Zombie Virus in Another World

I consider myself to be more resistant to poison, but after reading about 27 chapters I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. I'm not trying to criticize the author, but I really couldn't stand the first part of it, even if the second part was well written, not many people would be able to stick with it. Let me give my suggestions to the author 1. The early plot is too messy and there is no foreshadowing as to how the protagonist came to be. It looks confusing 2. Pig's feet doesn't feel right in his head (don't get me wrong, I'm just not complaining, I just don't know what's wrong). Other passers-by or side characters have bad personalities. 3. It's been more than 20 chapters and I still haven't realized the seriousness of the matter. Pig's feet has no sense of crisis and he has fallen in love, which has become a daily line. 4. The main plot progresses too slowly, and Pigfoot doesn't know when he will be able to leave the "Novice Village" and get out of this small town. 5. There is no logic, but the writing skills are good, which can be seen in the early stage. I guess the author should have no outline when he first wrote it, and just write whatever he wants. (Don't complain if I'm wrong (*❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*.) 6. As other book friends said, it's good that the sword and the framework of the magical world were written as a magical love (it's just what I thought of after reading the first 20 chapters). Finally, I will contribute a collection to the author and add a bookshelf. Looking forward to the author's new book (I hope he won't persuade me to quit, it's a good topic )

It's not easy to start a new book. If you read it well, please don't be stingy with your recommendation vote. Every support you give is the greatest motivation for the author's creation.

Already invested, it's very good. I'll give you the recommendation vote. Don't let me down.

Abandoned. . . Can't stand it anymore

This book's dissuasive power is so strong.

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This is the protagonist's brain. . . . . . . . . .

This book is written as if it is set in a game world with poor logic. Zombies are starting to appear and the protagonist is still living his daily life leisurely.

A good but not popular series At first I found this book and read the comments. There were very few people and few recommendation votes, but I still gave it a try To be honest, the first three chapters felt a bit uncomfortable to read. It was either poisonous or something, just like it was a bit messy and I didn't think about how to write it. But I liked the rest. It's good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The more I write, the better it gets. I highly recommend everyone to read it. I must recommend it.

As I watched, I realized why the natives didn't care about his black hair and black eyes. No one cared about the protagonist's clothes made of materials comparable to those of aboriginal nobles? ? . . It feels like a bit of a no-brainer. .

Haha, the energy of food can't compare to the energy of the universe? The author is so funny.

Okay, okay, I'll give you the recommendation vote tomorrow

Come on, the book is good, I'll give you the votes

The idea is great, but the writing is poor, the logic is illogical, and the protagonist has no brain. The author is practicing and finishing it as soon as possible. Read your new book.

What is the author writing? I feel like a new author. The article lacks logic and the most basic common sense. It is a novice book and I can't read it.

There was a reason why no one watched it. I decided to put my brain back in and give up, and then go play games and kill zombies to relieve stress.

Does the author want to use this framework to push for rewriting?

Damn, I thought I was the only one feeling like this. It makes me so tired. It's too difficult ahead

It's very well written, and it's the kind of adventure novel I've been looking forward to in a different world. The protagonist is righteous, and there's no system to explore this fantasy world step by step.

After reading twenty chapters, it felt like a joke. There's no logic at all, I'm trying to persuade you to quit.

Come on, I look forward to your new book. What type are you planning to wear?

Why can't we talk about love normally? Is Winnie just hanging there? This hole is just a knot in my heart. Can you fill it in?

There are zombies here, come and see! You can read this book, the title is a bit exaggerated.

It's different from what I thought. Not suitable for this style.

In a way, magic is similar to viruses, but the latter is more similar to witchcraft, while the former originates from occultism. For this, the author can refer to the world view of the Game of Thrones. The White Walkers and dragons can be understood as blood magic modified by viruses, and the shapechangers in the Dream Parade can be understood as black magic that controls the mind. The Night King and the Green Seer master both at the same time. If necessary, even mechanical potions can be regarded as alchemy. After recognizing this reality, you will find that biohazards are a common phenomenon in the wizarding world.

Have you established a group? Author: I feel like this book can actually be cut. . It's not that the writing was bad, but I felt a bit boring from the early stages. When I first came out of the small town, I felt that it was not very good. But it's not easy for the author to persevere. If it doesn't work, let's just test the waters and pave the way for the next book. The character portrayal is also very good, but maybe I won't want to follow it after watching it in the later stage. . You see, I have said so much, but in fact the main purpose is just one. How about we create a group first? 😁😁