Abnormal Laboratory

The title of the book is okay, but I suggest changing the cover to a horror one. Yours looks like someone engaged in weapons research and development. The introduction is short and weak, you can think about it yourself. The content is generally good, the writing style is relatively mature, the world framework is fairly well designed, the writing style is okay and can ensure smooth reading, and the rhythm of the writing is generally okay. I feel that the character of the protagonist is a little too conservative (he actually likes little girls?). Overall, he is still more of a rational researcher, without the feeling of a real scientific madman. It takes about ten chapters to lay out the world view, and then the thickest main line is brought out. There is not much content about research in between, which makes the reader feel a bit like selling a sheep's head to a dog's meat. It has a lot of things, but it does not actually hit the reader's point of enjoyment. It is recommended that the author let the protagonist develop more things that can be used on himself, and use the knife on himself. This way, the protagonist's ability will be improved and the readers will enjoy it, and it can also add a sense of abnormality to the character.

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