Descendants

I read the whole book in 24 hours. I am also an old book friend of Mushroom. Let me tell you my feelings. The idea is very bold, the subject matter is very novel and exciting, and it becomes more and more exciting. The first few chapters were too dull and boring. I started reading the book on the first day of Mushroom. After reading one chapter, I silently quit, and then opened it again. I read the book several times, but every time I quit after reading only a few chapters. I read it carefully yesterday, by accident, or I started reading it from the first chapter. I felt really good after reading it The first reaction when I opened the book was a traditional apocalyptic novel. In the first chapter, the interaction between the father and daughter of the Ai family is understandable, whether it is describing Ai Dong's character or mushrooms The emotions for my daughter written in the book, but starting from the second chapter with Mo Ruo, seem redundant and trivial. The content of the first twenty chapters should be moved to the back, and a tense and exciting plot (special life form in chapter 15) or a special description (weird atmosphere, chapter 15) should be used to retain readers first, and try to keep the readers in the second chapter. Or Chapter 3, and then extend it to describe each character. The plot advances and the characters are unfolded together, and the first campaign between Ai Dong and Lin is as little as possible, with less emotional infusion and more moderate side description and analysis "Yes, I figured it out." "Uncle Ai, as you said, if it is "The words of the story" "Everyone has a reason to go all out for themselves" "Whether it's right or not" This is the end of a paragraph. This kind of description can be done in one or two sentences, leaving a space for the reader's imagination, and it does not appear redundant The real excitement begins in Chapter 50, this is very important, the slow-burning book is there This is a disadvantage The shortcoming of this book is that there are too many emotions, especially when there is a big plot. Mushroom may be very happy to write and give everything he has, but it is difficult for readers to accept such a hard core. It is more acceptable to have dry information and moisture, especially at the beginning. This kind of emotion can only be once at most at the beginning, and should be sidelined. The description allows readers to feel, imagine, and be infected by the description, rather than an outpouring of a lot of emotions (there is a book called Tomorrow's Tribulation, which has a similar rhythm to this book, you can refer to it) Needless to say the advantages, it is worthy of Mushroom, and it is more exciting than the previous books Finally, I would like to advise Mushroom to go Refer to Tomorrow's Tribulation, because it is really necessary. It is best to compare the plot and description to know how contemporary readers will accept various aspects of the book. I think Tomorrow's Tribulation has a pretty good grasp {"NickName":"Here's some fun for you","UserId":149278412}

I have read several books about mushrooms. Most of them are amazing at the beginning, but gradually become mediocre in the middle. They use long paragraphs to fill up the chicken soup, but in the later stage, they may collapse if they can't contain it. I hope this one lasts well! ! It doesn't matter if you go slower, you want to see a truly wonderful apocalyptic world That's all for the digression, let's talk about this book. The beginning of the warm daily life of a father and daughter. After waking up, they found that their daughter was not there, and then they embarked on the road to find and save her. The main line is this (fog), branch one: survive with the children and the truly kind and righteous people. Branch two: crack the secret of the apocalypse, and save the world by the way? (Maybe, I don't think Mushroom is so cliché). Judging from the above summary, it is actually a very clichéd story. The harder the environment, the more valuable justice becomes. Looking at all of Mushroom's novels, this idea is expressed. Although he bows his head to life, there is still something in his heart that he wants to insist on protecting. Mushroom's writing style and characterization of characters have always been unquestionable. It cannot be said that the supporting characters steal the spotlight from the protagonist. The personality of most characters determines his acting style. It can be said that Mushroom is a substitute narrative. Every supporting character is a side of Mushroom. The protagonist is gentle and delicate without losing courage, but is relatively mediocre. Lu Jinzhong Er feels dissatisfied. He lacks the dream of a hero, a kid is smart and precocious but has an unknown fragility, Gu Yu is gentle and tough on the inside, but there are also times when he is weak... It is these different characters that create a relatively real world, making people feel as if they really exist, so the depressed part makes people uncomfortable, and the darkness makes it difficult to accept. No matter what, I call the mushrooms without any brain🙏

I thought it was a warm flow, with a daughter seeking to survive in the end of the world. As a result, my daughter is gone. Then a classmate of my daughter came, and I thought it was going to be a journey to raise a girl and find her daughter (Gentlemen, I am really not a pervert, and besides... What is wrong with men being perverts). As a result, my daughter's classmate suddenly had no role to play, and then a little boy came in and instantly seemed to take over the main role. And judging from this, he should have been given a supporting role. Then the protagonist and Lin broke up unhappily, and then 99% of the people in the world disappeared. On the contrary, most of the criminals did not disappear, which made people feel a little uncomfortable. After all, good people are not willing to pay for their lives, and disasters are still happening. I feel a little disappointed. People's hearts are unpredictable. In the end of the world, without the constraints of rules, you may be able to see the shining points of human nature, but what you see more is ugly and disgusting, so I have never liked reading apocalyptic articles. The helplessness and despair when faced with ghosts and monsters later made people look a little tired, to be honest. The article is good, but it may not be what I like. After all, I have never been interested in this kind of apocalyptic article. Moreover, the supporting characters here are a bit overwhelming. Most people are egoists, but it seems that the supporting characters are all assigned to girls. The protagonist... Forget it, my ideas are too vulgar. Generally speaking, this book has a relatively positive outlook. Friends who like apocalyptic literature should give this book a high score.

After reading the book for ten thousand years without commenting, I couldn't help but say, it's so well written!

This book is such a pity. I don't know if it's because the author didn't plan to put it on the shelves, so he accelerated the writing process. I feel that the plot lacks some twists and turns. I suggest that the author put this book away for a while, start a new book first, and then slowly fill in the holes when he is in the mood. I believe that no reader will refuse and read it again in the future. I hope the author will start a new book soon and I will definitely follow the next one. I think it's better to let me put this book aside for a while before reading it.

Although the content is not much, after reading thirty chapters, I just feel that this is the only one of Mushroom's books that makes me feel amazing. Although the previous books are interesting, they will never have such a big impact, and most of them even abandon the book halfway. However, I sincerely hope that Mushroom can finish it and maintain this level.

99.9% Of people disappear, and there are survivors between the ages of 12 and 41, as well as little white children. There may be lickers. It could also be an illusion, posterity. Find missing people while establishing a new order. It feels like the end of the world, but there is a conclusion in the book, whether this group of people have entered a parallel universe but without those 99.9 People. But the original world lacked this part of the people. At the same time, some weird characters from film and television works are included. The protagonist and others are searching for the missing people in this world to survive. Just like the introduction says. Okay, it's all my own imagination. Come on, author, it's great.

According to the setting in the introduction, there are only about 4,500,000 Chinese people in the beginning, and I have only seen 26 chapters. Then there is the drama of struggle. The number is about the same as that of ancient dynasties. The setting is that there is a group of people who have a broader vision. Mushrooms should be able to arrange foreign forces, but I don't know if there is still the concept of a country. When I saw Mushroom's new book, I read it and felt very comfortable.

If you didn't say smartphones make people disappear, then will the army disappear? The military doesn't have smartphones, so why don't you really consider the actual situation?

It's really too strong. Reading this book always feels like I'm watching Junji Ito's horror collection + The Walking Dead. It not only contains elements of suspense and horror, but also vividly depicts human nature. What impressed me the most was the creation of the characters. Ai Dong, who is rational on the surface but very gentle on the inside, Wu Yulun, a primary school student who is unusually intelligent, Lu Jin, who is usually unreliable but very manly at critical moments, and Teacher Gu Yu, who is kind and caring and speaks with a sheep voice... Each character has his or her own unique charm, and even the supporting roles are impressive. It is really wonderful. I have to say that Mushroom's writing skills are getting stronger and stronger.

Mushroom always writes very carefully and thinks about and prepares a lot of things. The scene between Wu Yulun and Wang Zi is because the two people have different character settings and different standing positions, so they have different behaviors. 1. Wu Yulun has deep feelings for the prince, and the prince is just a dog to the male protagonist. Ai Dong was willing to let the prince stay just to reserve food, so he can accept the death of the prince. 2. Wu Yulun is a 12-year-old child. He can be impulsive and angry, but the male protagonist considers from a safety perspective that there are two adults opposite him, and they only have children and women. The decision to wait for Lu Bu to "feed" is very reasonable, and it can also be said to be in line with the character. 3. The male protagonist hesitated and made mistakes, but in the end he shot one of them decisively. It is through this process that the character can be established. 4. He and Wu Yulun were able to discover something was wrong with these two people from different angles at the same time, which proved that he never gave up his vigilance. He was not the kind of indecisive and timid leader. He was a very restrained but thoughtful person. Here is where each character will make different choices because of their own personality. Some you will like, some you will hate. Although every reader has the right to express his or her own opinion, on the Internet, "a good word will warm you in the winter, but a bad word will hurt you in the winter." I also hope that Mushroom can write confidently and firmly in the direction he wants to write, without being influenced by readers. Everyone will have their own interpretation, and I don't guarantee that my idea is correct. But all interpretations are based on the author's expressions. The author only needs to finish writing what he wants to write and then look at the rest. Don't take it too seriously. Hope the mushrooms come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Mushroom's Campaign XX from Scratch is a book that amazed me. It's a pity that I can't read the rest of it. I wonder what will happen to this one?

Okay, okay, familiar taste, not so many outrageous Station B memes

After I saw it...

Ai Dong. . . Uncle When you see a character, add it

Mushroom, I don't like a few of your books, but I like two of them very much. For example, this book is very comfortable until the three adults separate. But please don't put this book in the urban category, damn city, please put it in the horror category? Then I definitely won't click in. Your previous books have always been hahaha. I never thought that this one of yours would be so scary. Until now, I have been looking for random things to watch and dare not sleep, you know?

Why is this basic gadget no longer on the shelves? The writing is so good, what's wrong? Is the click-through rate low? Don't you all want to save it and put it on the shelf and watch it together? It's not on the shelves yet, what subscription can I get? The recommendation is not based on brushing. An old man like me gets 15 votes a day. What's going on? What happened?

Actually, I really want to watch a romantic comedy written by Mushroom.

Is the author a girl? So delicately written

The young man with high IQ is definitely growing up today!

It feels like the hero's wife was kidnapped and the plane crashed just to hide the kidnapping? Or was Wu silenced because he was too involved? It feels like a service like kidnapping and taking away the mastermind behind the scenes, right? Otherwise, if Wu had known earlier but allowed his daughter and husband to disappear... Later, if Lao Ai found out, I feel that Lao Ai would collapse...

This is a science fiction novel greater than The Three-Body Problem. It's a pity that there are too few people who know the goods.

I didn't find the private message entrance What can I do here directly?

Just finished reading this book today. . I originally thought this book would be my spiritual food for a few months. . . Woohoo. I seem to have ordered all of the author's completed books. I read half of the 300,000-word book this afternoon. . I feel like I really deserve it🦆 I just invested 10,000 points, it's just a small effort. . I hope the author will not forget his original intention. If possible, try to keep yourself. After all, there are not many novels that are attractive to Qidian, and there are even fewer good ones. .

I was wrong, I was really wrong, I shouldn't have read this book. It's not interesting at all, it's not satisfying. I should wait for 300,000 words before coming back.

Why haven't mushrooms become gods yet? Your words make me want to stop reading, and I am obviously very sleepy. . . But I was so excited until early morning

Chapter 21 can't stand it anymore. It's not that the author didn't write well. Think of something more. I hope there will never be a child like Wu Yulun, and I will never teach such a child. Smart people have no bottom line, or they don't know what the bottom line is, and they don't know the results of doing things. They are newborn calves, but they are very smart and can do big things, but the big things they did when they were young were big bombs. How terrible. When such a child is taught, he always feels that he will either be a genius or a serial killer in the future. For him, there is no black and white, no right or wrong in the world. He can do whatever he wants, be individualistic, and only love what he loves, and he will do whatever it takes to do so.

I stayed up until two o'clock in the morning last night and finished reading this book. I think a book conveys the author's three views. This book contains a lot of the author's thoughts, whether it is about the relationship between people or the structure of this society. I think the author is a very profound and knowledgeable person. This book also needs to be read by experienced and older people. But this kind of readership is a minority in this online literary circle. What a good book.

I went to read the uncensored original version elsewhere and gave it a thumbs up when I came back.

The cuttlefish next door posted PS at the end of the chapter due to review. I think this is one of the reasons why this book is not on the shelves.