Dark Lord of Douluo

This is my first time writing a book. I originally wrote it for myself. Please forgive me if I am not satisfied with the writing.

The plot at the beginning is a bit confusing. You complain that you can't practice in the forest, but you can still wander in the forest for ten years? And I was shocked, one moment I knew the settings of Ghost Sword, and the next moment I didn't know anything else, just for the water settings?

Come on, there are ghosts and gods, it is written that Douluo Dalu will be gone, and in the end the protagonist will be gone too.

What do you think, the protagonist himself It's better to mix up with the Shrek Seven Monsters

Make the pattern bigger, ghosts and gods can erode Douluo through the protagonist, don't think of ghosts and gods as ghosts 😁

Boss, why don't you write it?

It feels like a Douluo version of Dou Po

Otherwise, when you travel with the character of Ghost Swordsman, you cannot add any ghosts and gods. You have to think about whether the protagonist can control it? Either the ghosts and gods released in Douluo Continent would be of some use and would have been destroyed long ago, or else the ghosts and gods would be directly twin martial souls

Is it broken or something?

I was put off by the first chapter, and I feel like this book will soon become eunuch.

Why do so many people like to write pirated versions

How does the protagonist awaken his martial spirit in the sunset forest at the beginning?

Let's change it before. I feel like the protagonist is like an unweaned child, and the ghosts and spirits are like a grandfather coaxing his grandson 😅😅😅😅😅

Compared with fighting skills, I want to see more, human body destruction skills, just like the priest in Xingyue, Bajiquan, very handsome

Brother, if you change some paragraphs and post them with just a few words, do you think readers can't see it?

Personal opinion: Ghost Sword is an auxiliary, so I feel uncomfortable and have no idea of ​​continuing to watch

The first few chapters were written by Dou Po Kai, right? This is too perfunctory

In fact, the setting itself is very good. Why is it a eunuch?

The setting is good. Although it is a bit cliche in the early stage, it is okay later on. Why are you a eunuch?

While I haven't written too much yet, I can revise the previous few pictures.

Isn't it the Ghost Swordsman? Why did he suddenly become Shinra Tensei?