The Phantom City Pagoda

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I was a little speechless. I think the author's basic writing style is passable, and his ideas for writing books are not lacking. This mixture of the fighting world and the world view of the demon hunter is also very interesting. But this book is really getting boring the more I read it. Before entering V, it was barely better. After joining V, I felt that what I was reading was not a novel at all, but a story. Instead, I'm looking at an outline diluted with complaints and personal arguments. There are even many chapters where the author uses inexplicable explanations and discussions on some boring issues that have little impact on the story, and the whole paid chapter is perfunctory. Made me feel like I was being fooled like a fool. After looking at the author's writing experience, he has written several books. Why is it still like this? Although it may be a bit harsh, I still advise the author: If you really plan to make money by writing books. Please ignore the rainbow farts in your book club and book review section and get out of your comfort zone. Think carefully about how to write a novel.

The last book was so sad, and I still wanted to see where Lao Liupu was so big, and where the background and imagination were. Fortunately, this book is also a veteran, which is a consolation. Come on, author

It's too watery. The more I write about it, the more watery it becomes. I enjoyed reading it at first, but it became more and more painful as I read it later.

The structure is too loose, and you can't see through the hammers here and there.

The so-called old guns are those second-rate men in Beijing who used to go to the artillery camp labor camp.

Is Pig Knuckle a person who has lived for hundreds of years? After rebirth, my strength is not good, I know that the world is not normal, and I still perform magic rituals to death. I am still so stubborn that I perform it on the night of the carnival. The reason is that I forgot the date and was drunk. How can Pigfoot not forget who he is? What is the difference between this ability to commit suicide and those characters who die in third-rate American horror movies?

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. There are too many characters. I wrote a lot about important and unimportant ones, and each one is very long. I wish I could write an autobiography for each character. After reading hundreds of pictures, I feel like I'm lost.

I like the writing very much, but I can't understand it more and more. The main line of the story is vague, and the narrative is too skewed 🙂 What's wrong with the author?

This novel is so painful to read. . . . I have now read more than 20 chapters of the second volume, and I feel that there is really no theme, and the writing style is actually a little tiring, and as mentioned in the previous post, it keeps introducing the background of the world. The protagonist's style is very mature but not like a strong man. The tricks he uses do not feel like he has inherited the ability of the previous strong man (the previous one?). The upgrade is too slow. After reading this chapter, it said that the previous world almost penetrated the Marvel universe. Even though he is so strong, he is still struggling with daily life. . . The title seemed novel at first, but now I find that it cannot summarize the theme of this chapter at all, and there is no goal in even skipping chapters. How can I put it, this book is relatively unfriendly to new readers