My Ship Girl Comes from the Deep Sea

It's a bit long-winded, the plot is pretty naive, the writing is immature, and there are some issues with the paragraphing, but it's actually pretty good for a newcomer.

The main character is written too childishly. I think the main character should be more mature between the two camps. Personally, I feel quite disappointed.

If I could really choose between a ship girl or a deep sea, I would definitely choose a deep sea. It's not that the ship girl isn't cute, it's that the admiral is disgusting, and privileges are everywhere. . .

For those who want to see Deep Sea Ship Girl, I recommend Deep Sea Admiral, Joy is Non-toxic, Pig's Feet is the Deep Sea.

Some of the ship girl novels are pretty good, and there are a lot of eunuchs It's rare to find a novel without eunuchs and it's okay It's time to laugh

I got a headache from watching it, so I stopped watching it, and then I threw it in. I watched it and didn't want to see the grouping.

I just want to say that this book is super ink-filled and bloody. I have relapsed, so those who come after me should respect themselves.

Come on, author, there are not many authors who write about ship girls, and every one of them deserves support. If you are not good at writing, you can take your time and accumulate writing experience! More than 600,000 copies of this book have been written, and there are both good and bad reviews. I hope the author can continue to finish the book. With the experience of this book, it could be even better. Come on, author!

I've read two chapters and there's something wrong with the author's writing.

The protagonist is a loser and has no clue what a 20-year-old should have in mind. Can anyone be bullied and then explode? Puff……

Hello author, I have read Chapter 39 now, and I feel that some of the routines you wrote are really stiff and hard to read. I suggest you write some daily interactions when you are not inspired. Shopping and being slapped in the face is really boring. It is better if you directly write about the daily life of shopping than what you wrote. The above are all personal opinions. In addition, I hope you can write better and better.

Fighting is a flaw, so write it in a crushing way. You have to win in the end anyway.

I found another boat spirit novel, I hope it's not bad...

For the first book, don't worry about grades, just practice.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the plot of the conflict in the college is really ridiculous. Let's put it this way, others are knocking on the door of your home and may take you away at any time. Are you still fighting with yourself at home? Moreover, they are from a military family, completely uneducated and have a good background as a nouveau riche. As long as there are parents in the family who have served in the military, even if the children are not well educated, it is impossible to be in such a bad situation. Anyone with a little bit of logic would find it awkward. The writing is okay and I can read it; the plot is too bloody and too poisonous; I guess the main plot is to retrieve my ship girl from the deep sea, I can look forward to the plot

The early writing is a bit far-fetched, but the writing is still good. At least it's not toxic, but it's a bit dry. I don't know what will happen next.

I'm shocked by this script. . Kuroshio: The Deep Sea Awakens? The author is amazing

The plot is good, but the main character is too sexy

To be honest, the appearance of Li Xueyin made me a little confused. Didn't the male pig's feet come from time travel? Isn't the whole world of shipgirls just a game? Could it be that my sister also came from time travel?

... It's a sad day that I was raped by EX's whole family. Others' trapezoids are critically hit, but mine are critically hit. It's so hard for me,

He also said that there are no routines. At the beginning, he will give you a fool and give you a slap in the face. You are the most routine. If I can give you a rating, I will give you the lowest rating.

When will the sea atomization transformation be written, and when will our Great Star Destroyer Su Ritian be released?

I feel that Sword Girl is a beautiful image here. Those navy, those nobles, and those admirals are very big, but some of them are bad images.

The writing is acceptable. Let's support the new author. In addition, you can write more about how some non-protagonist characters help the protagonist (it doesn't matter if you die after writing) (yes, I am the successor)

Hehe, it's all booked 😁

You're right, the front is indeed a bit discouraging 😱😱 But it's not that you can't read it (for those who like to watch Kanji) You can read it in Shuhuang

💢It's actually over but I don't want to watch it_(:з∠)_