Fierce Pawn

Part of it was disappointing. There are many poisonous points that are unacceptable to me. I thought that the work written by the great writer would be eye-catching, but unexpectedly, it was still the same protagonist who pretended to be 13 in the face a few years ago, had no sense, was narrow-minded, and had an insufficient IQ. The writing was decent, but it was full of common sense errors, as well as many logical errors and traces of stereotyped characters. A protagonist who has absolutely no idea about his future and is keen on pretending to be 13 and slapping people in the face. I am not asking the protagonist to become a saint, but if you want to create a lord of destiny, at least in addition to the halo of the protagonist, he must be outstanding, right? Oh, there is something special about him, he has a talent like G. However, his character is flawed, his IQ and EQ are inferior to others, and he has a bigger temper than anyone else. He is euphemistically called unruly. No wonder the title is called a tough pawn. As the protagonist, such a thing cannot be regarded as a general or a handsome man. He can only serve as a pawn and work for others. No wonder you said at the beginning that you want to learn to be a ranger and also want to learn to command troops. Don't be so brazen that you want to command troops. If you don't have the style of a general, how can you command troops? Who is willing to sacrifice his life for you? Just be a knight-errant and poke other people's assholes with peace of mind.

The writing is good and the plot is smooth, but I just can't figure out what the main plot is, and some of the character settings are very weak. The protagonist behaves like the best in the world. Everyone wants to win over him, but he rejects them all. He wants to be free and unrestrained, so why does he learn to be a general? Why is the title called Meng Zu? Overall, the writing and plot are good. It would be nice if the main plot could be clearer. So far, I only know that the protagonist will go to Chang'an, but I don't know what to do in Chang'an and what to do next. These are some of my humble opinions.

I thought it was a book about fighting for hegemony, but it turned out to be like martial arts. I don't like this style of book, so I'll give it up.

Don't write so much about Bai Juyi's relationship. From the beginning, you know that he will definitely embrace the beauty. Let's focus on the main plot.

The last 50 chapters have been as light as water, and I'm a bit doubtful whether they were written by Lao Gao. Even the marriage part of ** is uneventful and has no highlights. If this continues, this book will basically become a eunuch.

As a time traveler, the protagonist seems to have little role

It's a fantasy written under the guise of history. The writing style is good, but it doesn't have the flavor of history. If it weren't for fictional history, it would really be a martial arts or fantasy.

It is recommended that you make thorough preparations before writing a book. Since it is a historical novel, even if it is fictional, I hope it will be reasonable and have an in-depth understanding of the cultural background at that time. You said that the feudal family cannibalism is not so cold-blooded. The mountain villagers are indeed short-sighted. But since it is called the Guo family in Lingzhou, it must be a prominent figure in the local area. By sending people to this place to pray, they are representing the Guo family. If it is like this, do they want to lose the Guo family's face? And in a big feudal family, if the parents are gone, where are the uncles and brothers? What will happen to the Guo family's reputation when this news comes out? Okay, you said you were born to the Guo family, so what does it mean that the Guo family prayed for blessings and sent a servant? Who are you trying to prevaricate? It is entirely possible to explain the Tao Te Ching and the Analects of Confucius based on the identity of a down-and-out young man who narrowly escaped from a military disaster. Is this whole background just to slap Mr. Guo in the face in the future? . . Confucian disciples during the Han and Tang Dynasties, if you insist on saying something, they should be called scholars rather than literati. Scholars can enter civil service or military service, and can switch from civil service to military service or from military service to civil service. And if you insist on talking about being superior, it can only mean that the nobles are superior, and the scholars are superior. Furthermore, talking about the Six Arts of Confucianism, at that time, there were Confucian students who did not practice martial arts. Even the common people who were interested in studying and making a career did not fall far behind in the two ways of shooting and imperialism. Before the Song Dynasty, there were few Confucian scholars who were so-called literati. They did not practice martial arts simply because they really could not afford it. Looking forward to better works from the author.

What's wrong with the book review section? Most of them can't stand it. An author with such an attitude and opinion cannot see that Lao Gao is really writing about military, economic, historical and social aspects. It's just that the characters aren't romantic enough. . I can't help it if I'm not interested. . .

Why does the latest chapter make Guo Song look like an idiot? It's very strange to meet the same person three times in a row. Are people who come out of the field of life and death so vigilant? Fortunately, I struggled a bit and came back. I hope I won't write like this again! ! ! ! ! !

Attention Newcomers: This is a fantasy novel disguised as martial arts! 😅 The likes of Ip Man and Wong Fei-hung have cried themselves to death in the toilet, and Newton's coffin board has been kicked away to the author's house. 💀💀💀

Want to assassinate the future? What happened to the many assassinations by the Kuomintang? The entire family was stabbed!

Alas, I feel that the writing in other places is very good and worthy of the name of a master. However, the human emotions and the logical thinking of the protagonist are contrary to his character. It makes us anxious to see it. This is just my personal opinion, and I don't mean to offend anyone. I give up. Come on, author. (I have only read the first dozen chapters and do not understand the subsequent situations, so this evaluation is only based on the plots I have read.)

Having read several novels about hegemony by **, I have always felt that ** is a very good author with great writing style and understanding of history. However, unfortunately, his books always become less and less interesting as I read them. First, the protagonists of ** books are usually time travellers. However, every time I read the whole book, I really don't feel that there is any difference between the protagonist and the indigenous people. So why do I need to have a time traveler identity? The second ** protagonist's book, if he wants to fight for hegemony, must try his best to win over the family members, or always write about intrigues with the family members. Troubled times are the best time to push forward everything and carry out reforms, but the protagonist in the end relied on the support of aristocratic family members to ascend to the throne. I wonder if this is any different from dynasty changes in history. Third, most of the novels about hegemony are all about protagonists living in troubled times. What are troubled times? It is an era when the countryside is desolate and the people are displaced, where human lives are like grass, and people cannibalize people. But his books never describe the scenes of troubled times, nor do they describe the miserable lives of people at the bottom. I don't think there is a lack of rendering of these scenes. The books are very dry and cannot arouse the readers' emotions. It is really annoying to always write about the battles between high-level nobles. Reading Lao Bainiu, especially Bai, the new book in July, I feel that the protagonist is really in troubled times, making readers have various emotions. However, in **'s novels, I can't tell that the protagonist is in troubled times, and I feel very calm and dry. Finally, I really hope that ** will write novels about hegemony, and write more about the changes in the fate of low-level people after meeting the protagonist. The protagonist, as a time traveler, should also bring different changes to this troubled world, including military, political and economic.

Naturally, there is no leap. Lao Gao has evolved well in this film, and the progress of the protagonist's birth and growth abilities is relatively reasonable.

😰😰😰😰

It's too short, it's a bit misleading to the readers.

I saw two videos about the Anshi Rebellion on Station B before, which shocked me deeply. Before, I only knew about the prosperous Tang Dynasty, but I didn't have a complete idea of ​​how prosperous the Tang Dynasty was. No matter how powerful the country is after the Anshi Rebellion, it is only mediocre. Let's put it this way, the Anshi Rebellion established the direction of civilization in the Chinese world from then on. From now on, all countries will just play house in the circle drawn during the Tang Dynasty. Never has an event in history touched me so much. When I just finished reading the book Drunk Pillow, I was thinking if Li Longji could always work as hard as he did in his prime, if the Tang Dynasty had not experienced the Anshi Rebellion, would the world have been in a different direction? Interested friends can go to Station B to find videos about the Anshi Rebellion. Seeing that Yueguan has opened a new book, I couldn't help but post something.

This is the rhythm of becoming emperor😁

Oh my God, the little Pika Pika oh, just oh, don't eat it; Naopo is afraid of others

You cannot read this book with anyone other than the protagonist, otherwise this book will be extremely poisonous! ! !

//Xyv. Continent ↗ one by one. . . . /One. . V. /V. V

The more I read, the angrier I became. What's going on?

1. Lao Gao's new book should be about fighting for supremacy. It's very good. I like to see Lao Gao's way of writing the protagonist's ruthless methods and his cunning and domineering ways of dealing with enemies. But I hope that Lao Gao's novel can come up with some new ideas in some aspects For example: As a time traveler, in the future, in terms of governance, political structure, people's livelihood, and economic methods, there will be some advanced ideas that are different from the ancients, such as the prime minister-cabinet system, a parliamentary system with some auxiliary powers, submission of bills, and supervision of officials (House of Lords, Han Dynasty) The lower house of the gentry has some political and economic rights in local areas. There are some parliaments elected by the civilians to supervise local officials. The rights of the house are only in politics, people's livelihood, and economics. It has no military power, allowing some civilians to supervise the rights of officials to a certain extent. Abuse), create and establish a national high-level scientific research and innovation institute, encourage various military and civilian technological innovations, create an economic department to manage industry and commerce, promote business development, establish a dedicated and independent tax department that collects taxes with arms, try to avoid corruption, and establish The financial audit and approval department has established a specialized anti-corruption department (such as the Anti-Corruption Department, and local anti-corruption reporting departments that are vertically and independently managed by the central government). In the military, modern methods and ancient humanities are used to improve the military establishment structure and expand the establishment of specialized intelligence agencies. Departments, such as the Military Intelligence Department, the Royal Security Service (Foreign Intelligence Department, Internal Intelligence Department, Secret Service Department, etc.), The establishment of an independent central vertical management of the Judicial Yuan at all levels, the Judicial Procuratorate, the establishment of the Police Department, military schools, medical schools, hospitals, agriculture management of agriculture Department, the Royal Land Department that manages and verifies land and land transactions, etc. In short, it is to let the readers who act as the protagonist feel that the protagonist has some superiority over the ancients in some thoughts and knowledge, and bring some superiority and satisfaction to the readers if they were in ancient times. I think it will make the novel more attractive. Of course, I am not suggesting that Lao Gaoda should engage in black technology inventions and create things that he said he did not want to write more about. It is just to change the previous writing methods based on the ideological theory of governance and bring some new ideas to the novel 2. I suggest that in future novels, more plots of the emotional interaction between the protagonists and the heroines can be added. To put it simply, it means adding more descriptive plots for the heroines in the novel, adding more scenes for the heroines, describing their daily lives, their emotional interactions with the protagonists, and the various aspects of the heroines. Emotional thoughts, for example, some struggles between their interests, including their own, the future of their children, their balance of interests between their family and the protagonist, their interest disputes among their own families, etc., Write a full description, give some scenes, and look at the books written by Lao Gao before , it seems that only the book "Famous Family" has some descriptions and deeper shaping and drama of the heroines, while other novels really don't have much description of the heroines, and some even barely write about them. They just mention their names, take them into the palace, and then put them on the shelf and deal with them by passers-by. So, I suggest In this book, and in the books written in the future, if we add more dramas and various emotional portrayals to the heroines, then the novel will be more full and vivid 3. Why do I like Lao Gao's books? It's because there are some things I like in Lao Gao's books, including plotting, ruthless iron-bloodedness, hegemony, war, and of course some The harem, so I hope that Lao Gao's new book will be about scheming, iron-blooded hegemony, and war. In the harem, there will be more distinctive heroines who can help the protagonist in some aspects. For example, the daughter of a wealthy family in political marriage (and a woman with political wisdom) people), the daughters of military generals (female generals with martial arts abilities), the daughters of merchants with financial support (women with business talents, after the protagonist strives for power, in return, the businessman's status will be slightly improved and business development will occur), the daughter of the leader of the martial arts forces who can help as an intelligence agent (It can help the protagonist integrate the world, recruit people from the world, and join the establishment of the intelligence department). During the process of establishing power, when the weak are weak, in the current court, there are intelligent royal princesses, princesses, daughters of important court officials, and other wives and concubines. Of course, as an adjustment, arrange some of the above mentioned Thousands of gold, multiple dowry personal maids, kept as concubines, to enrich the protagonist's harem, the fullness is close to the ancient humanistic scene written in the novel (in ancient times, people of a certain status married women, multiple dowry bed-warming maids, plus two dowry daughters of common people is a common custom), it will be better to satisfy the readers

Just let the pig's feet have no relatives, they are smooth and smooth, Lao Gao, this is a rhythm that has no emotional scenes at all!

The writing is completely low-quality white text. To be honest, there is no trace of the demeanor of a great god at all. It is either a martial arts competition or a martial arts competition. How could there be so many local martial arts meetings in the Tang Dynasty? It is completely nonsense. It's not that the author doesn't understand, it's just that he wrote it like this on purpose to cater to novices. Either he is a ghostwriter, his appearance is too ugly, and he has written books without thinking.

My goal is to be all set, hehe!

The title of the book is very well written. I have read more than 300 chapters, but the main content is not explained clearly. There is a lot of ramblings. The warriors do not want to join the army yet, but they are always working as assassins. There are no serious descriptions of battlefield battles. The description of the emotional scene with the female pig's feet made me extremely disgusted. The supporting characters are brainless and the pig's feet are invincible. It is not interesting. I do not recommend reading. The setting is extremely unreasonable.

After reading hundreds of chapters, the protagonist is just a tool. He has no desires, goals, and no plans for the future. He does things without purpose. You can't tell what the protagonist's thoughts are at all. This character description is worse than that of an elementary school student. In addition, the plot is seriously delayed and watery. Many plots do not advance the main plot at all. I have no idea why the author wrote it. I guess it is just for the sake of water.

This is a soulless book, like chewing wax. I still don't know what the protagonist wants to do! Abandoned, wasting my time.