percent of them are from the evil camp. Not eating their fellow dragons is already the bottom line. I really believe it~

Morrison

This involves the next plot

The author actually has many third- and fourth-class citizens in the dragon clan, such as sharp-toothed dragons, gray dragons, brown dragons, and glorious dragons that are good but rare in race, ancient land tomb dragons, metal dragon branches, ferrous dragons, snake dragons, hellfire flying dragons, carnival dragons, etc., You can write about them all

The protagonist is very stubborn and I am worried about it. This kind of novel character is rare in Longwen. I support it very much. I hope the author will not have an unstable temper like the other Plutonium Dragon. After all, according to the plot, the protagonist's behavior will definitely change as his strength changes, but don't suddenly lose your intelligence and keep your IQ stable.

I don't want to think about Western fantasy, but it feels like fantasy

It is a good treat for me who have read too many cool articles. From the first few chapters, I slowly read down and the more I read, the more I feel. It has a strong sense of immersion. Come on, author. I will give you all the recommendation votes.

Miolo Tamio

I voted for you with my first monthly vote, can you please add some details😢 Come on, author, write well😡

As an author, your first book has such poor results and you can still write 1 million words about character. I haven't read this book yet, so I'll pin it to you first.

False Dragon God: He turned into a handsome man and beautiful woman, looked for the sun every day, ate, drank, and slept. He slowly became stronger by inheriting his true name, and his faith in the Kingdom of God slowly sublimated. Real Dragon God: A Dragon God should look like a Dragon God. He does all evil and saves the world with a single thought. He studies biology every day, hybridizes various monsters, and occasionally clones his own incarnation. He studies science, discusses science, believes in science, nuclear fusion power furnace, and does not require belief but simulates the wonders of the universe. The Kingdom of the Ancient Gods (neutron stars, white dwarfs, suns, black holes...)

I also want to write a novel about DND dragons, but I don't know what dragon to write about

The book says it's about dragon beasts, but actually it's more like people wearing dragon skins…

Where did your poison go? In the early stage, the plug-in was so stupid. I directly pressed the poison glands on the claws, which strengthened the claws and the body to explode. My nerves are agile. I can run away with just a swipe of my claws. It is a completely amazing existence. After watching it for so long, I don't know where the poison went 🤔 Are all creatures flat-headed brothers?

All recommended monthly tickets will be given to you, please add fine

All five colored dragons are finished. Now comes another Shadow Dragon. What dragons are next?

Did you read the last novel Eunuch? Let the author speak (◇)

May I ask how the Dragon Clan turns their dependents into dragon-veined creatures? How do they use a certain part of their body to transform them? Or is it infected by breath? Or some special contract? ?

Will there be a dragon mother in the future

There are too many typos. Didn't the author check it after finishing writing?😭

Time Dragon: Control the Dragon of Time

Recommendation for new book "The Evil Dragon Haunts". Welcome all the bosses to give you guidance. .