Destiny Choice

Note: In the Foundation's worldview, if you "travel" no matter how you wear it, you will be discovered, and you can also use it to travel back. It is only a matter of time before you are discovered. I don't know how to write the rest, because I only read the first chapter. In short, SCP is really difficult to write, because you don't have a deep understanding of him, and you don't know his worldview. You can only borrow his routines. Although there are many sand sculptures in the foundation, there are also some very awesome ones, such as one-click restart.

The author has finished writing, everyone can leave

The protagonist always fights back and is beaten all over, which is very boring. It seems that the protagonist is very incompetent. He only pretends to be in front of his own people and is powerless against the enemy. Also, the protagonist should not have any negative emotions, dementia, and despair at all times. This will only make the readers lose trust in the protagonist, and eventually they will hate all the protagonist's actions. Finally, what is the use of preparing so much? In vain, he naturally guessed that the protagonist would fight back after being seriously injured. Also, your parents have been arrested and their lives are threatened. Why not eradicate the roots? You have already killed his son. Do you think that the other party is afraid of the power of the association and dare not touch your parents?

What about getting something for nothing? At most it can only be said to be non-equivalent exchange!

I found it quite interesting after reading the introduction. Is it okay to send contained objects? Hhh

Also, SCPs are full of monsters. What's the use of warriors? The only thing that can be contained is their faces and life piles. Moreover, the foundation's style is to keep people from knowing about it. Those who know about it are sent to be D-class. Do these older rich people know about the organization?

I'm speechless. What's 120 calories? Can't you just write 12 strength? How complicated. Drunk.

The author can be said to be very nb, writing about cerebral palsy to make it even more cerebral palsy.

The beginning is good, but then it becomes a trivial article. It intensifies conflicts without thinking. It seems that the Black People's Association needs to be exterminated. I will be the ruler instead.

The title of the book doesn't match, the introduction doesn't match, everything doesn't match,,,

Change the title of the book, the text is wrong.

The author came to write a book before he even graduated from elementary school. He doesn't even understand what the simplest thing of getting something for nothing means, so you dare to write a book?

Chapter 37: No matter what age, he still looks like a dog licker, he doesn't want to see a woman cry, and he refuses to hit her. Is this respect for women? This is discrimination. In the end, he was accepted as a disciple very bluntly. The most outrageous thing is that the woman burned an important-looking rare object belonging to the protagonist in order to make the protagonist lose his mind.

Is the main world the protagonist is currently in the protagonist's original world? In other words, the protagonist changed after getting the golden finger.

It's too embarrassing to write after chapter 20, brother. . . Delete and rewrite those pictures. I guess a lot of people can't stand those pictures.

After reading the synopsis, I thought the protagonist would get some weird things for free to cause trouble and destroy the world. But I quickly slipped away after reading the comments.

False headlines, false propaganda, and urban pretending to slap people in the face are not just a mobile game IP exchange game for money.

The beginning is good, forget it later

The first few pictures were okay, but starting from Chapter 20 onwards, the supporting characters all started to lose their wits, which was really embarrassing for people watching.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like the protagonist is like a puppet controlled by the system. I feel so embarrassed.

Very strange setting, how to hide the contained objects? There are so many people dying, and they are happening all the time, but the number is small, and they can actually hide it from ordinary people. In the movie Men in Black, only a few people died. Here you have millions in a city, and since the birth of human beings, the number of people who have died has been in the hundreds of millions. How can you hide it? A pig's trotter can walk around with a bow, I'm sick of it

Once it gets to the city, the content almost turns into shit. It might as well just write about another world.

The subject matter is good, and I read more than 50 chapters of it, but I couldn't stand it any longer.

This golden finger has no qualifications at all. It's all decided by fate and you have to do it yourself. How is this different from getting rewards after completing a posted task?

The author remembered to change master into master. Don't get confused, they have different meanings.

. . . . . More than 800,000 words. . Less than 100 comments. . You don't need to read the book to know that it is basically impossible to read. . . There may be exceptions. . . . I have yet to come across one. .

Chapter 22 persuaded me to give up. I couldn't enjoy it. I felt that the writing on such a good subject was too much.

The main reason is that the introduction looks too NB, but in reality it seems that the protagonist is working hard to improve, and the psychological gap is too big.

The first 20 chapters really blew me away, they had the potential to become a god, and then 21-22 chapters made me vomit, it was amazing.

The data is bad, the protagonist's strength has not improved a bit in dozens of chapters, and the passion for reading is gone.