The Transdimensional Portal

After reading over 60 chapters, he finally succumbed to the poison and died. It started expanding from the first chapter and grew to chapter 60. I haven't read the rest, so I don't know if it will continue to expand. In the world of "The Empress of China," someone kills the crown prince in the street, runs away after only a few days as a servant, and actually has the nerve to say he's heartbroken…

There's no real theme; it's just a relentless journey through different worlds to become stronger. The protagonist is irrational; he'll have to run away sooner or later anyway, so why kill someone and then run, wasting a world? If someone demands your kneeling and you don't want to, you can just leave. Disappearing in front of them would scare them to death. Now he's branded as an assassin of a princess, which will be difficult to change in the future unless he can militarily rival a nation.

This lunatic kills people at the drop of a hat, storming the capital and killing the emperor! You pig-headed idiot, you want to be emperor? Alas, even the dragon-slaying hero becomes the dragon himself; power without perseverance makes one a demon. Kid, if you want to write a good time-travel novel, go study other people's techniques. What's your outline? Money? Women? The world? Immortality? What exactly are you trying to achieve by time-traveling? Don't you even know yourself?

This is my first book, so please feel free to point out any shortcomings. I will try my best to improve. If there are any worlds you like, please suggest them in the book review section, and I will consider including them. Thank you for your support! 🙏

The movie "My Superman Ex-Girlfriend" is pretty good; I recommend you check it out. If you could one day travel to the movie world, it would be a great start. A body of steel, super speed, super hearing, laser eyes, X-ray vision. A clone of Superman. The important thing is that if you don't want these abilities later, you can remove them with meteorite fragments. And this weakness doesn't exist in other worlds with meteorite fragments, so it won't be exploited.

You're masquerading as a science fiction novelist while doing martial arts stuff; there are too many flaws. Besides artificial intelligence and two-dimensional foils, the most important thing about these technological worlds is the science and technology itself. The protagonist only acquires a single technology and has no idea that the complete technology tree is far more powerful than his single application.

I understand now. The portal's dimension is higher than the chat group's, so entering chat groups in other dimensions is useless. This is a good idea, similar to "The Strongest Shopkeeper," where you can always escape if you can't win later on.

Okay, this is seriously bad. I told you to reflect on your actions and not get arrogant, but you forgot as soon as you walked in and started getting arrogant. And what the hell did you change "martial arts and demons" into? Low-level martial arts characters can easily have several tons or even tens of tons of power? Doesn't high-level martial arts mean they can be compared to immortals and gods?

Author, how much do you look down on college students? The protagonist doesn't even have a plan, let alone a particularly meticulous one.

The beginnings were somewhat interesting... But then it went back to being a run-of-the-mill movie, always so boring! As soon as I see anything like Chronicle, telekinesis, or The Return of the Condor Heroes, I immediately lose all desire to continue watching.