Immortality Essay Part 2

Suddenly I found out that seven people invested, thank you very much. It was shown that one person invested before. I always thought it was a system problem. In fact, no one read my book, and I was very shocked. New books by newcomers always have the feeling of being produced by Shanren. Your investment is really inspiring to Pindao. Thank you. I have been thinking about this book for more than three years, and the content will definitely make readers feel fresh and new. However, Pindao has been thinking too much in the past three years but did not know how to write more to hone his writing skills. So now I have to write it down while looking for opportunities to improve my writing skills. I hope you will forgive me. I would like to thank you all for your investment. I don't know the specific mechanism of the investment, and I don't know whether it will be beneficial in the end. However, your actions really touched my heart, and I have a feeling that I am not alone in my opinion. The poor man is ambitious and will definitely work hard. Thank you.

Due to time constraints, I watched it very quickly. Overall, the plot is very full and viewers can be immersed in it and immerse themselves in it. It was well paced and didn't bore me. Maybe the author focused on polishing the outline but not on the practice of writing. Therefore, many places are too deliberate and make people uncomfortable to watch. In the first book, you should cultivate your character and polish your writing skills. If you have time, read the four major classics, observe their words and sentences, and figure out the intention of writing. After reading it, it is much better than what I wrote, but the time has not come yet, and the writing style still needs to grow. You have to learn to be a storyteller. I recommend you to read the works of Yu Mo Da. I think that every book is a masterpiece, the pinnacle of childhood memories. The current Dragon King is also my favorite work. His words are easy to fall into. I hope you can read it when you have time.

The signing of this book was unsuccessful, and the author was not satisfied with the writing style of the previous article, so he abandoned the article and turned to the Creation Fairy Heroes essay competition.

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