One Way Doomsday

Preliminary score: 81 points Number of words read: 63,000 words, 26 chapters Work status: signed, serialized Work type: science fiction Reviewer: The Happy Traveler {"NickName":"Gorgeous 233","UserId":334304435} uation handled eulogue Introduction: (8/10) It is wonderful and concise. The short two-sentence dialogue immediately arouses the reader's interest. Three Golden Chapters: (17/20) 1. The first chapter has a good start. The silent night is like a faucet suddenly opened, and catharsis and noise follow. The male protagonist was woken up in the middle of the night and was shocked to see his roommate Zhang Xiaoying with a runny nose and a serious condition. Strangely, no one answered the calls he made to the hospital and the police. 2. Chapter 2, after calling for help from the neighbor in vain, Bai Ye's subconscious voice suddenly came out (I really like this sentence "Scars are men's romance"). After Bai Ye bled his roommate's nose, he found that all the blood flowed out was black blood. On the second day, the roommate's face turned from pale to sallow, and he demanded to eat live blood and meat. Then his teeth mutated, saliva flowed across the room, and he screamed strangely and pounced on Bai Ye. Frightened by his roommate's bloodthirsty eyes, Bai Ye fled, and with the help of his awakened [conscious micro-control] ability, he successfully escaped into the kitchen. 3. Chapter 3: Bai Ye restrained his roommate, tied him up and locked him in his dormitory. Only then did he realize that he was exhausted. It turned out that the existence, words and deeds of Diaofeng (the ability to control consciousness at the micro level) would consume Bai Ye's physical strength. Storyline (16/20) 1. Overnight, Bai Ye's world changed. His roommates turned into zombie-like monsters, and a large number of people in the city were infected. Bai Ye met Chu Yuping, a normal person, during her investigation, and was rescued by her boyfriend Zhao Zhenguo. In order to save their roommate, Bai Ye and the other three set out to a neighboring city to find people with healing abilities. Because of tracking the scarecrow, Bai Ye falls into the secret realm of fairy tale creatures... 2. Whether roommate Zhang Xiaoying will eventually be cured is very exciting. I hope that the cold apocalypse can leave a glimmer of hope for the patient. Advantages: (15/20) 1. The author's writing style is smooth and natural, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, and the reading experience is quite good. 2. The depiction of fairy tale creatures in the article is very wonderful, each one is vivid and lifelike, and has its own soul. 3. The author's detailed description is very tense and full of pictures, which makes people immersed in the scene and makes them feel that time is flowing. The biggest highlight: (17/20) 1. The author's concept is very unique. The end of the world in the novel is seamlessly connected with fairy tales such as Grimm's Fairy Tales and The Wizard of Oz, forming an interesting but real world, which is novel and interesting. 2. The author is a master of creating atmosphere. The atmosphere in the novel is tense and slow, allowing readers to experience the pleasure of reading in a frightened way. Disadvantages 1. There are some typos in the book. Details determine success or failure. If the author wants to become a god, he needs to do it to the extreme. 2. The descriptions of women in the book tend to be bland. Chu Yuping, the only woman who appeared in Chapter 4, should have been a highlight of the book, but it's a pity. I suggest the author polish it and re-outline her soul with pen and ink. Summary: This is a thrilling and interesting post-apocalyptic survival article. The author has extraordinary skills and the potential to become a god. I wish the author more and more wonderful writing.

I just want to ask, there are so many girls as the main characters, can I be the one? My reward for you is in vain.

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As of Chapter 82, let me tell you my thoughts. The protagonist awakens his powers after the end of the world, and then zombies attack. Alien invasion. There are also small world fairy tale creatures. The core of the earth is eaten by cosmic creatures. By chance, the protagonist gets on a void beast (?) And crosses the planet. It feels like there is no main line, and changing the map is a bit inexplicable. In the beginning, when the apocalypse strikes, the protagonist accidentally enters a small world after awakening his superpower, then gets acquainted with fairy tale creatures, and then defeats the boss and returns to the real world, bringing the fairy tale creatures with him. Later, after the protagonist entered the apocalyptic base, there was no contact with the fairy tale creatures he brought over. It's a bit of a pity, because I personally think those fairy tale creatures are quite cute (the personality of each creature is quite vivid.). If the protagonist and those fairy tale creatures team up to upgrade later, some scenes of being provoked and then pretending to be slapped in the face can be interspersed, or some weak alien creatures and mutated creatures can be killed, and an illustration can be made. After the protagonist and his party are able to protect themselves, the protagonist can be arranged to enter other maps. But there was no contact with the protagonist after entering the base. Later, the protagonist crossed over to other planets for various reasons. It's still a weak one now. Another thing is that the author set up the end of the world where humans mutate into zombies and have super powers, but at the same time, they also set up an invasion by alien creatures. Moreover, the alien creatures set are very powerful from the beginning. In this way, human beings have no capital to resist at all from the beginning. If it is written like this, except for the protagonist, everyone else will just play gg from the beginning. But the alien creatures set at the beginning were too powerful. The physical rules and biological operating rules are fundamentally different between galaxies. Even if it is an alien invasion, the aliens should at least have an adaptation period. As soon as the apocalypse broke out, the core of the planet where the protagonist lived (? I can't remember clearly.) Was eaten by cosmic creatures. So according to the protagonist's planet, the background seems to be similar to Earth's technology. If cosmic creatures came to bite us, wouldn't there be any warning beforehand? Even if there are no signs of the end of the world, there will always be some signs of alien creatures. You must know that every country monitors outer space at all times. I don't know how the author will write later, but I hope this book will not collapse.

Is there any follow-up? Requesting new books and updates. Where is the author?

Yes, when writing about zombies, it is recommended that you pay attention to their appearance, their instincts, and the movements and expressions of the characters when they see zombies. If you are developing the apocalypse from school, it is recommended to describe how the protagonist should choose when encountering the ugliness of human nature and brotherhood, and how to face the apocalypse and the apocalyptic environment. People are selfish animals, and will the protagonist abandon the most precious things for the sake of brotherhood? It is recommended not to write some illegal content in the novel (the author should know this). If it is not possible, you can summarize it in one sentence.

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