Black Fog Area

I didn't understand any of the professional terms in the book, and I didn't bother to look them up. . I just think it's good and I want to support it. In addition, I have seen a lot of films that start with an anticlimax but end at the end, with a very grand opening and various pitfalls, but in the end, they can't be filled in. . If the author is really writing a book for the first time, be careful. Come on!

190,000 Words, 84 chapters. Still speculating and suspenseful. The pace is too slow, which is nothing for a physical book, but since this is a serialized online novel, the plot progresses too slowly, and the consequence is that readers lose patience.

The setting is novel and the logic is flawed. It's a pity that it's creative. I feel like I don't care whether it's reasonable or not in order to set up the plot and advance the plot.

Not a novice, but interesting😑

No, it's really poisonous. The organization is as strict as a pretender. Sorry for insulting the pretender. That's what I pretended to be my father. It's okay to frantically set up the atmosphere and create a suspenseful and thrilling atmosphere, but the protagonist's obsession with the organization all day long has no one to ask questions, and the people in charge don't report it. I really can't stand the logic of this, but you said this is a cool article that doesn't require thinking, but you are digging holes again, haha

Many book friends have asked why wired communication is not possible if wireless is not possible. Let me help the author explain. First of all, the diameter of the black mist area is 30km. The existing wired cables are not that long. They are usually 500 meters or 1-3km (easy to repair and carry), and there are transfer stations in the middle. Secondly, even if such a long wire is built, the carrying problem must be solved. If the wire is rolled up and placed outside, the people inside will increase the friction as the distance increases until the wire cannot be dragged. Moreover, the distance includes roads, woods, mountains, etc., The wire is likely to be entangled, and it will be completely useless. If you want to bring bundles of wires in, although there is no ground friction and the impact of obstacles on the road, it is impossible from the perspective of load-bearing. The weight of wires that are dozens of kilometers long is astonishing and cannot be brought in at all. Some book friends later proposed to fly a person into the helicopter, but the visibility in the black fog area is 10 meters, so even if a person is flying in, he can't see anything. Some people later proposed a sentry 1000 meters away, but the problem is that anyone who enters will be killed within a few days. It takes several days to set up a sentry. It is estimated that the first sentry cannot be established, let alone the engineering team to go in and forcibly break the road. Wouldn't it be a loss of life to line up a large number of people to go in knowing that there are viruses and unknown creatures inside?

Biology Dog said that it looks great, and the first chapter of professional knowledge feels like taking a class... I don't take class so seriously 😜

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The description of the protagonist being guarded is too ridiculous. Cheng Feng didn't report any of the protagonist's many anomalies. A real guard can record even an expression for you. There are cameras everywhere, and every abnormal movement can be studied by many people!

I feel that the way the protagonist's department works is not professional and rigorous at all. It is more credible to say that it is a non-governmental organization.

There are big problems with the logic. It's irritating. It forcibly advances the plot and forcibly creates contradictions. In order to write about the spread of foreign matter, do you have to let a few stupid supporting characters drive it? Can't it be written as a preliminary preparation for the main body of the black mist? It's a bit of a bad street routine in European and American bad movies. Generally speaking, the creativity is okay. You need to pay attention to the outline of the writing.

After reading Chapter 16, I have a question: Has anyone thought of using a long stick with a camera with a signal line to extend into the dark fog area? You can always see inside from 10 meters away, right? Why don't we tie a rope and go to the outside of the black mist alone to investigate? If it doesn't work on the ground, why don't I dig a tunnel to get to the head office? How about a helicopter hoisting a person over a black fog area?

Very well written, I like it very much

Although it is interesting to borrow ideas from the movie Annihilation, it also inherits the movie's moronic setting. The various decisions in it simply insult the reader's intelligence. There is also the inner life of the protagonist, who is about ten years old. The description of the rest of the general environment is okay. What a shame it was wasted.

I hope the author can pay attention to it. About sixty chapters, the protagonist obviously has a "system" obtained from the black mist. The system's fear of the black mist consciousness. The system's intention to destroy Yang Fan. Everything that the electrotherapy method allowed him to see. After that, the protagonist was shocked to find that the black mist destroyed a world (shock is used too much. Is the protagonist's reaction here very slow?) Let's start exploring later. The protagonist himself proposed the disguise of black mist consciousness assimilation, etc. Everyone else agreed. But as soon as "Ling Shan" was found in the black mist, the protagonist immediately rushed up to ask... (Others stopped it) The protagonist of the exploration team and another person were arguing with each other. Everyone knows the dangers in the dark mist, but they still talked about it. The key is that when he saw "Ling Shan" for the second time, the protagonist suddenly became "smart". See through perspective, "Monster, I can see at a glance that you are not a human being." Remind others (others have long realized that something is wrong) Of course, these are all fine. The key is that you buried the trap in the first sixty or seventy chapters. I endured it for so long. The plot develops rapidly at the back. There are too many unreasonable places. The subject matter is very good. I hope the author can think about it carefully... PS Ideal discussion Don't hesitate to spray

It looks very good, I will continue to pay attention and write more

First Liu Neng and then Guan Yi, some really disgusting paragraphs suddenly appeared...

It feels like a replica of the movie Annihilation

Finished reading. I would like to ask if the author was inspired by "Annihilation"? There's no other meaning, it's just that when I watched it, I felt that it looked a bit like a movie I watched not long ago 😁😁 However, the current development is quite good, but I have to wait for the update again 😢 I'm annoyed!

A comment about your new book was changed to a permanent ban. The author can do it. To be honest, the book can be read, but the person who wrote it cannot.

I have read over 100,000 words of this book. The only impression I have is Who am I? Where am I? Who the hell is beating me? I am really tired when I see that the small chapter is no different from the first chapter. I am afraid that I will not be able to survive the slow plot progression of the author. I know some people will say that I should go back and read the small white text. I will say it for you first.

There is a problem with exploring the black fog. You can build a rope that is dozens of kilometers long to tie people or robots into the exploration. Even if the setting does not allow success, the author should at least mention this easy-to-think method.

Control The Foundation controls anomalies to prevent them from falling into the hands of civilians or hostile groups, through extensive observation and monitoring and taking action to intercept them as early as possible. Containment The Foundation contains anomalies to prevent the spread of their influence or effects, either by relocating, disguising, or dismantling them or by suppressing or preventing the public from disseminating knowledge of them. Protection The Foundation protects humanity from the effects of anomalies and protects the anomalies themselves until they are fully understood and new scientific theorems emerge from their properties and behavior. If an anomaly is deemed to be excessively dangerous upon containment, the Foundation may neutralize or destroy the anomaly as a last resort.

It's finally out, and I've resumed updating at least twice a day. Thank you for your recommendation and support. 🙂

After sending three soldiers, all of them knelt down. The last information was brought out. It should be possible to clean the ground. Missile clusters were used to clean the ground. Chemicals were dropped in bags one by one from helicopters. Sulfuric acid was used to clean the ground. The danger should be extinguished at the first sign of flames.

The idea is good, and there are points that attract people to watch it, but unfortunately it is a popular system flow, so I gave it up.

The writing is good and makes people want to read on. Good luck, author.

This book is obviously a beautiful novel with a science fiction theme, but it is classified as a mystery. There is also a novel with more than 500 chapters that I encountered before but it was classified as a short story. I was really speechless about the starting point of the classification.

The content is good, but there are too many "confused" words, and those who are confused are speechless.

I have read more than twenty chapters, and the more I read, the more it looks like Annihilation, and then I feel that I almost know the cause -_-||, I feel like I have been spoiled by myself