The Story of Yu Wanxian

I don't know whether it's because I've read too many novels, or because I've grown up, but I don't like to read novels about immortals who are useless, and there are too many super relatives. Now I like to read the kind of novels about immortals. The initial spiritual roots are better, and then you work hard step by step. Today you are proud of the sect, and tomorrow the sect will be proud of you. The kind of novels that are more passionate. No matter it is good or evil, everyone has their own principles and reasons in their hearts. Hateful people must have their own pity, and they are more flesh-and-blood novels.

Why is it that Yu Wan is not close to her biological parents, but instead thinks she has found family ties after time travel? Trying Maslow's human requires five levels of analysis. Maslow's five levels of human needs include: Physiological needs, safety needs, emotional needs, esteem needs, and self-actualization needs. In modern society, even though Yu Wan's parents have divorced and she lives in the countryside with her grandparents, the living standards and public security in modern society are far better than those in ancient times, and both physical and safety needs can be met. However, after her parents divorced and each formed a family and had their own children, Yu Wan was unable to integrate with their families out of a feeling of being abandoned. Although Yu Wan was respected in these two families, she could not feel needed and her emotional needs could not be satisfied. Due to the blood gap, the respect she said in these two families was also limited. In addition, I am still young and have just entered the society, and I have not yet completed self-realization. As a result, they feel alienated from modern society and desire more attention and need from their loved ones. After time travel, Yu's father passed away, and her mother was weak and her younger brother's family was poor. As the eldest daughter, she naturally assumed the responsibility of being the head of the family, taking care of her younger brother, helping her mother with housework, and going to the mountains to collect herbs to treat her mother's illness. A family of three, one weak and one young, the mother and younger brother naturally trust and depend on her, and due to the poor family background, their physical needs have been reduced to a minimum. In this case, her emotional connection with the Yu family became deeper and deeper, and she realized that she was needed and respected that she had not experienced in her previous life. So she thought that she gained the long-lost family affection after traveling through time. So from an objective point of view, her parents in her previous life may not love her less than her mother in this life. However, the heroine has been psychologically unconfident because she grew up without her parents. For her, the need to be needed and respected is more important than the superiority in life. So, if you want to gain the friendship and trust of the heroine, you must first satisfy the heroine's psychology of being needed. I have read sixty-four chapters in this book, and there are not many positive female characters. This is probably because they are relatively strong, have nothing to ask for from the heroine, and cannot satisfy the heroine's psychological needs. On the other hand, among the male characters who have appeared, they all have their own thoughts and more or less benefit from the heroine, which satisfies the heroine's need. Therefore, the male characters are more brilliantly depicted and the villains are slightly less. I hope that the author of the following article can help the heroine get rid of the psychological dependence of being needed, shift the focus from routine love and hatred to cultivation, and create better storylines and male and female characters. The heroine is already a monk, and her future should be the stars, the sea, and the boundless universe, rather than getting involved in right and wrong. If you don't like the above, don't spray it!

The copywriting is too pretentious. I don't want to ask for immortality. If I tell you that you can cultivate immortality and live forever, I'll see how many people can refuse.

Alas, why did the author lower the heroine's IQ infinitely, as well as everything around her, in Chapter 456, everyone knew that he was coming for Dahuang and didn't take him away, because Dahuang wanted to fight and didn't take him away. If the heroine is in danger and Dahuang's guardian is exposed or directly sees it, then Dahuang is not a danger. Others will definitely arrest them all for Rhubarb, and they will all be destroyed by then. Such an obvious dangerous element is completely ignored just because Rhubarb does not want to be collected. I really don't know what the author is thinking. It's really a pity to lose it like this after watching so much, but every time I watch it, I feel more and more tired that the heroine has no IQ at all, and it is really tiring to go on, and the heroine clearly has a trump card that is life-threatening to use it. You have to stay half-dead and wait for others to save you, so this is something you don't understand. His master gave him a life-saving tool to transform into a god, but he doesn't use it when his life is in danger. If he has to wait until he dies before using it, can't he write a more mature story, eliminate some dangers that seem to be mentally retarded, and make the heroine smarter? I really don't want to give up a book that I have read a lot.

I have been following it. After watching it, I feel that the heroine is practicing very fast, and the supporting characters are also. More importantly, at the beginning, the heroine and the villagers are very young, but they are decisive in killing, which is not suitable for their age. The heroine, forget it, the others are so young, but they are also like that. Also, does the heroine use too many swear words when she was a child? When she grows up, she still knows that it is a complaint, but those who don't know will think it is quite like that. Moreover, the heroine always hides and tucks the sea of ​​glass consciousness that cannot be known to others. But the boundary monument fragments are still hidden and tucked away. Xuantian Sect is also very good to her, and the boundary monument fragments are so important and are still hidden. I also feel that she is a bit like a virgin sometimes. She always says to be careful, but she still uses those top-quality things to save people. It feels a bit contradictory. In short, the author's writing is still very good. Come on.

The introduction is very attractive                                                                                                                                                           The heroine is always fussy at critical moments, and then waits for it to be reversed, and the author's setting is also very weird. The heroine is a mortal who has not practiced yet, and she kills the foundation-building monks with her golden finger. After the crisis is over and the golden finger is taken back, the heroine is not only active and active, but also can think about things. You have to faint at least to save face. The normal operation is to repair the meridians and the damaged foundation in the future, otherwise there is no way to cultivate immortality.

Many times, I don't know what the idea is of forcibly lowering the heroine's IQ. For example, Liuli told Yuan Si about the medicine he gave to the heroine. He might know it after taking a look, and ran to ask others, isn't this forcefully exposing himself? So in the future, try not to write about this kind of forcefully lowering the heroine's IQ. Wouldn't it be better to write more about the heroine's high IQ? Seeing that the heroine obtained the fragment of the boundary monument and the Buddhist inheritance, I thought that she might have demon attacks after the demon-slaying blade, as well as other worlds. It seems that the book is very long, so the author can speed up the pace, otherwise the book will really write nearly 10 million words.

What kind of setting is this? Your own sea of ​​consciousness is equal to your own world, in which you are equal to God and can control everything. And the heroine is really too lazy to learn any cultivation knowledge. It is the basic principle to at least learn the knowledge of a place when you go to a place. She is still a person in her 30s, not even as good as a 10-year-old child. Which secret realm should I go to without understanding the dangers of this secret realm? What is written in this secret realm? It is too casual. Each sect competes. If the opponent does not understand it, I feel that without Liuli, the heroine can do nothing, and she is equal to a waste.

The higher the spiritual root qualifications, the more likely they are to be cultivated by the sect. Since she wants to become stronger, why would she deliberately let her spiritual root qualifications be so low? I don't understand. I don't understand.

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Let me take a look. I hope it is true as the author said that the protagonist kills decisively and there is no male protagonist. As soon as there is a male protagonist, I will remove the male protagonist and don't have any. It would be great to get some Sayuri.

The beginning is not very interesting. I kept reading it, and the cheating is too much. It is easy to lose readers. It is better to change it. Some parents are short-sighted and unnecessary.

The recent chapters have been showing repeated content. If there is no new content, it is better to stop updating. Each time it is repeated, not connected with the previous content, and the logic is confusing.

After reading Chapter 260, I really feel that the heroine has too many worries. Since everyone knows that the owner of this body is still alive and still together, why not find a chance to show off. Such concerns are different between immortals and mortals. There was no family relationship in the previous life, so why write a single parent in this life? Although I got a stepfather later, he went to the world of immortality just a few days after becoming a father, so later I found out that the original owner was still alive, so I could give some compensation or explain it directly to my family, The family might be able to accept this. It's better than being timid like this. The original owner also took over someone else's body. She is actually quite afraid. If others are not afraid, what does the heroine have to be afraid of? Anyway, kiss You have already experienced love, so just treat it as a journey in the world of mortals. Why should you care so much? He is an outsider anyway, so how about forcing him to move in? If he wants to force his move in, isn't it easy? Just kill him and it will be over. It's really a bit too emotional, and I can't understand such a setting. It looked pretty good in front of me. I don't know what will happen when I return home this time. I hope I won't be too disappointed. In this world of boundless books, it is rare to find a book about the past that is worth reading.

Personally speaking, I really don't like Yu Wan's visit to the Buddha Realm. The world view is too out of the ordinary... I just want to ask how long it will take before I can return to the original world. Another point is that the advancement is a bit slow. 123K words are just at the end of the foundation building. I always feel that there are at least 500k words left to complete

The heroine's younger brother's golden finger for drawing talismans was caught off guard Generally speaking, drawing talismans requires very high spiritual consciousness, and I don't know what the setting of this book is And for people who have not read the book at the first level of Qi Refining, the success rate of drawing the talisman is over 8 levels, and it can be completed instantly. At this speed, anyone in the Qi Refining stage can have the top wealth of this interface I hope the author will go back and seriously modify this too thick golden finger I can't stand it.

The content is always repetitive and it gives me a headache to read it.

There's nothing to say about it later in this chapter. Is there no comment?

The old bookworm said that it is very interesting, but this article is not suitable for beginners to read. It is a more traditional cultivation article. If you don't have the patience and just want to watch the routine and get slapped in the face, turn left.

The three newly updated articles are all the same. How do you look at it? It's better to update one article in a few days, so I don't have to spend so much money.

Your writing is very good. I hope you can update it soon 😍

I have been following it recently, and the content is very attractive... But the further I go, the more I find a problem, which is the singleness of the article. For example, where has Master gone? You haven't confessed yet? Also, after Yu Wan returned to the world of cultivation from the Buddhist world, she kept missing meeting Yu Feng, and then did not explain it in depth. I felt that the characters in the first half were completely redundant, the story was not rich enough, and it became narrower as it was written.

The author can't remember what he just wrote. What he writes in the first few paragraphs often contradicts what he writes in the next few paragraphs. I always want to revise it for him.

Big, the middle chapter is gone 😭😭😭😭

The writing is still very good, easy to read, and the writing style is okay. Come on, the author! Some places are a bit random, but that's acceptable!

Is Yu Lin the heroine here? ? ?

Author sister ヾ ^_^♪ Are there any more updates?

Seeing that the heroine has a younger brother, I have to ask if the heroine is a brother-supporting demon

Okay, no one is coming, so just come and sit on the sofa first...😢 I want to cheer myself up! 😳😳 Come on＾0＾~