Juggernaut Should Have a Meat Suit

The power system is okay, but it's reckless. I've never thought there was anything toxic about it, but recently I feel it's very unreasonable. The protagonist is already a legend, and his power is close to that of a god, but he still feels "ashamed" when facing mortals? A strong person should have the majesty of a strong person. When a person becomes stronger, his vision will also change. Have you ever seen the richest man say "shame" to a commoner? Or would a giant feel "ashamed" of a helpless child? I personally have an opinion and I hope the author will take it into consideration. Don't let the power system collapse, and I hope this book gets better and better.

After reading a few chapters, let's talk about it. It's a short article. There are too many descriptions in my mind. You've said everything. What do we readers think of it for? The number of words at the beginning of each chapter is copied from the end of the previous chapter. It's okay, but the writing is terrible. The actions of the protagonist in each chapter are explained clearly and clearly, and there is no sense of substitution at all. It's like a 25-minute anime video. The introduction is ten minutes, the content is five minutes, and the ending song is ten minutes, emmm. . . . . Another simple metaphor (Xiao Yan slashed out with a sword, and the sword energy was so fierce that hundreds of masked people had no time to react, and their heads were in different places.) ☜This is a description in someone else's novel. (Chen saw that the opponent was punching him, but he did not flinch, and also punched him, because the opponent was shorter than him, and I have the blood of the Barbarian King. He is definitely not as strong as me in terms of strength, recovery speed, or physical defense. Not to mention I have a fatal blow and endless anger. The most important thing is that I have a tall physique of 44 points. I will definitely win. I saw Chen hit him with a punch, and the air vibrated with a loud bang, and the person on the other side flew out of his mouth, spitting out a mouthful of blood...) ☜This is the description of the fight in this book, and there are actually a lot of bbs flying out, and there are all kinds of embarrassments to the people around him. . . . . The punch incident was over in one chapter, and the ending paragraph will be copied at the beginning of the second chapter. . . . . . . Slipping away. . . I can't stand it, even if I don't have intelligence.

But the setting was ruined    I don't know what this author thinks. He talks about adding willpower to suppress ghost hands every day but never adds domineering. Why, the ghost skill is too strong and is not allowed to be used. If you don't use it together, you don't need to add it. Whenever you remember to use ghost hand, you can add ghost hand. You don't dare to use soul-killing hand anymore. You have to forcefully cancel your own skills. This skill is just for the sake of early success Tiantian said that he was a swordsman, but in the end he couldn't use any sword moves except for the system skills. I doubted that the master level swordsmanship was given the wrong name. You called it the master level of will. Except for a shock, I have never seen anyone use sword moves to fight. It is said that physical fitness is useful. At any rate, you should use normal attacks in fights, and only use skills. If normal attacks are useless, then what is the use of master level swordsmanship? What else do you need to practice? It's not enough to just use skills. How about using water words? ? He said that he was not agile enough but never ordered Swordsman. He also made various excuses that he was as fast as a barbarian, and then added various constitutions, but the result was that the agility was still not lost. Even after adding 100 points of constitution, the agility was still the same as that of the barbarians. Then you might as well just delete the agility. If your attributes are good, don't be affected by his constitution. In order to increase agility, you forcefully add passive to Yasuo's ultimate move. Then there is no description after that. The harm of low agility is not mentioned in the whole process. It is useless to increase agility. So why do you need to use constitution to affect his agility? If you don't mention it, you don't need to add passive skills to your skills and then make up for it. You are reducing agility just for the sake of improving the number of characters. I don't see any danger if your constitution is not enough. Anyway, the protagonist is tired and decided to increase his constitution, so he went crazy and added blood and constitution.

You cannot read this book too carefully, otherwise, you will not be able to hold on. Various, anti-human, sentence fragmentation, repetition, word choice, grammar, errors. It makes me feel like I have a bad tone when speaking.

This book is too watery and rubbish. It is full of verbiage and the psychological activities are too silly.

I read more than 50 chapters in a row and talk about my thoughts. First of all, there are too many descriptions of the protagonist's psychological activities, and more of them are meaningless water characters. Another point is to keep emphasizing on how much physical fitness you have. Whenever there is a fight, you will basically say it two or three times. Overall, the brainstorming is very good, but it is too serious. Many things are actually mentioned in isolation, and there is no need to write them down. However, it always ends up extending a lot of useless things. Also, I was too careless about what I wrote. In the chapter on Ghost Hands, it was very simple mathematics within ten. Authors can make mistakes. It really makes people feel a little speechless, because it is a very obvious mistake. This kind of low-level mistake should not be made. The following point is purely a personal opinion. After reading more than 50 chapters, the protagonist, as a time-traveler, is too reckless in my opinion. Although the overall point of this novel is recklessness, as a developer who can develop games and is a time-traveler. It gives people the impression of being brainless and reckless, for the sake of being reckless. If you are an indigenous person, I can accept this setting. Shan Tu gives the impression that he is a time traveler who has already had some social experience. It's just very dramatic, after all, there is no need to do many things like that. After all, from the beginning, this is a very strange world view. The protagonist didn't even understand the most basic situation, so he started to rush out of the totem area to kill the wandering souls. I think as a person with certain experience, this kind of omission even the most basic thinking. This time travel is actually a failure. It would be better to write it directly as indigenous people. I think it is more reasonable. The rest is the water word count. Many authors are obsessed with word count. A low word count is unavoidable, after all, the article also needs a certain amount of polishing. Dry text is unattractive. But the author clearly did it for the word count of water, and the word count of water. Crazy water word count in some useless places. But what is very amazing is that the overall rhythm is still well grasped. The word count is low in some useless places, and the pace is accelerated in some places. The overall plot doesn't seem too draggy. But it's better not to mention the number of words, but the way of words does have a great impact on the reader's experience. In terms of overall evaluation, ignore it. There are so many words about the word "water". It's a nice, mindless and refreshing article.

This is the only book I hope you can read in 300 chapters

1.28 Million words for one character? ? ? ? ? ? This? What do you think?

Point out some problems: 1. The article is a bit long-winded and has too many explanations. 2. In terms of format, there is a problem with the branching of paragraphs, and it feels scattered at first glance. 3. Judging from the title of the novel, it should have a strong humor element, but it is not strong in the text (I only read about chapters seventeen or eight, so if there is any improvement later, I will ignore it)

Let me first explain the title of this novel: Juggernaut refers to the four major professional sword gods of the dungeon, Ghost Swordsman, Sword Soul, Ghost Crying Asura, and combined with the weird skills to become flesh, the title of the book, Juggernaut, should come out with a meat suit! The plot is about the invasion of evil gods, and various races begin to survive against evil gods and strange soldiers! The protagonist travels through a barbarian race (a race that attacks high-intelligence but low-intelligence) where force is paramount and intelligence is low. The initial weapon is a giant sword... Ji (💪🏻) Daowen! After a long time, there is a high probability that it will feel poisonous! At first I was following the update and I thought it was very exciting and violent...

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author should update quickly. Twelve monthly votes and four recommendation votes have been given to the author. 🔨

How should I put it? This book uses the guise of time travel to forcibly create a system (I'm so confused). The protagonist seems to have never received the education of the original world and is full of brains and muscles. Why do he want to travel through time? It is better to directly imagine that meteorites will land in the entire system (violation, traveling through time for the sake of time travel). After reading 40 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up on the book.

I'm halfway through subscribing and I can't stand it anymore. Is the author a gangster who has exhausted his talent? Each chapter has 2/3 of the word count. In every chapter, you talk about how awesome the pig's feet are. You can write them down occasionally, but it's like this in every chapter. The plot is not advanced and the mode is fixed. I changed the book.

I'm a cuckold, Chapter 31, I looked down upon it

Isn't he the Three-Star Sword Saint and the Anti-armor Maniac?

There are so few updates. Why do you update once a day? ? ?

I highly recommend a new fantasy work "The Holy Spirit". It has a good storyline. Friends who are not interested in reading can check it out.

As long as the author updates 10 chapters a day, I will reward you 100 yuan! 10 Chapters every day, reward 100 yuan every day!

3 Monthly passes, plus 4 daily recommendations, can you please add more?

Think about it, a 1.8 Meter sword, five centimeters thick and four centimeters wide, is it an iron bar or a sword? I won't complain about the rest.

The subject matter of this novel is really good, and the first few chapters are also very in line with my taste. Although it is a bit watery, I can understand it. It is more of a free chapter. I also thought that as long as the paid chapters are not like this, I can keep paying to read it. But I really didn't expect that the author dared to be so bad. I couldn't stand the paid chapters. To use an analogy, When the host acquires a skill, the author will write about this skill in great detail. I can understand this. This will let readers know what role this skill can play in this world and how it is different from the game and anime. It can also block the mouths of some trolls to prevent them from spraying nonsense. However, the author cannot write about the usefulness of this skill as soon as it is used. There are also some descriptions of battles, which are too wordy For example, how would it be written in some novels, where the protagonist punches out, breaking the bones and tendons on the opposite side, and flies dozens of meters away, with no one knows whether he will live or die How to write this book, where the opponent attacks the protagonist, The protagonist is not only not afraid, but also thinks that I am a barbarian, I am stronger than him, my physical strength is higher than him, my skills and so on, I can't lose, and then punch out, and then what happens to the opponent, plus some internal monologues of the appearance party below. One piece just passed This is how the author writes, and it is how he writes every time there is a similar battle. If he uses skills, he will write them again. After that, every time the protagonist upgrades and acquires new skills, general novel authors just write new skills. But the author of this book still insists on writing down all the skills of the protagonist. After writing, he also has to write down all the attributes of the protagonist, including skills. Author, you really don't treat readers as human beings.

Set a small goal, write 1 million.

The book is good, but at the end, I hate books with multiple female protagonists

No wonder it's not popular, it's sex every day. Who dares to write like this in the rankings?

No matter how poisonous or derogatory this book is, I still have to read it based on what the guy said about a 4-meter-meter man having sex with a 1-meter-4-meter lolita.

I have ordered all the books. I am not a junkie. I saw so many people scolding me in the comment area. I must come out to support the author. I like the book very much. I must work hard to write. I am waiting for updates every early morning. I know that the author has saved manuscripts and they are automatically updated after midnight.

Seeing that the bear can increase gravity by squatting and cracking the all-encompassing sky, I felt the smile of the physics teacher.

The reason why a sword master is a sword master is because of his sword skills. The body is strong and the power is huge. What does it have to do with the sword? Such a person can kill people with his fists, but he is a sword master with his sword?

Is master-level swordsmanship so reckless? I didn't understand the part about killing the bull, and your speed is already more than ten times that of an ordinary person, are you still slow? So how did your village hunt in the past? Is it all a trap? There are really loopholes everywhere, and there is also a problem with her attitude towards people. A girl works conscientiously at home and is very considerate of her family. Shouldn't she be moved? Why did he become like a watchdog? Gone ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ