The Twin Sons of Naruto
木叶双生子
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 479k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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225Chapters
5.9kRecommendations
34.9kFans
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I've always wondered, if Minato sealed both Nine-Tails inside his son, wouldn't that mean he didn't use the Reaper Death Seal? Then Orochimaru could have summoned the Fourth Hokage when Konoha collapsed.
Regarding the explanation of the female protagonist, the Hyuga main family.
Straight to Chapter 81: Dad's Heartache. There is a detailed explanation there.
Original content featuring supporting characters... This kind of thing will basically drive away 70% of readers.
I can even subscribe to books about Naruto where the ninjas at the top of the food chain are playing through the pain, but I can't stand this kind of story that follows the plot. The world has clearly changed a long time ago, but they still insist that the plot is the biggest reliance. And then they sneakily give the Third Hokage information about the plan to destroy Konoha. You have both a shameless and a virtuous reputation!
Naruto is truly dark. The Fourth Hokage contributed so much to the village, yet his son was treated like this in return. If it were a normal person, betraying and destroying Konoha would be more understandable. 🤫
The biggest problem 1. Every time I form a hand seal, I have to use water to soak it. 2. Where did the protagonist get so much information? He just spews it out like beans. Are the other characters idiots? Don't they even consider the issue of information? In other aspects, it's fairly standard; similar setups have been seen before.
When Minato was a child, the protagonist probably resembled his father more than Naruto... Right?
Wow! Only 300,000 words and they're already having a showdown with Akatsuki? That's fast-paced! What's the author planning to write next?! Is the book going to end before it even reaches 500,000 words?!
It was actually quite painful to read. You might as well have written about other characters. If you're going to write about Naruto's younger brother, fine, but stop using Naruto to highlight how great the protagonist is. The writing style is also mediocre. No wonder your book did so poorly.
It would be perfect if it could be gender-modified like this (ಡωಡ)