Immortal Space

I have been reading novels for 13 years. This novel actually makes people want to read it more and more. The author is actually a newbie? All I can say is you are a genius. You are destined to be a good writer of novels. Except for some minor flaws in the details, the entire concept and layout are perfect. There is one thing you must pay attention to next. Next, the protagonist must use some kind of adventure in the immortal space. Then he became an elite who leapfrogged the challenge. The plot must be reasonable. Never try to conquer a larger realm. If you develop in this direction, readers will not get bored as they read later. Many novels just don't grasp this degree well, which makes them more boring and boring for readers as they read. In the end, most of them abandoned the book. Personally, I can barely finish two out of ten novels at most. It's not that I don't have money to watch it, it's that it's not worth my money to watch it. I summarized the fantasy novels over the years. Most people give up on this book, not because the author didn't grasp the details well. There are nine books out of ten. They all happen to the protagonist. There is only one copy left. There are just too many female protagonists, and many people don't like to watch studs. Author, think about it, readers can see more than 100 pictures in a book. Even two or three hundred. It shows that readers recognize the novels you wrote earlier. Otherwise, if your writing is not good, the first few, dozen or dozens of pages will basically be discarded, and it is impossible to read more than 100 chapters. Then here comes the problem. What is the reason? There's only one problem. That's the protagonist. For example, the main character is abusive, and the protagonist's abilities are not outstanding enough and are mediocre. For example, you can't fight beyond the level. For example, the protagonist can conquer a great realm and still win. After just one or two of them, it will become boring and impossible to watch. Especially during the period when your novel is being serialized. Because the author is too late to update. I have found novels of the same kind that are better than yours. Then when I look back, I may delete the previous novel. So you have to keep readers coming back. This is the first time I have written a review of so many words. I really don't want your genius to be buried. Write a novel well. You definitely have a future. Come on!

I also think the book is beautiful! ! ! The book is beautiful! ! ! The book is beautiful! ! ! Say the key points three times! ! ! Although the author's writing style is not very strong, it is much better than the pretentious slaps in the face that some authors like to write! It's not like some book reviews say it's written like a primary school student. I can't write at the level of a junior high school student! (Facepalm) If the author is a newbie, he would have written really well! ! It's just that the protagonist in the article doesn't have any big adventures except meeting his golden finger space! The author could have just given him another great adventure. (Not forced) Also, I like the protagonist very much and don't want the protagonist to die alone. If I can't create a heroine who can match the protagonist, Shui Rou'er is actually not bad! I don't recommend Harem (of course this is just a suggestion). It took me more than two days to read it in one go, and now I give the author good reviews! ! Come on! ! !

The author has made great progress. From the first 2-30 chapters, which were quite satisfactory, he gradually developed his own style. Now, I feel that the more I read, the more interesting and exciting it becomes. 2500 coins offered! Come on!

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that there are too many poisonous points. I will list them one by one below. Welcome to the bad guys. (1) The monetary system collapsed. It was said earlier that during the Qi training period, the maximum number of spiritual stones could be several hundred or thousands, but the single item sold at an auction during one Qi training period could reach hundreds of thousands. (2) The author does not remember events and does not match the context. 300+ Blood Ganoderma sold for 14,000, but two sold at auction for 90,000. Can one auction double your stuff? (3) The world of cultivating immortals is too white. Who would dare to buy at an auction held in a city with a Golden Elixir Stage, where a Foundation Establishment Stage monk could use his coercion to threaten others? ? (4) The protagonist is trash. Not an ordinary waste, with the same 4 spiritual roots, Shouhou reached the same level as the protagonist with far fewer resources than the protagonist. Among ordinary people, they are also useless. What's the use of having so many resources? ? There are too many left, so keep reading and pick out bit by bit to complain about.

It's quite interesting to watch, but the author's control of details is too poor. The rest are pretty good, nothing toxic, and there are only a few disgusting routines. But the details are really hard to describe. Such as spiritual stones and shops. The author's setting requires the use of foundation-building pills except Tianlinggen, otherwise it will be useless. Then there is the old routine of the secret realm where the outside is extinct, and only by practicing Qi can you enter and step on the foundation-building medicinal materials. One pill of Foundation Establishment Pill was auctioned for 350,000 spirit stones. I don't know how it will be round when the Foundation Establishment is all over the ground in the later stage 2 Shop Pig's Trotter You opened a brewing shop because you had space to grow medicine, but you offended a family in the city and couldn't leave the city. However, the shop's monthly business was very good. Aren't others suspicious? They are constantly being sold every month and there is no way to purchase them. Even a fool knows that there is something going on. He has opened an alchemy shop again. It is probably like this. I haven't finished reading it yet. Overall, if the author perfects these details, I think this book will be really good.

They have all transformed into gods and refined their bodies, but there is still no heroine. Not a stallion, but having dysfunction is even more disgusting 🤢

Sorry, the foreman refused to get off work while moving bricks at the construction site today, so the update is a bit late.

12 Monthly passes, it's no problem to add more, right?

I really don't understand. Doesn't the protagonist have the formula for the Jingyuan Pill? If he didn't hand it in because he was afraid of being thought of changing his ways to become an immortal, but he was so forced that the demon clan killed all the mortals. Why didn't he announce it? The release of this elixir will not do any harm to the protagonist, but it can effectively fight against the demon clan. Too selfish. Real. It's fine if you're afraid of danger, but the protagonist just doesn't want to make friends. I don't want to see it anymore when I see this. So disgusting. The writing is so rubbish. It's clearly written about the protagonist farming in a low-key manner, and it also writes about a race war. Do you want to end it by writing the protagonist in the end? Don't be rubbish. It's okay at first, but the more you read later, the more disgusting it becomes.

What a nonsense, a bunch of mortals created their own kung fu! Even the most rubbish exercises have been continuously summarized and revised by countless ancestors over hundreds of millions of years with their blood and lives. The author used his brain! If anything.

This book can't be read without thinking. The poisonous points come one after another... It's dizzying... And there are still a lot of people saying it's good to read 🥵

Everyone can cultivate immortality, and it will collapse at the beginning! Because in a world where everyone can cultivate immortality, there will be no casual cultivators at all, they will all be family cultivators! For cultivating immortals with spiritual roots, only a few hundred or thousands of monks can be produced from a family with millions of mortals, so that casual cultivators and ordinary immortal cultivators can survive. If everyone can use resources to become an immortal, then millions of mortals in the Immortal Cultivation Family can become immortals. Why would the Immortal Cultivation Family leave resources to you, casual cultivators and ordinary people? Originally, a cultivating family could only have a few hundred monks, but now there are millions of monks. How can ordinary people and casual cultivators survive?

It doesn't matter if I write about the secular world in the early stage, but after finally seeing the first level of Qi training, you actually told me that you are going to lead a group of mortals without spiritual roots to cultivate immortality. The reason is to use the immortal cultivation technique to transform the internal energy into spiritual power. The iron rule in the world of cultivating immortals is that you cannot cultivate immortality without spiritual roots. Otherwise, why did Mo Caihuan's sentence in the biography of mortals cultivating immortals, "Is it really impossible to cultivate immortality without spiritual roots?" Touched so many people. If you don't have spiritual roots, how can you practice immortality cultivation techniques? ? ?

After reading some, like many immortal cultivation novels, there is an unbreakable agreement such as a blood contract. I have always believed that an oath with Tiandao or other contracts cannot be violated. This is a kind of class rule. If you cannot violate it, you will be asked to sign a blood contract when you join the sect, and it is the kind of slavery, the kind that involves death, and you can't break the contract anyway! In the face of absolute strength, you have to sign or die! A world with this thing is definitely a pyramid world! There will be one person on top, enslaved below, and below enslaved! And it's the kind without reflexivity!

Doesn't the author himself know? Where did so much luck come from while growing up? How many fat persimmons are there in the world that can be pinched? If you have a fairy space, you should manage the fairy space well. If you can make an elixir, make it well. You want to go to a secret realm. There is no shortage of resources. Why are you venturing into a secret realm? Do you really think that the protagonist's halo is so invincible? The skills are ordinary, just relying on some messy little tricks, but the eighth level of Qi training requires killing an elite team of dozens of people. These people are elite disciples of the Nascent Soul Sect, and the entry requirements are ridiculously high. The protagonist got in without even going through the test. In that test, it seems that only a hundred formal disciples can be selected out of ten thousand people, and all of them are people with outstanding combat capabilities. Those who can enter the secret realm are not afraid of death, and their combat power cannot be underestimated. Surprisingly, the protagonist was almost killed and besieged by dozens of people simply by himself. He also withstood the concentrated fire of dozens of late-stage qi-training elites, and was able to withstand it with the help of high-grade defensive magic weapons.

I saw that the first-level barrier-breaking pill cost 10,000 and can be easily refined. In Chapter 117, the second-level Yuan Yang Dan cost 260 and was sold for more than 50,000. The previous foundation-building pill cost 400,000 spiritual stones and can be easily refined. I can't stand it. What are your settings? Does the author have any brains? The whole thing is wrong. Why don't you read the book you wrote again? Wherever there are flaws, they should be corrected. A novice is a novice, so give up decisively.

After reading a few chapters, I thought it was okay. Suddenly I found that the label actually had a single female protagonist, and I didn't want to read it. You said you either have no heroine or multiple heroines. Isn't the single heroine disgusting?

I recommend two of the best novels for everyone to read: "Beiyuan Immortal Clan" and "The Way of Alchemy". These two books are also farming novels. You can come and read them when you are short of books! ! ! If you have a stream of cultivating immortals and farming, you can also recommend it to me! ! ! You can leave me a message! !

It's well written, I like it very much, but there are too few updates. Come on💪Added to book list

9 Monthly passes! Can I add more sperm? ! ! 😥

It's really well written and really promising. You have to work hard and keep writing. Come on, author.

It was okay in the early days, but the more I watched it, the more unpleasant it became. For example, each sect was not allowed to deal with other sect disciples openly, but someone had posted a video of the attack on Realm City, and there were no other sects publicly condemning or punishing the Qi family of the Spirit Beast Sect, especially the protagonist. His sect and master acted as if nothing had happened. He didn't even say a word. He just said that the Qi family felt shameful. And before, he said that the sect was for cohesion and loyalty, but it felt awkward, false, and unreasonable, and he felt a sigh of relief in his heart.

It was okay to read during the book shortage, but later on when a kingdom was actually established, I always saw His Majesty actually acting in the fairy tales, so I gave up halfway through reading it. Reading the comments, you still don't think it's a single female protagonist? And a queen and concubine? Fortunately, mines were cleared and losses were eliminated, so no more time was wasted.

The introduction is a bit discouraging, especially the military training formation... To put it nicely, it is innovative, but to put it badly, it feels like nonsense.

It is extremely poisonous. Even though he knows that the demon clan has Yuanying and only Jindan, he still clings to that piece of ground, and he doesn't raise any banner for others to throw in. There is no advantage in that piece of land, so he just clings to that piece of land and waits for Yuanying to come to kill him. The protagonist's intelligence has fallen to such an outrageous level.

If you want to read it, I advise you not to read it. After reading more than 20 chapters, you will know what it is called. The extremely poisonous weapons are leveled one by one, and they are about to form a sect. Moreover, you can counter-kill two on the third level of practice, two on the third level of qi training, and then when the manpower is full of people and machines, you can use one level of practice to start a sect with more than 40 mortals cultivating immortals.

What's the use of the protagonist's younger brother? He doesn't even help the protagonist at all. He has to desperately stuff all kinds of resources into him. He's not as useful as a subordinate. Needless to say, the rest are all kinds of poisonous points.

The themes are well conceived, but they are a bit arbitrary. So many big guys have not taken the path of cultivation that ordinary people can do, but you rookies can actually do it. You can actually practice dozens of alchemy furnaces at a time. You can become invincible even if you plant some devil vines in the stronghold outside the mountain. The disguised demon can swagger in the demon's territory. I really want to be there. I am playing a good hand.

The part about saving Cai Xuanzhi was disgusting. Since it was a deal, he still hid it and refused to give it to her. She obviously benefited the most and cured her own illness. How can we not learn formation techniques? What kind of deal is this? Isn't this just sparing no effort to treat this woman?

There is only a sect. Where does the academy come from? Others train you and then release it. In my dream, if there is an academy, it will definitely only teach ordinary things. There will definitely be no exercises or anything like that, unless the exercises are popularized.