The Great Lord of the Wizarding World

I want to write a long review, but as soon as I log in to the computer, I find that the starting point on the PC side can't even find the comment area. Sigh, it's hard to finish typing on my mobile phone... In general, first of all, I would like to support the author. The Witcher game can be regarded as the leading fantasy RPG of the year. It is still popular today, and its reputation is as good as the ceiling. There are even six or seven relatively well-known original works and new American TV series, but there are surprisingly few online articles using this as the background. Compared with fan fiction about the world of the witcher, the Game of Thrones genre feels like it belongs to the general public. The author's courage in choosing such a subject is commendable and deserves encouragement. So far, this is not so much one of the "few" excellent works as "the only one". I have not found any other works with the same theme. I really can't say how excellent this work is, but at least it has gotten rid of the novice writing style and chronicle-style plot writing. The protagonist's character and behavior are generally reasonable. For me, it is a completely watchable work in terms of look and feel (this requirement is really It's not too high, but it's still unavoidable that more than half of the works on Qidian's recommended lists can't even do this. In other words, in my opinion, this book beats half of the recommended works on Qidian's lists) plus the extra points of the IP of The Witcher, to me it can be regarded as an excellent work. Because of the background of the original work, it is inevitable that there will be some magic changes, blurring, and settings added by oneself. I think the author will give some explanations for these after the chapters. I don't say whether the additions and changes are good or not (I personally think there is no problem, and I fully accept a certain degree of adaptation). But at least it can be seen that the author is writing carefully, and the original settings are used very carefully, which can be praised. I see that there are basically two problems in this book that are visible to the naked eye and are easiest to correct. One is the supporting character names and place names that are purely playful. It is okay to play with it in small amounts, and it may even give people a sense of humor, but it is not necessary to overplay it. It is really a bit of a joke. The current level is still within an acceptable range, but looking at the progress of the plot, if we use the game The Witcher 3 as a time coordinate, there are still more than ten years (plot years) to write. If we get some bosses other than Wild Hunt, we really still have to write. I hope the author will play tricks appropriately in the future; The other one is the casting of the heroine, but there is nothing to say about this. There is nothing we can do if the author has chosen Triss, but I still have to indicate which stock I am investing in. If you ask me to choose between Y and T, then I will also choose T. But I'm sorry, everyone gave me the choice, and I have no choice. If you have a question, choose Ciri, don't ask, just ask because I'm greedy for her As for other problems, there are indeed them, but it may not be easy to change them. For example, the setting of "the first sight of Lailai leads to a lifelong mistake", how can I put it, this is a common problem in Internet literature, and I personally don't like it. I don't mind a harem, let alone pure love. I've seen a lot of pure love that looks like a harem, but it's more of a joke. But really speaking, when describing the relationship between a female supporting character and the protagonist, I still prefer a relationship that is acquaintances, family ties, or mutual respect and help. Even one-sided worship and admiration is more popular with me than simple love or liking between men and women. I hope that this aspect can be improved for future female supporting characters! Next is the original plot. Let me tell you straight, I am looking forward to Dandelion's adventure story. This kind of pretentious part that uses the super star's own adventure to write a bardic story to set off the protagonist is old-fashioned, but I just like it. I hope it can be arranged. The last thing is the problem of the "system", but this may involve a lot of foreshadowing by the author, so it may not be said to be a problem. As of now, the most important aspect of the protagonist's identity has not yet been revealed, which is whether he is a "traveler" or a "native who has gained part of his memory." To be honest, in the chapters before Awakening of Dragon Power, I felt that the author himself was downplaying this issue. "System" may not want to give people a sense of a system cheat-style novel, but to be honest, when I see this subject matter and the writing style is decent, even if you tell me now that this is a system cheat-finger novel, I will still read it. Maybe it would be better to explain this directly. But now, the author suddenly brought this system out again and talked about it in a big way. I'm not sure whether this is a foreshadowing. It depends on what the author writes next. Thousands of words can be summarized in one sentence. I hope the author can persevere. He does not seek to write a masterpiece, but seeks to have a complete beginning and a complete end. It's not easy to find a book with a witcher background, and it's even harder to find one that I can read. It's a once-in-a-lifetime experience that I find the protagonist's setting interesting. It's fate. Come on, author!

Emmmm, I thought it was Lord Holy Light. . .

Can the names of those people be simpler? There are too many characters and the names are hard to remember. I felt dizzy after reading Chapter 5.

I think sorceresses are not suitable as marriage partners. Even if the heroine is a ghoul, she is better than a sorceress. Of course, maybe you can consider a female royal griffon. Royal griffins are famously loyal to their partners.

I hate novels where the protagonist is a child.

I played The Witcher 3 and it left me with a deep impression of a world full of danger and discrimination. It's strange. The humans in the game are not strong, but the witches they can fight have no backhand ability. Even the witchers have to avoid three points. The two gatekeepers at the baron's door are so powerful. They took care of me in two or three times and took a bunch of people to fight the Lady in the Forest. The soldiers were made of paper. I was afraid that I would miss one person if I bumped into them.

Overall, it's pretty good. There are very few novels about wizards, and the young ones need to be cared for.

As an indigenous protagonist, no wonder his results are dismal...

Updates may have to stop for two or three days because of the appearance of the Harmony chapter content. Change it as soon as possible to prevent 404. I have read all the comments. Thank you to the book friends who support. It's normal to get trolled when you write an online article, but it's better to be more rational and well-founded. The beginning of this book may not be so friendly to non-wizard players. The problem has been discovered and is being adjusted. No tj~(￣▽￣~)~

After reading Chapter 70 or 80, Triss found it hard to accept this. She was like an innocent little girl. At least she was no different from other sorceresses during the time period of the original novel, especially before she met Geralt. She played lanjiao, tongxing, and used magic to seduce Geralt when Yennefer and Geralt were separated. The author's writing is like traveling through time in The Legend of the Condor Heroes, only to be late. Little Dragon Girl fell in love with Yang Guo, and was defiled by Zhen Zhibing before you came. Then the author said that none of this happened. You can just chase Little Dragon Girl. It's a parallel world 😅. There are countless ways for time travelers to change the ending, but they should change the character before the ending happens instead of simply and crudely changing the plot.

Stop bragging about Poland, you are a Polish idiot now.

With the live-action version of The Witcher coming out, I suddenly want to watch The Witcher

Those who hold wages for everyone should not be allowed to freeze to death in the wind and snow. I have never liked the world view of the wizarding world. I will kill randomly if conditions permit.

This is a diary, not a novel at all. Still licking the dog

The protagonist really has no sense of existence. It feels like the protagonist is basically just playing tricks all the time. There is no conflict or ***.

The writing is too fragmented, with a hammer in one place and a stick in the other. Although you said it has multiple protagonists, please keep your perspective on the protagonist. After all, if you want to watch White Wolf, you should read the original work.

Let me ask in advance, is the protagonist a time traveler or an aborigine?

He is obviously a time traveler, but he knows nothing about the characters and plots of the wizarding world. It is extremely awkward to watch! This is also the biggest reason why this book is not popular! There is obviously a system but it is hidden! Then there are too many characters and dialogues in the opening chapter! It is difficult to understand for those who are not a big fan of The Witcher and have some knowledge of the original novel. The name is also a bit confusing.

The author cited a lot of names in the article, but apart from the characters who appear in the game, few of them can be remembered. If the author has time to tell readers about the chapters where supporting characters appear, he might as well write more about the characters' characteristics.

There are far more elements of palace fighting and aristocratic intrigue than magic.

The results will be much better if the protagonist is a time traveler, because there is a sense of involvement.

I feel like it won't be updated, which is a pity. I wish the author good luck in his future work.

Fan fiction about The Witcher game. Do you have any similar novels that you can recommend?

It's been a year since I stopped. Will the author update again? Or are you going to open a new book?

It is a pity that a rare good book was lost due to family changes. After all, if writing a book is not popular, the income will not be enough, so work hard in the future.

Damn it, it was updated. The author is great. Can you continue to update it in the future?

It has been updated. Thank you, author. Can you continue to update it in the future?

How often does it take to update a chapter now?

Damn it, I died young, my broken limbs were reborn

Tris suddenly confessed to you, which is completely incomprehensible. Putting aside the question of whether it can happen, you didn't have any emotional foreshadowing at all, right? It's very strange, isn't it?