The Twin Sons of Naruto

I have been thinking, if Minato sealed both Nine-Tails in his son, does that mean that Minato did not use the corpse seal, and Orochimaru could summon the fourth generation when Konoha collapsed?

Directly to Chapter 81: Dad's sadness. Detailed explanation there.

Original supporting characters,,, this thing will basically drive away 70% of readers

I can even subscribe to books about ninjas at the top of the food chain, who play the role of Hokage, but I just can't stand the plot. The world has obviously changed a long time ago, but the plot is the biggest reliance, and I secretly give the third generation of information about Konoha's plan to destroy Konoha. You have it!

Naruto is really dark. The fourth generation contributed so much to the village, but in exchange his son was treated like this. It would be more normal if a normal person rebelled and destroyed Konoha 🤫

The biggest problem 1. Every time you make a seal, you have to get a drink of water 2. Where does the protagonist get so much information? He spits it out like pouring beans. Are the others mentally retarded? They don't consider the issue of intelligence Other aspects are quite satisfactory. Similar settings have been done a long time ago.

When Minato was a child, the protagonist should have been more like his father than Naruto... . . . . .

Damn it! It's only 300,000 words before the decisive battle with Akatsuki. The pace is so fast! What does the author plan to write next? Could it be that the book has been completed with less than 500,000 words?

In fact, it's quite uncomfortable to read. You might as well just write about other people. When you write about Naruto's younger brother, let him be his younger brother. Don't always use Naruto to highlight how stupid the protagonist is. The writing is also average. No wonder your book's scores are so poor.

It would be perfect if she could be a girl like this (ಡωಡ)