Against the Current: 1982

A very good book, definitely a 12-year-old bookworm

The author's book is very well written. It can be seen that the author's writing style is good and he knows a lot about that period. Various characters, customs, and scenes are vividly displayed on the page. However, I feel that there are two shortcomings. First, the opening paragraph should be changed. The protagonist's wife has just died, and the book does not say how much hatred and what kind of hatred the protagonist and his wife have. The protagonist is very excited after time travel. It seems that the protagonist cannot be said to be ungrateful, it is a bit abnormal. The writing about the second protagonist and the woman is very realistic and in line with the social environment at that time, but there is no love between them. How can I put it, the writing is in line with reality. But when people read the novel, after all, they are pursuing a kind of erotic feeling in a real environment. What I wrote is true or not. In fact, it is all for the sake of better ** service. The woman has no love for the protagonist. Her father also uses the protagonist's influence to improve his status in the scene. His mother is not afraid of coveting the protagonist's house and other material conditions. I feel that this is a very "Shanghai" family.

The author's writing skills are not bad, and at least his ability to lay out neatly and narrate the book is acceptable. Logically speaking, the score should not be so bad. However, the author's outline setting problem is too big, which seriously delayed the score of this book. The first problem is the rebirth node and the protagonist's mentality. It's okay to be reborn in the 1970s, and it's okay for a protagonist in a rebirth novel to be unable to forget his girlfriend in his previous life, but there is a problem when the two are combined. After the protagonist is reborn, he is almost 30 years older than his girlfriend in his previous life. Either his girlfriend in his previous life is also reborn, or the protagonist has to wait for his girlfriend for 20 years to get married. Both of these are obviously unrealistic. Under such unrealistic circumstances, the protagonist still misses his girlfriend from his previous life. The result is that not only does it fail to establish a character image, but it also makes readers extremely uncomfortable. There is a very obvious detail. After a wave of readers tearing up Chapter 8, this chapter has plummeted. It is still a long way from being on the shelves. You have screened out a wave of readers. How good can this book subscription be? And can you blame the protagonist? Obviously not. It can only be said that there is a problem with the author's setting. He still wants to engage in literary youth and innocent feelings under unrealistic circumstances. In the end, the readers were shocked. The second is the setting of the protagonist's environment and pattern. A factory with a prosperous business seems to have no problems at first glance, but if you look through some of the masterpieces of industrial literature from Qidian. Com, is there any book in which the factory where the protagonist is reborn does not face a crisis? Set a factory where the workers are underfed. Firstly, the interaction between all living beings in the factory after being saved by the protagonist can bring great satisfaction to the readers. Secondly, it can quickly allow the protagonist to show his talents and advance the character from a worker to a front-line or quasi-front-line management. What about a factory that doesn't have to worry about business? There are no contradictions, no joys, yes, the protagonist who has been described in a lot of words has become a front-line worker happily - well, this is one of the plots of this book. You are not a well-known lv5 or great god. How many people will have the patience to continue watching the unsatisfactory plot in the early stage? Perhaps one or two of the ten readers who clicked in will persist until it is put on the shelves, and then one or two of the ten who persist until it is put on the shelves will pay for a subscription. Then the question arises - how far can the readers who were originally screened out push this book? If you can't think clearly about this problem, this book will be like this

Author, you need to understand one thing: after a series of struggles, the protagonist finally won against the director. Successfully returned to the leadership of the collective for a half-year term. But in the eyes of readers, this so-called victory of returning to the large collective is actually a failure. Why is it said to be a failure? When I made such great achievements, I was kicked out, and now I am shamelessly returning. The term is half a year, and he may be kicked out again at any time. Where is the self-esteem? I know the author wrote this to fill in the gaps. After all, those college students were recruited by the protagonist. After all, the protagonist paid a lot for this place. After all, wait and see foreshadowing. 😅 But this is a failure in the eyes of readers. Because the result you obtained through hard work is a failure, has no self-esteem, and is very risky. The protagonist's character has collapsed. 😜

The plot is steady and gradual, and the theme is clear. This is a slow-burning work. If you want to read interesting articles, you have to save up slowly. It is not easy for the author to write a book, so please don't criticize 🙂🙂🙂

What you write here is that you only care about making money. Your wife divorced and you took your only son to live in the United States. When your business grows, your son must have been brainwashed as an American since he was a child. What's the point of everything you do?

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Great cover, great writing. Is the girlfriend a foreshadowing? How many chapters will it take for the girlfriend to make a comeback?

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The most deceptive thing about this book is that in the first chapter, he introduces his girlfriend as the woman he has been with since middle school. He has been in love with her until he was 35 years old, almost 20 years ago. He seems to be unable to remember anything when he is born again. It looks like two people were hit together. It is possible that the plot will follow them together in the future. But you can't just wake up and nothing happened? What about the changes in your heart? It is recommended that the first three chapters be overhauled. I can't stand it.