The Taoist of the Ancient World

There is a former Chaos Eternal Heaven Demon God just released? What does this mean later? A group of half-steppers fighting?

Jiangjiang is here, and the author is so excited that he sticks his little head out.

Brother, before Pangu opened the sky, there was blood rain from the sky, and what is the Zhoutian star array?

The temperament of the protagonist is not written out. It feels like an ordinary person. There are also many unreasonable places in the setting. The dialogue is childish. It is a bit incomprehensible when I see Qinglong as his disciple. I hope the author can persevere and create better works.

Qiankun has another set of spiritual treasures besides the Qiankun Ding.

The poison points in the opening chapter of Honghuangliu are basically all there. Chaos beads, swearing, seizing the body of the Chaos Demon God... I'm convinced 😅

I didn't dare watch it when I saw a female protagonist. It always feels weird to have a female protagonist in Honghuang novels

Although there are many shortcomings, I believe you will make more and more progress. I have been following the article and have subscribed to the latest chapter. Come on!

The writing is quite good and the writing is very sophisticated. But the plot setting still falls into the cliche, and the beginning of being hit by a car is really lacking in originality. But the overall performance is quite impressive. However, the lack of novelty in the plot will still affect this book, but it can be regarded as a high-level work. I hope the author will work hard. It can also be seen from the title of the book. Is it possible that the author is so capable and writes a book in such a disciplined manner? Have you ever thought about innovating?

Yes, novels are all fictitious. It depends on whether the author is good at writing and whether the writing is good or not. Don't use other ancient novels to make quantitative comparisons. Then you have a fair comparison. It's just for entertainment. Don't take it seriously.

Chapter 46: The incarnation of dog licking is really poisonous, so I quit.

Why did you recruit this apprentice? What's the use of cheating the master's apprentice?

I immediately gave up the book when I saw the chapter about pig's feet getting married.

Personally, I think the best starting point for the prehistoric species is the innate divine being born at the end of the ferocious beasts. Just give birth to a baby, and then continue to develop and look for opportunities. The plot unfolds slowly. When you reach the Saint, you can open a new map. When you go down to Journey to the West, basically no one has written about the plot. This is a challenge. A main line can be written in both directions. If your pen is not strong enough, it is best to write in one direction. The logical position must be correct, human, demon, sacred, demon. It's not that I reincarnated into a demon, but I am a human soul, and I can sacrifice everything for people. These are too annoying. As a reader, what I want to see is a different perspective on the world in the book. No Madonna, no darkness, real characterization.

I read this book for the first time in August last year and couldn't stand more than a dozen chapters. The plot is cliche and even bloody, and the character's IQ is a bit below the limit. At that time, I wrote a very long comment in anger. I thought you must be a eunuch, but I didn't expect that you persisted until now. I admire you! I would like to give you a piece of advice. If you are not able to grasp the plot of current novels, then you should be more bland and not bloody. For example, in urban writing, there should be no brainless second-generation jealousy, just be reasonable and close to reality. Honghuang Wen's words exaggerate the fighting scenes and maps, and don't make Honghuang a low-level martial artist. The most important thing is that your behavior should be consistent with your personality

I just have one question! That is, you are already in the realm of a saint in chaos. After being injured, your realm has fallen and you have to realize it again? This is too ridiculous. You said that the origin is damaged, which means that your future achievements will be limited and your cultivation will progress slowly. By completing your origin, you have further become the top Chaos Demon God. It's not like you have lost your memory, your insights are still there! Why do we need to re-understand the realm? Isn't it enough to practice magic power? This is a reference. On the list of gods, the twelve golden immortals were stripped of their vitality and became mortals. Others took my elixir and restored their magic power and became golden immortals again.

Hongjun hasn't arrived yet, Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian, you arrived first. When you arrive, you can arrive secretly. You can also declare to the whole world. Are you seeking death for fear of not being able to catch up with Rehu? Hongjun is the spokesperson chosen by Tiandao. You should just talk about it. You reached it before Hongjun. Do you mean that Tiandao is blind and can't choose? Or do you want to be with Tiandao so that you can be the spokesperson of Tiandao?

No. Didn't you realize that this book was copied? The plot is exactly the same as The Demon Emperor's Defying the Heavens. It's already finished. This book is the same as The Demon Emperor's Defying the Heavens. The heroine's plot is almost the same. What's there to read?

Is this drama of recruiting a disciple really hard to understand sometimes? Hongjun and Sanqing accepted disciples in order to gain luck. The protagonist's apprenticeship is purely a nanny. Why would he accept a disciple if he didn't open a big school?

It looks okay from the front, but as soon as you enter the starry sky, you seem to be a different person. After living alone for hundreds of millions of years, when you meet a woman, she seems to be more of a loser than a loser, and she licks dogs even more.

The protagonist is completely a diao, no matter how high his cultivation level is, he doesn't have any celestial spirit, he often has sexual intercourse, and there are romance scenes. I feel like it's not my cup of tea. I prefer to read more serious prehistoric novels.

The copied Demon Emperor of the Ancient World is exactly the same.

The Chaos Demon God all carries the form of the Heart of Tao, and we still don't know what the protagonist's true form is like. And it felt like the plot was rushed and lacked a kind of foundation. Probably a newbie

The author is Rui, and the general Qi Dao literature is like this. Anyone who disturbs my mind will be killed! Anyone who worries about me will be killed! Anyone who deceives my mind will be killed! Anyone who deceives my mind, kill! Anyone who holds my heart will be killed! Anyone who touches my heart will be killed! Anyone who blocks my pursuit of the truth will be killed!

The further you go, the lower your cultivation level becomes. Really, I don't like to read such prehistoric articles now. Moreover, it is just a accumulation of energy. It talks about the immortality of the Golden Immortal and the eternal freedom of all time and space in Da Luo. Are there any withdrawals for these? Hunyuan Daluo and Hunyuan Wuji were robbed so easily?                                                                                     (some readers' thoughts)