The Transdimensional Portal

After reading more than 60 chapters, I finally got poisoned and died. It started to expand from the first chapter to 60 chapters. I didn't read the rest. I don't know if it will continue to expand. In the world of "The Legend of Wu Mei Niang", the prince was killed in the street, and the servant who had only been working as a servant for a few days ran away. He actually had the nerve to say that he was sad and disappointed, which made me vomit. Those servants and deceased members of wealthy families are all orphans or children raised by generations of family members. You actually expect that a servant who has only been recruited for a few days and a half will work hard for you? The power of telekinesis covers the surrounding area for 3 kilometers, and even a horse can't hide from it? Why don't you die! Normal people walking on the street will consciously give way if a car comes from behind and the horn sounds. As a result, the pig's feet were deaf to what was going on outside the window and walked silently. A normal person would probably look back. It didn't break out until the servant was trampled to death by a horse. With your reaction speed, are you worthy of fighting Li Mochou without leaving any trace?

There is no theme at all, just a constant journey through time to become stronger. The protagonist is even more irrational and will run away sooner or later. Why kill someone and then run away, wasting a world. If someone wants you to kneel and you don't want to, you can just leave. If you disappear in front of them, you will scare them to death. Now that you are accused of assassinating the princess, it will be difficult to do so in the future, unless you can compete with a country by force.

Psychos kill people at every turn, attack the imperial city and kill the emperor, but you are a pig🐷 and still want to be the emperor. Hey, a dragon-slaying hero will eventually become a dragon. If you have strength but lack perseverance, you will eventually become a demon. If you want to write a time-travel novel, let's take a look at other people's techniques. What is your outline? Money? Woman? The world? Immortality? Why did you travel across time? You don't understand it yourself

This is Biluo's first time writing a book. If you think there is anything wrong with it, you can point it out and Biluo will try its best to improve it. If you have a world you like, you can mention it in the book review area. Biluo will consider writing it into the book. Thank you for your support 🙏

My Superman Ex-Girlfriend is a good movie, I recommend you to watch it. If one day you can travel to the movie world, that would be a good start. Man of steel, flying ability and super speed. Super hearing laser eyes. Perspective. A remake of Superman. The important thing is that if you don't want this ability in the future, you can also remove it through meteorite fragments. And this weakness does not have meteorite fragments in other worlds, so it will not be exploited.

You are doing martial arts stuff with the hat of a science and technology writer, there are too many poisonous points, and there are many technological worlds. In addition to artificial intelligence, the two-way foil is more important to the science and technology of this world. The protagonist only got a certain technology and has no idea that the complete technology tree is more important than his one.

I understand. The dimension of the shuttle door is higher than that of the chat group, so it is useless to enter the chat group in other dimensions. This is a good idea. Just like the strongest shopkeeper, if you can't beat him later, you can always escape.

Well, it's not an ordinary poison. I said I couldn't inflate it by reflecting on it, but as soon as I entered the door, I forgot about it and it started to inflate. And what the hell did you change the martial arts demon to be? A low-level martial artist can easily have a few tons or a dozen tons of power? Isn't Gao Wu comparable to the immortals, heroes, gods and demons?

Author, how much do you look down on college students? The protagonist, let alone having a particularly careful plan, has no plan at all.

There's something interesting in the front... I'm watching a movie that's back to bad street movies, and it's always boring to write about it! As soon as I see super powers out of control, telekinesis, divine eagles, etc., I immediately lose the desire to continue watching.