The Ascetic Who Was Reborn as Hokage

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Author, you have a lot of poisonous points. It seems that one to three Magatama Sharingan cannot be converted, and wasn't the Eight Gate Dun Armor invented by Matt Dai? Where did the Eight Gate Dun Armor come from during the Warring States Period? .

This spot is so awesome, it will ruin the original work.

Innate physique is so easy to change, just exercise more? I laughed out loud when I saw this. (Originally, I thought I had to use traditional Chinese medicine for conditioning, or some exercises to enhance my qualifications.)

Look at my three magatama blood chakra eyes, the "illusion technique. The technique of mass subjugation", the Uchiha clan leader and all the elders are all mentally retarded,,,,,, the Uchiha clan suffered heavy losses and the entire clan was wiped out.

If Madara had a younger brother, the plot would be different. If Madara still has a younger brother, he will not leave Konoha, even if he does not compete to become Hokage.

To be honest, this thing looks really awkward, because you have to kill a person because he is a waste? Then who dares to sacrifice his life for Uchiha. And how can Madara look down on people casually? According to the character of the original work, he should be more concerned about it. Except for the protagonist, the Uchiha clan you wrote is written in a bad way, and the description of the character is a lot of trouble. In addition, the author's sentences do not make sense in many places, there are many typos, and the original work has been changed into a mess. I feel very confused. I will watch Naruto. People are not here to see you blindly change the settings. Even if you create a new story, it must follow the basic settings of the original work. At least there should be no big deviations in character and age. You are good at this thing. It is not bad at all. The introduction is very good. Once I got addicted, I couldn't find the way out. I will never see you again 😅😅😅

Extremely poisonous, all characters including the protagonist have 0 IQ. If you didn't write the name, I wouldn't even know you were writing about Naruto. The characterization and rhythm are all in Fei Lu's style.

As the old saying goes, there are too few updates and it's not satisfying at all.

Madara is just a tsundere, not stupid. . .

Has the author entered the palace? ? ?

The subject matter is good, but the content is a bit mindless. After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it. It turned me off. I just want to ask the author if he has watched Naruto 🙂🙂🙂

[Poison test report] (long review) 1. There are many typos, which barely affects reading. (Suggestion: If the author wants this book to get good grades, it would be much better to take the time to correct the typos) 2. "This" appears more frequently than usual. I personally guess that the author is using the "voice input" function to write a book, right? (Suggestion: I still hope that the author will find time to revise it) 3. Creativity. Adding a "trace" monastic system to the Naruto system can be said to be not creative enough, but it does not affect the substitution. (Suggestion: Don't pay too much attention to readers' complaints about monasticism, because this cannot be changed, and paying too much attention will affect the creation) 4. There are many conflicts in settings with "Naruto". Those who are not senior Naruto fans may not be able to see these conflicts, so they have little impact on the reading experience. (Suggestion: The author should read more of Naruto's original work when he has time, so as to avoid more conflicts with the original work in later chapters) Summary: Overall, it is okay, not too poisonous, and suitable for most readers.

I finally found a good novel, but it was ruined by trolls again. If you don't like it, don't read it. Don't push me too hard.

Taiyi

What the hell are you writing? Goodbye znqjsggzfbpgwd

If you want to find a better fanfic, you have to either copy the original work, or go back in time before the plot begins. There's no point in copying the original work, traveling back in time before the plot, and forcibly turning the supporting characters who were only mentioned in the original work into pig's feet. Please, we are here to see Naruto, not the supporting cast.

Stop trolling, what are you trolling for, why are you looking for a sense of presence, come on, troll me Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Do you like it or not? The author is about to enter the palace

I think starting point, in every novel, there are comments after each chapter, which is really bad, because every time I read those comments, I always don't want to read the book. So many of the books I used to enjoy reading have been ruined by those reviews, and now I have no interest in them.

There are so many typos. It's so uncomfortable to read.

When I read novels at Qidian, I never saw a few that weren't criticized.

Among the Naruto clan, Uchiha is the most particular about family. There is a huge difference between Uchiha before opening the Sharingan and after opening it. Therefore, even if he is a waste, he will not say anything about killing to avoid wasting resources. The author is completely enjoying himself.

Maybe the author failed in Chinese language? First of all, there are many typos, which greatly affects the viewing experience. Secondly, punctuation marks are thrown around, one sentence is split into two sentences, and two sentences are connected into one sentence. Then the sentences are not fluent. If the Chinese characters don't affect reading in most cases, I really can't understand it. I endured reading more than 60 chapters, but it was clear that there was no laughter, but I was made to laugh by typos several times. Even the name of the protagonist was wrong several times, and it was never the same. The whole text uses "this, this" crazily, basically in every paragraph. Reading this book gives me a strong feeling, as if I saw an ancient scholar shaking his head with a book, or a storyteller in a teahouse. The plot is also quite disgusting. I expressed my love for Madara before, but I wrote him as a playboy. The other kids insulted and hated the protagonist. The protagonist forced himself to have a sense of belonging. Isn't that a bit of a joke? Writing a book review for the first time is really uncomfortable.

What to say about this book? It may be because the author pushed most of the original settings of Naruto and added his own imaginary settings. This caused some Naruto fans to feel awkward when reading this book. For example, time issues and ninjutsu issues are particularly uncomfortable to watch. Apart from the above problems, the rest is still very good, at least it makes people feel comfortable.

I laugh when an orphan discusses whether to kill him or not. Only after killing him will he sacrifice his life. Everyone will think about the fact that his son will be killed even if he dies.

It's impossible for Uchiha to be like this. Obito is a piece of garbage who can't live well. I don't know what I think.

Novels are meant to entertain the public. Some keyboard warriors still come to novels to gain a sense of presence even if they can't read well.

Qidian is not friendly to new authors. If the author can no longer write, go to QQ to read and open a new book.

Brother, can't you update? The writing feels very beautiful! Don't stop