Journey to Eternity

To be honest, the writing is not very good, but it is normal to write it for the first time. Some descriptions are not complete. This is the case in the first chapter. "Every house is dark", at least it should be darkness in front of every house. There is also a lack of description. "His face is twisted in an abnormal way". This is really a bit... Anyway, there are many problems, but slowly work hard and the writing will get better and better.

This is my first time writing a book. Because I prefer reading novels, I also want to try writing. Please be tolerant of the shortcomings. If there are friends who like killing and decisive articles, you can click and add them to your collection! ! 😚😚

I plan to change the cover. I searched around and found this one. What do you guys think?

It's pretty good. At least it whetted my appetite. But the number of words is a bit short. I hope there will be more as possible 🌹

You are so sexy, eunuchs are all so fresh and refined 😎😎😎😎

I am the person who talked to you in the topic circle before. Let me briefly say: You said that you have made some changes, but I can't see any difference from the first time I read it. Maybe you changed some details, but I didn't notice that the information I received and the feeling I received were the same as when I read it the first time. You can take a look at it from the client to see what the effect is. Anyway, it seems to me that there are obstacles. So, my evaluation remains unchanged: the book is a good book and the author is very careful, but it will not have a wide audience and not many people will read it. I can't tell you the specific content. These are my feelings when reading as a bookworm. I have no specific suggestions. If you don't like it, just ignore it.

Already collected. I hope to revisit "The Eyes of Death" and vote for each other.

Boss! The language is concise and powerful, the story content is clear, and it has a strong sense of reality. Although the atmosphere is scary, it is not solemn in temperament and has a light and natural feeling. I personally feel like I can't fault it, haha. To put it bluntly, I feel like some of the descriptions have little to do with the main plot, haha, but it's already great. I highly recommend it! Come on, author! |･ω･｀)