Plane Promotion Game

Sorry, I can't stand it anymore. The writing is good, but I always feel like I can't figure out what the theme is? Maybe my taste is not high enough. After watching it for a long time, I saw that a murderer (Albert) was not sent to prison or shot, and it was expected that there might be scenes in the future. I didn't want to watch it. Although I shouldn't have watched it too much, I still couldn't help but complain. If it caused any trouble to the author, I'm sorry 🥵

The writing is very good. Most of the books I have read do not describe in detail the protagonist's transformation of his mind and giving himself a trial. It feels very fresh.

Compared with Zhou Taiyi's idealism, I like the protagonist's materialism.

I can't write it if I have literary talent, I just want to express my love. I like the author's attitude towards the world of Oriel. The world closest to him is the world, and civilization has its own path.

It's great. So far, it's one of the best novels I've ever read.

It's a very good behind-the-scenes flow, and you can't tell that it's a newbie. Now it's all in China. Going to a foreign country can really avoid hehe, and it's old China. Coming to a foreign country can change the environment. I come here to recommend it every day, come on.

I think it's well written. I'll definitely support it if it's put on the shelves.

I said I couldn't understand what was being written.

The novel is low-level, the whole text is a bit incomprehensible, there are some places where the novel is young, the procrastination is obvious, the main plot changes, some of the characters are overused, the character names and sub-plots are too complicated, and the protagonist is not good enough. Finally, I want to ask, after a native becomes the king of a foreign country (unparalleled nationality), instead of developing his own country, an outsider spends his own money to support the original country. What a great spirit!

Why recommend a book about docking to me?

The part about the veil of creation is okay, but some names in the West are blurred.

One-on-one format Name: Gender: What are you practicing: Experience and personality traits: Other additions: The author will try his best to add supporting characters into the book. As a new author, I would like to ask for recommendations, collections, and book lists!

It's useless to recommend it, just read Chapter 85

Your book was recommended to me by a reader. I thought your first chapter was very good, so I collected it. However, in the third chapter, the God of Creation immediately stopped showing off, and in Chapter 6, the real world showed off, I quit. I originally wanted to pick it up and then jump to read it, but yesterday the outline was deleted, and I couldn't read it anymore! When I went in and looked at your outline, I knew why I didn't support it. The outline of your book is completely low-dimensional game type. You want to write an epic sense of the history of the supporting characters in the world where the protagonist is raised. The problem is that I find the fantasy history part of the low-dimensional game very boring to write. I only read the parts about Adnos and the protagonist, and I skipped the rest. It's better to learn from other people's shortcomings. Although low-dimensional games are very toxic, I like them very much and admire the author very much. I also went to Longkong specifically to give it 5 stars. Just because his advantages are his huge and strict system and Adenos is awesome. Who taught you that you must write so many supporting characters in every detail? You can completely omit them and just write the story of the protagonist. We have to admit that people are not equal. It is normal for the supporting characters to be inferior to the protagonists. There is no need to describe so many characters. I hope you will think of your next story well. I will support you

It's great. I finally read a book about the mastermind. The people in the world created by the protagonist are intelligent and can think about whether the protagonist is a god. I have always felt that even if a mortal gets the ability to create the world by chance, no one will be able to see the flaws, unless the people in the world created by the protagonist are more mediocre and ignorant than the protagonist, especially those protagonists who often like to show off in front of others. After experiencing the initial arrogance, the protagonist of this book also began to restrain himself and reflect on himself. He gradually broke away from the vulgar taste of mortals and gained divinity. He hopes that he will not collapse in the later period. Will be fully booked when it's on the shelves.

The author is too self-indulgent, which is a typical literary youth disease. Thanks to this being a fantasy area, people here are more tolerant of this style. If the comments were in the fantasy section, they wouldn't be so polite.

When will the author fight in the world again?

I found it in this chapter, but I couldn't find it after searching many times before. Looking back, I found that the book had been cut. Sorry. If nothing else, I really like the author's understanding of the extraordinary. Thanks.

Can we write about organized immortality activities in China, such as immortality with Chinese characteristics? It would be best if the main character had some energy and could end up alone. This nanny is really terrible. Even in feudal society, your children are full and have nothing to do before they start to doubt you.

The author can write in detail or in detail. There are a lot of characters described now, and they all have foreign names, so it's hard to remember the characters. Just focus on three to two characters.

It's a really good book, but it's a shame. It's great. Don't give up. See you in the new book.

No more writing? I feel pretty good if you write well

Come on, I'm so happy, read this novel.

Can the author reduce some religious words, such as Lord, glory... I can see the drama, but the sense of substitution is not strong! Strengthen the construction of the small world! It is easy to write about harmony at home, but abroad...😒

You are already a **** eunuch, are you still recommending me? ? ?

When I saw the title of the book, I had a doubt. If a salted fish turns over, isn't it still a salted fish?

After reading Chapter 34, I couldn't help but sigh, what the descriptions in this book are all about, I really can't stand it anymore.

I'm sorry, I really can't stand it anymore =_=, I can't understand it more and more after watching it It makes my brain really hurt, forcing me to understand it is destroying my original thoughts I have one thing to say, the author does write well, but because of some restrictions, he can't write some things, no It was particularly difficult for me to understand the later part, and forcing me to understand gave me a headache (I really had a headache, I would really ponder over a chapter I couldn't understand for dozens of minutes, and the more I thought about it, the more headache I got) So I abandoned you... Maybe this kind of writing style is not suitable for me...

Look at them all

It's too much. Saints embrace God, not their own thoughts. I don't know if they are saints, but their thoughts are completely contradictory to the protagonist's thoughts, and they keep accommodating him, asking him to repent when he will, understand the protagonist's thoughts, or when he wants to let so and so change the protagonist to prove that he is right. It's too contradictory. On the one hand, I want to go one way, but on the other hand, my eyes are always following another road. I wonder whether the things on it are good or not, and I don't want to own them when I see them.