Knowledge Notes

There are too many things and too little, so I always ask for leave and get bad reviews!

Author, you have too few words per chapter. You only have half of others.

It feels really bad. What is this writing about? Have you looked at any fantasy novels that include a cultivation genre? Also, you gave the protagonist a golden finger that was knowledge-based, but made the protagonist a warrior. A good mage type character. Must be bent into a warrior. Whether the number of words in each piece is enough to reach 1,000 is a question. Really nothing interesting

The number of words in each chapter is too few, only half that of other books.

Let me share a small problem, the content of several chapters is not very coherent. If read alone, it can be regarded as a short story!

You, the author, are such a cheat, I was so confused when I saw it. What happened to Goldfinger? What is its reward mechanism? I saw that when the protagonist got a bottle of wine, he got an alchemy secret book. Did I miss it? Also, the protagonist is only ten years old and seems to be an orphan. Who supports him? Feed yourself? Where did you get the money to learn knight training?

Your total number of sheets. Number of leaves requested. That's 1/15.

My point of view is to delete things like cultivating immortals. If you want magic, be magical. Delete things from other worldviews. World rules are not applicable. Systematically collect knowledge and lock this world Then don't talk about cultivating immortals. Talk less about the settings of other novels. I don't even know whether Emperor Huang Tian exists or not. Just give a brief introduction to the world of the novel. Power division, occupational classification, energy classification. I will give you a brief introduction to the knight profession, but I didn't say anything else. I only saw the protagonist running for squad leader. I'm afraid it will be useless to write about it later. The first few chapters are not exciting. Usually, I just abandon the book