The Daoist of Qian Kun in the Primordial World

Brother, before Pangu opened the sky, there was blood rain from the sky, and what is the Zhoutian star array?

The temperament of the protagonist is not written out. It feels like an ordinary person. There are also many unreasonable places in the setting. The dialogue is childish. It is a bit incomprehensible when I see Qinglong as his disciple. I hope the author can persevere and create better works.

The poison points in the opening chapter of Honghuangliu are basically all there. Chaos beads, swearing, seizing the body of the Chaos Demon God... I'm convinced 😅

Qiankun has another set of spiritual treasures besides the Qiankun Ding.

I didn't dare watch it when I saw a female protagonist. It always feels weird to have a female protagonist in Honghuang novels

Although there are many shortcomings, I believe you will make more and more progress. I have been following the article and have subscribed to the latest chapter. Come on!

The writing is quite good and the writing is very sophisticated. But the plot setting still falls into the cliche, and the beginning of being hit by a car is really lacking in originality. But the overall performance is quite impressive. However, the lack of novelty in the plot will still affect this book, but it can be regarded as a high-level work. I hope the author will work hard. It can also be seen from the title of the book. Is it possible that the author is so capable and writes a book in such a disciplined manner? Have you ever thought about innovating?

Personally, I think the best starting point for the prehistoric species is the innate divine being born at the end of the ferocious beasts. Just give birth to a baby, and then continue to develop and look for opportunities. The plot unfolds slowly. When you reach the Saint, you can open a new map. When you go down to Journey to the West, basically no one has written about the plot. This is a challenge. A main line can be written in both directions. If your pen is not strong enough, it is best to write in one direction. The logical position must be correct, human, demon, sacred, demon. It's not that I reincarnated into a demon, but I am a human soul, and I can sacrifice everything for people. These are too annoying. As a reader, what I want to see is a different perspective on the world in the book. No Madonna, no darkness, real characterization.

I immediately gave up the book when I saw the chapter about pig's feet getting married.

Why did you recruit this apprentice? What's the use of cheating the master's apprentice?