
A Prequel to the Second and Third Stories Between Me and the Ship Girl and the Elf
我与舰娘和精灵的二三事前传
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 95k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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My Ship Girl Comes from the Deep Sea
Northern Qiji only came out once. Currently there are Yamato aircraft carrier and light cruiser Cologne
Can't sign a contract after reopening? Is there a predecessor to this book?
Basically there is nothing wrong with it. I just started reading it, but is it too descriptive? For example, Yamato-san, I know, your Yamato-san is very beautiful, but there is no need to keep emphasizing on the amazing expressions on the faces of passers-by. To be honest, even if you meet a very beautiful girl on the street, it will not be like in the novel. At most, you will look at her twice. Don't put too much emphasis on other people's jealousy of the protagonist. There will be more ship girls in the future. Do you have to write about them every time one appears? It's been a long time since I've seen a fanfic on Ship C. After all, it's basically blue now, and even shipgirl stories are rarely written. But I still remember that the deep-sea shipgirl on Shipc seems pretty good-looking (I've only seen fanfics, and the game is not clear because it requires a ladder). I hope there will be fewer such descriptions of a person in the future.
It's been a while since I've read Kanniang's article. Will the protagonist summon the deep sea?
Um, it makes sense, punctuation marks should be added in full, why do you always see single-sided quotation marks? What about the other half? Instead of writing periods when you should, always use commas. Let's not talk about the plot, but let's talk about the background. Since it is a fantasy background, the names and other things must be spoken in a Western way. The author has his own ideas, but the forced insertion of Nippon's name and way of speaking feels awkward in a fantasy setting.