Soul Maker

After reading Chapter 36, I haven't found any obvious poisonous points for the time being, but overall, the plot lacks interest and is a bit like reading a novel. In fact, it would be better to add more character interactions and the characters can be created more fully. The supporting role is better shaped than the protagonist, but the protagonist has more scenes than the supporting role, which creates a sense of contradiction. Either the protagonist is downplayed and the "grandpa" mode is used, or the protagonist's image is strengthened to make the protagonist more distinct. If it is not a slow-burning novel, it would be better to strengthen the description of the protagonist's abilities and arouse readers' interest better. But if it is a slow-burning novel, then strengthen the description of the background to make the various emotions and plot more profound. This will also give readers a stronger sense of immersion and the desire to continue reading. This is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't comment. It's useless if you comment. I usually don't read the replies.

I read the pirated version of "Whoring for Free" to the 200th chapter, and after reading the table of contents, I found that the first official task spanned 200 chapters. I felt that the plot was too dragging, and I was very tired after reading it. When I read it again, I felt that it was not that interesting. The framework setting of the novel is very attractive, but the story is not told well and is too wordy.

I briefly read the full text (so far) The writing is good, the setting is creative, and the recommendations are sincere. Why is it not popular? I can't understand. When I read it, I always had a feeling that it was tense, deliberate and bland, like boiled chicken ribs. "It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to throw it away." Many chapters were like this. The author gave me a feeling that he had great ideas to tell me one by one, but he was "incoherent" and "every time", which made me very anxious and couldn't wait to jump to observe the direction of the story. At a certain point in time, the amount of information will suddenly increase, and then the protagonist will only deal with one point of it, and the other information will slowly spread out, but other information seems to be equally important and urgent - aaaaaaaaaaaaaa! ! ! Seemingly insignificant things are going on all the time... The main line has always been, "competition between humans and other races". The universe is of a single type, but some traces can only be seen from the trapeze and background textures... Four stories, grand and small, interlocking, ingenious, a blind man touches an elephant, touches a basket! I just don't understand why this is happening. Bai Jiajie jpg The protagonist fully embodies how a normal competitive spirit can make people feel righteous and disgusting. I am such a direct good guy! You say he is specialized, he seems to know everything; you say he is great, you can't say; you say he is smart, he is stupid enough to be honest! Look at this positive energy, it is so full that it is overflowing... As for the system, the sense of existence is very normal, so normal that it can't be normal anymore... This kind of job is very "civil servant", honest and calm. When reading this book, I often think of other similar books. Other books seem to be more "cool"? I have read all the previous chapters that seemed to discourage me from quitting, thinking that the setting is really good, and it will be fine if I just be more nervous... But... But... Fuck the soul nanny! Fuck Bibi! Go to hell! The magical infighting is so fun! The wonderful turtle butt is so joyful! The long donkey journey is too special and relaxing! I can't eat hot tofu in a hurry, and I won't believe it if the cake is too big! ! ! Add water! The brave man who goes against the current! I left mellowly, add water!

Very well written! I love watching it!

Okay, I'll vote for you first today. I haven't read the book yet, so I suggest changing the introduction, otherwise I won't even read it**

I'm testing the water today. What do you think about it? You are welcome to share! The important thing is, if you think it looks good, please collect it:)

After reading some, let's talk about it. You are not distinguishing between subject and object. Logically, this kind of subject should weaken the role of the protagonist. It is best to use the function of a soul grandfather to cultivate the supporting characters, giving a sense of cultivation. But you let the protagonist participate in the plot, drastically changed the plot, and made the selected "protagonist" dispensable, which is very bad to read. Also aside from the awkward and unreasonable plot at the beginning, I can barely watch it.

I haven't read the book yet. I remember I threw it on the bookshelf during the Platinum League a long time ago. I didn't expect the author to insist on writing so many books with such dismal results. Some of the books I threw in during the same period had much better results than yours. The author's perseverance deserves recognition.

Boss, give yourself some silver and at least change your account.

The claws that were blown in by Bai Yinmeng

How to say it. . . . Open a new book. Sure enough, it's good for you. . . There is really no need to keep writing You have accumulated what should be accumulated The next book is needed to explode. . . . 😠

1 Million words, 10,000 recommendation votes. . . . It's true that love generates electricity. . . .

I don't quite understand why I read it carefully. The writing is very good, the description is very detailed, and the characters' behavior is not mentally retarded, but it is just plain, as plain as boiled water.

I had a feeling after reading Chapter 31, Blue Star people, without the system, they are just fw.

Although I don't know what the introduction says, it feels pretty cool🐮

Tai Shui, I wrote it entirely for money and the number of words, and the writing behind it is messy.

I just discovered this book on the daily guide 🙂🤓🤭

For the first copy, 7 days felt like three months, which was too long. The second dungeon, the red level, made a blind choice without thinking or listening to advice.

It's almost 2 million words, awesome!

I saw a monthly pass on the last day. Please support me.

Although, has the author considered writing a new book?

Why does the rhythm become so fast😓😓

There are only 2 million words left of 10,000 words, come on! 🤐

The guide came in and seemed to be of good quality.

The character of the protagonist is quite confusing. In the beginning, he was a competitive fun-loving person, but the plot wanted to be serious. After returning to Blue Star, competitiveness became a tactic, and Leziren was even more lost in Liang Chao. Then in Blue Star, it's okay to have a passionate salvation story. Just think of it as describing the growth of the protagonist. After all, he is young. However, the protagonist is looking for trouble as if his butt is on fire. He has already seen the gap between him and the top and rushed forward without thinking. Finally, it is a person who has lost the characteristic of competitiveness and only uses competitiveness as a tool. His attributes of a playful person have been worn away by experience, and he is also dragged down by the previous characteristics and cannot write with passion or planning. The result is that nothing the author wanted to write was written, and the various colors blended together into colorful black.

666 Already 1.8 Million words

The protagonist has a problem with his IQ. Still a virgin

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The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

Is this book an infinite stream of copied texts?