My Girlfriend Is from Fuso

The writing is obviously not strong enough, and the language is inconsistent. The setting seems interesting, but the characters are seriously homogenized with similar light novels. The biggest problem is the serious separation of the characters' front and back performances. Only reading the first twenty chapters, I found that the emotional change of You Tongran is quite abrupt and there is not enough plot foreshadowing. Even regretful feelings should have enough foreshadowing. This will make the character less likable. In fact, the character image will be flat, failing to leave a deep impression at the beginning, and the template will not be applied thoroughly enough. If we want to imitate Riqing's writing style, the writing style is not as good as Qing Shifendai, and it cannot directly outline an attractive plot. It can be seen from the writing that the author has considered the words and sentences, but the logic of the writing is still not rigorous enough. The author should be relatively young, and hopes to make progress by continuing to write books in the future. To describe youth love, there is no need to be pretentious, and a slightly plain and warm writing style is enough. However, the author's writing style reflects that he has not cultivated his writing power for a long time, so he is not able to move freely and uses too much force. An author needs to form his own writing style so that his work can truly attract readers and become a good work. Come on, there are ideas, but the rest needs to be strengthened.

This kind of story can be "sweet", but as the protagonist, he has traveled through time. But breaking off the engagement is at least a man's dignity, and he reconciled in such a careless manner (●°u°●)​". It feels strangely licking.

From the introduction, it probably reads "Evil Girl" + "Fighting Po". If the sun is back, it is better to travel by train than by bus.

Thanks to the author for bringing happiness to my winter vacation, allowing me to have wonderful memories during this winter vacation, and making me long for a better future. The beautiful story of this novel gave me a yearning for life. I am a person with social anxiety and also very lazy, but after reading this novel, I also changed a little, and it had a great impact on me. I still remember the feeling of finding this novel, and I was very panicked, because at that time I had just finished reading a novel about feeding poison, haha Anyway, thank you to the author

If you have time, read the first chapter and then revise it. This first chapter of yours... Is seriously discouraging you from quitting.

Nice writing, keep it up (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

How can I say, they are all girls

I have read a lot of books that start with "sweet" and there are many categories. The first category is that the "sweet" flavor runs throughout. The reader's sense of expectation becomes weaker as the book goes on, making it impossible to continue. The second type is like galgame games, which are based on solving the problem of infinite reincarnation. It is necessary to promote a female protagonist in each reincarnation, thereby creating a different type of "sweet" feeling. The third category is the "Shura Field" as a highlight. The author has laid a lot of foreshadowing for the experiences of the male protagonist and the female protagonist, such as childhood sweethearts, online dating without knowing each other's identities, the same guardians who eliminate evil and promote good, relationships between couples in past lives/parallel worlds, etc. The male protagonist has a system and is very capable. He shows "charm" in every scene of his experience and makes the female protagonists jealous and opens up the "Shura Field". The fourth category is that the male protagonist is an immortal/reincarnation/powerful person from the upper world who has experienced thousands of years. He attracts and tolerates the female protagonist like an "old father", seduce the female protagonist with his talents/out-of-print items, and attracts the envy and booing of other female partners. The fifth category is mainly about career descriptions. The male and female protagonists are childhood sweethearts/the seeds of affection were planted as early as the age when the girl's love affair first appeared. Later they separated and became colleagues/superiors by chance. They became happy friends through "misunderstandings" one after another, developed a sense of distance after a major setback, and finally understood their own feelings through the help of others and the revelation of the previous generation. (Soap operas are the most common) I have read a lot of books. This kind of dog food novel based on daily life is the most difficult to write, and you cannot write a lot of words. The most common ones are "dystocia" and death midway (commonly known as eunuchs). The remaining ones are 404, and there are very few books that have reached the end. I can only say good luck to the author. I will read the book and cast a vote. I have no control over what the author writes, and I don't need to. A little suggestion: You can pave the way for the male protagonist's career . After all, a male protagonist without a career always feels like a love interest when he falls in love.

To be honest, I really like this kind of book. It's sweet and doesn't make people feel uncomfortable when reading it like a female channel (although I have only watched a few female channels). I hope the author can stick to it. I can't help others, but I will support you at all. I will order it all after you put it on the shelf. Although you may not care about this full order, I really want to see you stick to it until the end. Come on↖(^ω^)↗

The pure love of harem sex is evil, and it is no longer pure love if you have a harem.

It's a bit slow at the beginning, but it's better because of the delicate emotional line. You are also a talent for writing Rebirth and Time Travel in such a sweet way. I'm so full of this wave of dog food, I just hope the author can keep writing, please.

The first time I saw my girlfriend, I helped her, and I was so excited.

As soon as the protagonist is born, his parents must die first. My talents are astounding from ancient times to the present, and I can do everything. There was a fiancée who came to break off the engagement. If the protagonist is not convinced, don't bully the young man into being poor. If you go out to study art, you will definitely have the opportunity. There must be a story about becoming a disciple of someone so-and-so, and being a disciple was jealous of others, and all the senior brothers were dissatisfied. The protagonist is slapped in the face, and the senior sister comes to help. Advise him to be patient for a while, and a chance will come. As magical weapons and magical skills come, so must the magical beasts. Once the magical skill is mastered, the enemy will appear. The two of them are like fire and water, and someone must come to persuade them. The sect held a grand competition and got the top three in revenge. The master invites me to meet you and go out to travel around the world. There are beauties in the world, and beauties have troubles. The protagonist comes to help and the trouble is solved. Then she told her origin, she must be a daughter of aristocratic family. The family then arrives and the beauty must leave. The protagonist wants to find her, but the power gap is too great. The auction house will definitely gain something later. Then find your teammates, who are beautiful women. When you leave the city and change the map, you can get air every second. The beauty is found, and the head of the family comes to test her. There is a strong enemy in the test, and the protagonist has to solve it. After all, the clan members praised me for being so awesome. After finishing the work and returning home with beauty, the master is no longer here. The leader explained the reason and then went to take revenge. After returning to the sect, elders from all parties arrived. Complaining provokes a strong enemy, who will then arrive. The protagonist is ashamed of his powerful enemy, who is very angry. A shocking battle breaks out, and everyone comes to give their lives. The elder had nothing to say, so the leader gave up his position. The protagonist refused and then left with Mei. See you ten years later, the protagonist is invincible.

The first thing I saw was that my girlfriend was holding her up, but I couldn't save her (´･̥̥̥̥ω･̥̥̥̥`) I cried in the wind

I have read a light novel, and the content is that the protagonist's world will go back to a previous point in time every time. The reason is that a girl who has a crush on the male protagonist made a wish to the gods, hoping that the male protagonist can confess his love to her, so the gods locked the world time in this time period. If the male protagonist does not conquer this girl, then the world will keep going back. The male protagonist went back several times during this period, but he did not know that he was going back. Later, the witch from the dark world came out, told the male protagonist about this, and asked him to keep his memory and go back, because the witch did not want the world to stay in this period of time. So, with the help of the witch, the male protagonist attacks the female protagonist one by one, trying to unlock this locked world. Each relationship is well written, very sweet, and very comfortable to watch. However, after each return, the captured female protagonist will not remember what happened in the previous time period, and will only retain some instinctive affection for the protagonist. In a certain strategy, the protagonist's target was a ghost literature girl with a very low sense of existence. Because she was not good at communication and liked to immerse herself in her own world, she was isolated by the girls. Through her own efforts, the male protagonist succeeded in deepening the bond with her. When the protagonist was about to confess her love, the female protagonist's sense of existence completely disappeared for some reason. The classmates and the teacher did not remember such a thing at all. Personally, even traces of her own existence have completely disappeared. She seems to be invisible. No one can hear her words, and no one can feel it when she touches others. Her written identity materials have completely disappeared, and the male protagonist has completely forgotten her on this day, but he always feels that he has forgotten something. Finally, he remembered the heroine, but could not find proof of her existence. Only the witch remembered that the heroine kept touching the hero, but the hero could feel it, but could not touch the heroine's body. She was very moved when she saw this. Later, the witch told the hero that if the heroine's state continued, she would completely disappear from this world, because her power of existence had almost disappeared. The only solution was to let others remember that this person existed, and that the impression was particularly deep. In order to supplement the existence of the heroine, the hero wrote a novel about his love story with the heroine. In the end, the book became famous and was remembered by many people. The love story of the hero and heroine also moved many people. The heroine returned to everyone's memory, and the hero also succeeded in the strategy, but this was still not the girl he had made a wish for, so the hero returned to writing again. The target of this return is a domineering girl from the martial arts system, but something went wrong this time because the heroine of the previous world vaguely retains some memories of the previous world in this world, and another witch came to this heroine and completely restored her. According to the memory of the heroine, the purpose of this witch is not to let the world time flow again, because this can be regarded as immortality in disguise, so the ghost heroine decided to attack the hero by herself this time. At the same time, the male protagonist's contact with the martial arts heroine was not very smooth. The story ends here, and the author behind it didn't write it. This is a book I read a few years ago, and I think it was very well written. I wait for him to update it every day. Then I went to the army and basically didn't touch novels anymore. When I saw this book today, I thought of the one I read before. Unfortunately, I have forgotten the name of the book. If someone has read it, I hope you can tell me the name of the book. I hope he has updated it. . .

I just read the first few chapters, and I think they are okay. Just the names, Beichen Shuichi, Kitahara Shuji, Senbon Yukina, Chiyuki Mina, and Toru, are too similar to the names of characters in Haidilao books. The key is that I am still Mina. I can't help but think about it and feel uncomfortable. Keep reading. It is still edible. Good luck to the author.

I've already sped up to chapter 20. The conflict in the plot is a bit stiff, and Fuyu and Miyamoto seem to be particularly annoying. I feel embarrassed to see Kendo defeat Aome... Will things be okay after chapter 70?

Enlightenment book, the large and small sizes have been refreshed n times

When I saw the 8th picture last night, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was the same old-fashioned pretense, saying that I wouldn't be provoked, and then I went up.

I watched it 20 years ago, but I didn't expect that the story had ended five years ago

I just want to know when a new book will be published. This kind of unsystematic daily warm writing is really rare. I look forward to it.

There are so few scenes in this book for Senbon Yukuna, the main character. From the beginning she broke the engagement, but she was arrogant for a while, and only after losing it did she learn to cherish it. From the back, she arranged a swordsmanship competition, which moved me. Later, when I saw the male protagonist who made a wish when he was a child, he always hoped for Senbon Yukuna's health. Later, I found out that Senbon Yukuna's role was missing. I almost thought it was a single female protagonist. There are many female channels next door, one girl and several men, and no one is trolling. The male channel's harem suddenly turned out to be a scumbag.

We all know that there are so many poisonous things in front of us and they are just like shit, but we still don't change them.

The author has started a new book, it's not easy

After reading a few chapters, the problem with this book is not the so-called poisonous plot points of the author, but the author's lack of writing ability. It is common in online novels that the words and phrases are not precise, but the description of the characters' behavior is so simple and straightforward that it makes people confused, and the separation of emotions and behaviors greatly affects the perception. The Japanese background was chosen, but it is obvious that the author's understanding of Japanese society is very shallow, and one cannot help but suspect that he did not do any research before writing.

Does the management approve the application to join the group?

I just read a few chapters and the title of the book is misleading.

This book was quite good at the beginning, until the author took away the savage sister of the gentle girlfriend, it became very uncomfortable to read. I really read the first 100 pictures many times. Maybe the author wanted to create a heart-shaped butt, but it was a pity that he lacked the ability.

I have read about 10 chapters, it is almost the same as "My Girlfriend is a Evil Girl", the plot is similar

Deepseek is too optimistic about you. I asked him to tweet and he tweeted you. I want to try it out.