A Godlike Swordsman

Nowadays, this kind of book with a protagonist who is not happy and forward-thinking and timid will never become popular. If you go away or an author of this type, then Li Xiaotian and Gu Xinghan would have been buried in grass three feet high. It is most unbelievable that a few villains and small characters in the early stages have survived for several chapters. If you don't understand the psychology of today's readers, you are destined to not get good results.

I came in after seeing the advertisement, and the introduction was very interesting. Keep it first!

The writing is quite good, but this woman makes people uncomfortable and poisonous.

The family named Xu at the beginning didn't have the ability, so forget it. If I had the ability, I would definitely destroy the whole family. Use others as a scapegoat. Whatever his reasons. All deserve to die. Especially if it happens to yourself.

After reading the latest chapter, I think the author should not use old routines. Now the old routines have become a blockage. Nowadays, everyone likes Invincible. The protagonist is wandering around and being beaten because he has no ability. It will make everyone feel unhappy. Deliberately creating difficulties is a poisonous point. Readers have a God's perspective. People who really read the book will not say that they will quit directly. But overall, the writing is not bad and it is a source of food. But it would be great to improve it.

This Baihua Palace is not just a place to raise chickens.

It is recommended not to write about harem stallions. If you don't grasp the emotional line well, please don't write. Otherwise, your whole book will be ruined because of this poisonous point. You can revise now, or you can slowly reduce the presence of women when writing later. No CP is popular nowadays. , Many classic books have no CP, It's not that others don't write, but that writing will ruin the book Here are my suggestions, I hope you can adopt them, never write about a stallion harem, otherwise it will really ruin the book. If you are not sure, don't lick women! I hope the big book will get better. Let's keep it first and slaughter it when it gets fatter. After all, I can't get enough of it.

I can't stand it anymore. Why are you taking this girl with you? Can't you make your own way in the world?

What does Xu Binglu do? So annoying

The author is like a god. In the first chapter, the cowardly male protagonist is stupid (this is the tone of asking for help), but he persuades her to quit in the first chapter...