Long Night of Lost Songs

The book is good and full of ideas, keep it up.

Personally, I think the logic is a bit stuck. At the beginning, "he" was used a bit too much, but everything else is still very good. The writing style needs to be improved, come on! Hope it's useful to you.

Hurry up and update it. It's not enough at all.

For people like me who are quick to read, it is very uncomfortable to read. Like me, I seem to speak too fast and pass by in a flash. After reading a chapter, I can't even understand the plot, which is uncomfortable... I personally feel that it is better to talk more about the dialogue of the characters, describe it more carefully, and intersperse a little description between the words.