The Daoist of Qian Kun in the Primordial World
洪荒之乾坤道人
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- Ongoing
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- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Mythic Cultivation
- Updated
- 6y ago
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Brother, before Pangu separated heaven and earth, where did the rain of blood come from? And what is the Zhou Tian Star Array?
The protagonist's temperament wasn't well-developed; he felt like an ordinary person. There were also many illogical plot points, and the dialogue was childish. I couldn't understand the part where he took Qinglong as his disciple. I hope the author can persevere and create more outstanding works.
The opening of this "Primordial Era" genre basically covers all the worst tropes: the Chaos Pearl, oaths, possessing a Chaos Demon God... I'm speechless. 😅
Besides the Qiankun Peak, there is another set of spiritual treasures in Qiankun.
I'm too scared to read anything with a female lead. It just feels weird to read a fantasy novel with a female lead.
Although there are many shortcomings, I believe you will improve more and more. I have been following the story and have subscribed to the latest chapter. Keep it up!
The writing is quite good, very skillful. However, the plot is somewhat clichéd; the car accident at the beginning lacks originality. Overall, though, it showcases the author's skill. The lack of originality in the plot does affect the book's quality, but it's still a high-level work. I look forward to seeing more from the author. Judging from the title, does the author, given their strong abilities, choose to write in such a conventional way? Didn't they consider trying to be more innovative?
Personally, I believe the best starting point for a prehistoric fantasy story is a born deity emerging at the end of the era of ferocious beasts. Just have one treasure as a companion, then focus on developing your character and seeking opportunities. The plot will unfold gradually.
I dropped the book as soon as I got to the chapter where the protagonist got married.
What's the point of taking in an apprentice? What use is an apprentice who betrays his master?