The Disappearance of the World

The author's writing skills are excellent, setting up suspense everywhere, making people read and unable to stop, 👍

1. The writing style is very good, and it is very immersive to read. I like it. 2. The environment outlined in a few strokes at the beginning can catch people's attention immediately, which is commendable. 3. The introduction is very simple. It is recommended to expand it and add interesting and attractive points, so as to attract more readers. 4. Segmentation problem. It was okay at first, but the author gradually became reluctant to divide it into paragraphs. Remember to break it off after about three or four sentences, which will make reading more comfortable. 5. The words and movements are well portrayed, making people fall into the drama, and it is a pleasure to watch.

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What are rivers and lakes? Where there are intrigues and intrigues, there are rivers and lakes. Where there are conspiracies and intrigues, there are rivers and lakes. Where there are good and evil, beauty and ugliness, there are rivers and lakes. Where there are joy, anger, sorrow and joy, there are rivers and lakes. Wherever there are people, there are rivers and lakes. It is said that people are in rivers and lakes, and they cannot help themselves. As long as they are born in this world, they will never be able to escape, because people belong to rivers and lakes.

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It's good-looking, suspenseful, and logical. Come on💪

Was the contract signed so quickly? So envious

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Very well written, support it! Also, I would like to ask the author, how did he successfully apply for a contract with so few words?

Jianghu, a word invented by Taoist philosophy in the ancient Spring and Autumn Period, has multiple extended meanings in Chinese culture. The original meaning of "jianghu" refers to the vast rivers and lakes, and later the meaning of "the world" was derived, which has nothing to do with rivers and lakes. This word was first seen in "Zhuangzi·Grand Master": "It is better to forget each other in the rivers and lakes." It refers to the people who are far away from the court and the ruling class; in many Chinese literary works, especially martial arts novels, Jianghu refers to the scope of activities of ancient knights and reckless heroes; it is even a synonym for the underworld in certain circumstances. Later, it also generally refers to the social environment in ancient times that did not accept the control, command and legal constraints of the authorities and acted appropriately. Therefore, the word "jianghu" gradually evolved into a more multi-faceted or specific term. The above excerpt is from Baidu Encyclopedia. Note: "Later, it also generally refers to the social environment in ancient times that did not accept authority, control, command, and legal constraints but acted appropriately." Wouldn't it be great if those so-called martial arts people in the Jianghu, as well as knights and knights, and others could be recruited by the court, take their strengths, and then do things for the people? If the imperial court really has the courage to recruit Jianghu, then those people will become a big help to the imperial court. In a small way, they can promote social stability. In a big way, it is easy to expand the territory and expand the territory, and there will be no dilemma of alien intrusion.

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After reading quite a few chapters, my personal thoughts are that although it is a new work, the writing style is thicker than most newcomers. The subject matter is a bit bland, and the character description techniques are too rigid and not vivid. It feels like chewing wax. I hope that the subsequent emotional description techniques will be more diverse and have more psychological approaches. Cheng, attitude in dealing with things, etc. It is best to describe the characters with more details to make the characters more vivid. It is best to depict a few "harlequins" to make the whole style of writing more glamorous and make people feel comfortable. I have always believed that the author's skill will be able to solve these small problems 😁😁