I Have a Star Fleet

The content does not match the title of the book at all. The author said that you are writing about the fleet with 500,000 to 1 million words, but could you think of the title before starting the book? Everyone was attracted by the title, but after writing for so long, not only did you not see the shadow of the fleet, but you also developed the fleet from scratch. As they said, this should be regarded as the farming development stream (urban type). I don't want to blame the author, it's just me. This is the first time I feel that this subject matter is very good. How you write it is up to you. However, your title and content make us readers feel like a lie. And I think you can reclassify it into categories so that new readers will not be put off by the content. My personal opinion

Author, are you right about the title of your novel? 😭😭😭

This new genre is really good. . . However, I lose. Although I usually don't comment on books, I feel that this book is such a pity. It has too many loopholes, really too many. If possible, I hope to rewrite it. 🙂

I can't stand it any longer and I'm leaving. I'm not looking for a sense of presence. I'm just expressing my gratitude for the author's behavior of selling dog meat to someone else's head. I regret it now and regret it very much. I regret not reading the book review carefully. You said why you put it in the science fiction category. Go away from romance, isn't it good in the city?

To be honest, if the writing style and details of the early stage are maintained, even if it is just an urban cool article, it will be very good. But the quality of the writing dropped drastically in the middle and later stages, as if I had hired a ghostwriter, and it was still a very cheap kind of ghostwriter. If the plot just doesn't suit my taste, I generally won't criticize it. After all, many people like urban cool novels. However, the quality of the writing in the later period is really a treasure trove of readers who subscribed.

Since most of the books I have read are fantasy, I will evaluate this book from the perspective of a novice. I came in last night because of the reward. I have read the updated chapters so far and will only comment on the above content. The introduction to this book is really excellent. I became interested in reading it at the first glance. Then there is the beginning. I also like the character of the emperor very much. After all, I am a novice. The urban protagonists I have read are all losers. The content is about counterattacks and chasing goddesses to make big money. The protagonist of this book climaxes without seeing a beautiful girl, which makes me very satisfied. The author's writing seems very comfortable, there is nothing particularly embarrassing or forced to show off (note that it is forced). What I like most are some of the jokes in the article, which can make me laugh, such as International Friends (manual funny). I admire the author for his courage in writing. There is no brainless dog-licking girl in the book. The girl named Shu has a very real character. There are many such people in reality. That sentence is more uncomfortable than being raped. It was very impressive and made me laugh. The next thing is that the spaceship that has been criticized by many people has not come yet. I think it is not a big problem if it is slower. The author said that 500,000 cities are still acceptable, but if it is done all at once, it will not be so enjoyable. It is not on the shelves yet, so you can read it as a funny article. Poisonous points and shortcomings: The most poisonous thing is undoubtedly some of Shu's words. She makes me feel uncomfortable when she looks at me, and she looks like a wolf. There is also the prettiest girl who gets angry because the protagonist doesn't pay attention to her. The weak point is that I think the college entrance examination essay is really... I still got 146 points in Chinese... Damn it. For the expectation of the following plot, if it is out of 5, I would give it a 3. Finally, let me talk about the follow-up that I think will seriously discourage you from quitting. 1. Become an urban love story. It seems unlikely at the moment. The author also said that it is about 500,000 in urban areas. 2. If the emperor wants to open a harem in the future and accept any one of Lin Shusu, I am actually a little disgusted with the four girls who have appeared so far. There are really big problems with the characters of the three mentioned above. Although Mo Mo doesn't particularly like them, they are barely acceptable. Judging from the author's description of the three people, it is estimated that the probability of them becoming wives is not high. The female alien alien is the best. After all, there is reproductive isolation. There are also examples mentioned by some book friends about whether you will mate with monkeys if you fall into a monkey tribe. 3. The character structure has seriously collapsed. Personal opinion, it's not a troll, the money will be confiscated. Maintain the current level and will keep chasing.

A note to the author: No matter what it is, there will always be people who like it and people who hate it. A thousand readers and a thousand Hamlets, some people think it is not well written. Some people write well. You cannot meet everyone's requirements and satisfy everyone. All you have to do is satisfy yourself. Those who say this is not good, those who say that is not good. Come on, come on, I give you the pen and you write.

I'd better wait until the fleet comes back to take a look. It's heartbreaking to watch

There are no poisonous points, typos, or disgusting things. The content is okay, very relaxed and humorous. As for the heroine, hehe...

It's a fresh illustration at the beginning, and the characters are a bit low-intelligence, so you can read it as a cool article.

When I saw the title and synopsis of the book, I originally thought it was another masterpiece, but it turned out to be a poisonous weed, a waste of time and money, and a fake urban sci-fi novel disguised as science fiction. It was already poisonous, but the more I read, the more disappointed I became. I couldn't help but read it, and I just glanced at the later ones and then stopped reading them. And then there was women. In the author's mind, women may be privileged even if they are despicable and disgusting. The premise is that they are beautiful! Finally, I would like to say that if you want to write a book, write it well. Don't just have a computer and a mobile phone. Just write the word count when you have enough and don't want to think about it. Post it without taking into account people's reading style, make a fortune, and run away. Nowadays, there are all kinds of novels that are consistent with common sense, IQ, reasonable, and popular science knowledge. If you can't keep up with the rhythm, it's really boring to scold them in vain. It's normal for novels to have poisonous points in every chapter. There is no one who can directly persuade readers to turn away!

I waited for you until 1:30 in the morning, but you still didn't update.

I have a star fleet(✖️) I have a transport ship(✔️)

I really don't recommend this book. It's not well written. I've been reading it for 11 years. This is the first time I've commented like this.

I just want to ask the author a question now: What should I do with the fleet I earned?

Hahahahahahaha, no, no, I can't bear this shame at this age, so I say goodbye.

The Ming Dynasty Prodigal Son next door has been updated, but you haven't updated it yet? Do you still want your tickets for today? I'll get up at about ten o'clock tomorrow. If there are not two, the tickets will be gone tomorrow! Yes, that's it, a naked threat!

This book will henceforth be renamed, I Once Had a Starfleet! 🤭

In view of the author's statement about opening a new chapter, I would like to count how many Taoists hope that the fleet will arrive in Chapter 10 or less. Let the master see if a small number of people are causing trouble in the book review area. We are not causing trouble but actually want to watch a different sci-fi novel. Match the title of your book.

If you don't know how to write an invincible style, why would you make the protagonist so awesome? The main character is mentally retarded and the supporting character looks like a bird.

I am here to take it for granted that this book is absolutely eunuch. I hope you can give me likes and comments, and if you finish the book, I will live stream my masturbation.

An alien, especially one who was once the emperor of a galactic civilization. He has profound knowledge, and even if he lives on the earth, he can still live a prosperous life relying on his rich scientific and technological knowledge. In addition, he is first-class in terms of IQ and EQ, but in the second book, this alien has a bad character and his advanced scientific and technological knowledge is not used... I am speechless. In addition, when this emperor in appearance falls on the earth, he should carry a micro-optical brain or other technological tools with him, so that he will not be so miserable. In fact, when aliens arrive on Earth, they will rely on their advanced scientific and technological knowledge to live a comfortable life, unlike in this book, where aliens only want to live for a mere ten million... The setting is seriously unreasonable. The last book is well written because the early stage is about urban life, which gives a sense of immersion; the later stage is about technological development, and it is wonderfully written. The author himself wants to innovate, and his ideas are good, but the character setting must be reasonable... But now it seems that the innovation has failed. In fact, the protagonist can replace the earth with Blue Star, or Vienna Planet, etc. To avoid the earth, hot people, and politics. The author gives the impression that he is becoming less and less good at writing. Reading more books is a good thing, but there is no need to be affected by it and lose yourself.

After reading the book review, I want to say that it is too early to draw conclusions. Although I haven't seen what this book is about, it is probably the history of the alien emperor's struggle to live on the earth. In order to contact his fleet, he continued to struggle, failed and tried, and in the process formed a bond with the people on earth. To be honest, the content of these less than ten chapters is indeed a bit bad. The main plot is unclear, and the protagonist is also unknown (at first I thought the person named Lin was the protagonist). But your so-called comments really make me laugh. Technology aliens must have portable computers? What do you need a computer for when there is an intelligent person around you? It's not like I'm well prepared, but it's unusual to go on an inspection without a laptop. Many businessmen on Earth only carry a mechanical watch and a secretary. Why can't the emperor do this? Alien electronic technology must regard the earth's network as nothing? Are you proficient in Chinese able to understand what the ant said? The earth computer is developed based on the on-off of electricity, that is, 0 and 1. Does alien technology necessarily develop from this? Our 1+1=2, what if aliens =3? When programming, the results can be different if the business logic is different, or of course they can be the same, not to mention the possibility that they are fundamentally different. Even if the difference is not big as reflected in the article, you would still be blind if you were asked to use 386 to write a current app. Can you make money just by taking out alien technology? Have you read the book carefully? It's very detailed. Invading the household registration system casually is probably because I have read too many movies and novels. Learn about physical isolation. Find out more on the intranet. Compare the inside and outside to find out. Learn about paper archiving. When you naturalize, you will be naturalized on the external network. At the same time, a paper copy will be kept and sent to the intranet to manage the internal network registration, and the paper will be kept as a file. Regular internal and external synchronization comparisons. When you change the external network, you just need to compare it and you will be out. Then check whether there is a paper archive. If it is, it is a mistake. If not, we will arrest you. Don't think that the country doesn't know about this loophole. Even if it's far away, they will watch movies and read novels. Who doesn't know about this loophole?

81,000 Followers yesterday and 80,000 followers now! I hope it will continue to drop to 70,000 tomorrow. You deserve it for writing urban fiction under the guise of science fiction. I hope everyone will also cancel the collection.

The author has emphasized more than once through the protagonist that "There is only one signal generator" and "Only one chance"; and the process of the protagonist being "erroneously" transmitted is also full of doubts - If there is a problem with the ship, you can report it directly. After all, there must be military data links in this kind of military fleet. With the emperor's authority level, having a top-level encrypted link does not have to worry about confidentiality issues and insufficient information. However, the other party insisted on asking his majesty and attendants to come alone... So I suspect that the emperor's "quantum transmission error" itself is a conspiracy. On this basis, since the conspirators launched the conspiracy, they must have had sufficient plans and preparations: For example, it is possible to quickly take control of the fleet after the emperor "disappears", or have secretly controlled it. For example, it is possible that based on the previous plan, the Death Fleet will not really look for him at all, and the forged evidence that "the emperor is dead" may be used as a reason to abandon the rescue. For example, it is possible that the only unstable factor around the emperor is either one of theirs, or although he is loyal, the signal generator in his body has already been tampered with. [Conclusion] Therefore, it is possible that the signal generator will fail to transmit, or it may not work after it is launched. Or, the Death Fleet was divided into the dominant rebels and the extremely weak royalists. The rebels tried their best to strangle the royalists in order to prevent leaks, while a very small number of royalists led a very small number of injured ships to escape interception and tracking, and finally turned against the emperor with a weak signal. And because of the indiscriminate broadcast of the signal by His Majesty the Emperor, the traitorous pursuit is also coming soon. At that time, the emperor had to face—— 1. Quickly repair and restore the solar system, contact the father of the home star and stand for help; 2. He and the remnants of the royalists fled immediately, speeding up to return to their home planet to join their father; 3. The royalists brought even more terrifying intelligence: the rebellion conspiracy not only happened here, but there was also greater turmoil and conspiracy within the empire. The core of the empire may still be under the control of the father and the empire, but the periphery of the empire's borders is very likely to change hands, and the rebels may search and intercept the protagonist on a larger scale. And it is very likely that the father is unable to save the protagonist at all.               1. The protagonist can choose to return to the home star to face the enemy head-on after rough repairs in the unmanned galaxy; 4. Possibly, the threat comes from outside the empire, the conspiracies of other civilizations in the galaxy. A hundred flowers bloom and a hundred schools of thought contend. Everyone speaks freely and discusses rationally. [What I wrote before was deleted for no reason. This is a bloody rewrite, and the macho man sheds tears]

Hey, the book everyone liked at the beginning asked you to write "Return of the Fleet", but you didn't listen. Now it's cool. If you don't know how to write science fiction, go to the city. Good science fiction will let you write in the city. It's because there are so many authors like you who randomly classify them, and now the novel world is in a mess.

We came here to see you lead a fleet to sweep across the universe, but you told me that you would spend 300 years writing 500,000-1 million words and then spend a dozen chapters to destroy your previous empire? Hehehe😰😰😰😰

Everyone, listen to me! I already understand! Everyone, go check out the author's profile. All the books he reviewed are urban novels! There are no novels other than urban novels, which proves that the author actually wants to write urban novels, but also wants to use this kind of scientific and technological novels to gain attention. No matter whether you feel comfortable or not, he is happy!

The number of fans dropped from 81,000 to 76,000 in two days. What does the author think? Are you going to continue selling dog meat like sheep?

I caught up with the latest chapter and saw that it will still be three years before the transport ship arrives. So I don't know how long it will take to wait for the fleet to arrive. This first part can only be regarded as an urban novel. It has nothing to do with science fiction. To put it bluntly, you are selling sheep over dogs. I don't know the author's outline, but when I read the previous comments that I wanted to write about 500,000 words before I started writing about the fleet, I'm really sorry. The science fiction category actually only started with 500,000 words! A 500,000-word urban description! ! Sorry, this is really unbearable. There is a very slow book among fantasy novels called "Superdimensional Warlock". Although it was written slowly, the subject matter and description are exactly the same. Just look at the previous part. You can go to the urban category and you will definitely have more collections than you have now. Originally, cities are more popular than science fiction. But compared with the introduction and the title of the book, it's really unreadable. Many times, if you can't subscribe to a book at any time and have saved dozens or hundreds of chapters, most people won't want to subscribe when they see the subscription money of more than ten yuan. In addition, your pretentious slap in the face is also very poisonous. Anyway, I no longer have the desire to read anymore. The previous brother said that if you collect thousands or thousands of books, you will naturally throw away the book if the data is not good. Are you planning to wait until it reaches 600,000 or 700,000 words before putting it on the shelves? This is obviously impossible. Unless your book is intended to be 5 million to 6 million words long. Your previous part is really too discouraging. The writing style can be descriptive as well. It's acceptable for the protagonist to have a slightly middle-of-the-road personality. The only thing that seems unacceptable right now is that you voted in the wrong place.